语法课件-写作二-如何写正确的句子-话题：行为习惯.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to write correct sentences?,Writing,（二）,Topic,:,behaviors in public,What is a sentence?,He,drops,litter.,S,ubject,(,主语,),V,erb,O,bject,(,宾语,),He,sleeps,in class.,We,help,each other,.,Ms Dai,teaches,us,English,seriously,.,We,keep,our,classroom,clean,.,We,are,polite,.,There,are,some teachers,listening to us here.,S+V,S+V+O,S+V+O1+O2,S+V+O+OC,S+V+P,There be,句型,Enjoy two long sentences!,无论句子有多长，它都是由,简单句,构成。,主语,和谓语,动词,是简单句,基本单位,。,When,we,make,some mistakes in our English,compositions,Ms Dai,my English teacher,always,helps,us correct them,so,we,learn,a lot,from that.,If,someone,looks,very proud and satisfied,with himself,we,will,say,he,looks,like,the cat,that,ate,the canary(,金丝雀,).,satisfied,composition,主语,和,谓语动词,句子的核心,I,hope,my high school,can more interesting!,云渊,I,hope,that,my high school,can,be,more interesting.,Dont talk in class!(,祈使句,),What a nice day!(,感叹句,),I,have,a friend,who,have,long hair.(,朱星,),I,have,a friend,who,has,long hair.,1,、一个句子中的动词不能缺！,2,、主语和谓语动词要保持一致！,1.Not only my,techer,but also my,classmates,_ excellent.,2.,Everyone,except the twins _ a dictionary.,3.Both,you,and,I,_ having an English class.,4.Neither you nor,I,_ having a Chinese class.,5.,The earth,_ around the sun.,6.,Ms Dai,_ worked here for over 22 years.,are,has,are,am,goes/moves,has,The mistakes we have made.,I eat vegetables and fruit.Can keep healthy.,I often read books.Because can open up ones,eyes to the outside word.(,徐汉国,),I eat vegetables and fruit.,They,can keep,me,healthy.I often read books because,they,can,open up,my,eyes to the outside,world,.,I eat vegetables and fruit so that I can keep,myself,healthy.And,I often read books to open,up my eyes to the outside world.,学会句子的,变通,，用,自己会的语言,写句子！,Students are important to study.(,陈敏敏,),To study,is,important for students.,It,is,important for students,to study,.,Ill graduation.(,善宁,),Ill graduate.,错误归纳：,句法、词法、词义（词性）、拼写等。,The mistakes we have made.,Talk about,behaviors,in public!,Its very important for us to,behave,well in public!,We,should/shouldnt,People,are/arent supposed to,It,is polite/impolite to,It,is believed that we should,I,think/am sure that,Helping,others is helping ourselves.,Different subjects can make the article nicer!,不同的主语使文章更美！,Practice!,Look and say!,The boy is impolite.,The boy,who drops litter in public,is impolite.,Its impolite for the boy to drop litter in public.,We dont like people who are impolite.,Dropping litter in public is impolite.,It is certain/believed that,I strongly believe people who,What the woman said is wrong.,spit,smoke,cut in line!,speak impolite words.,为配合我市“礼仪温州”活动的开展以“,How to behave well?”,为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中生的身份写一篇,100,词,左右的短文参赛。,提示,：1,）守时，不说脏话；（,2,）礼貌待人，热心帮助；,（,3,）遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；（,4,）,注意：（,1,）文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；,（,2,）内容可适当扩展。,主题句,Good behavior is very important in our modern society.,There is an activity about manners in Wenzhou.,I think its very meaningful.As a student,审,为配合我市“礼仪温州”活动的开展以“,How to behave,weell,?”,为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中生的身份写一篇,100,词,左右的短文参赛。,提示,：（,1,）守时，不说脏话；（,2,）礼貌待人，热心帮助；,（,3,）遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；（,4,）,注意：（,1,）文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；,（,2,）内容可适当扩展。,Be on time,2.dont say impolite words.,3.Be polite/friendly to people,4.Help people warmly,5.Obey traffic rules,6.dont drop litter,7.dont smoke in,pulic,8.dont cut in line,列,Be on time,2.dont say impolite words.,3.Be polite/friendly to people,4.Help people warmly,5.Obey traffic rules,6.dont drop litter,7.dont smoke in,pulic,8.dont cut in line,扩,连,also,and,so,whats more,besides,on the one hand,on the other hand,however,to ones surprise,to be,honest,as a student,as you can see,for example,审,列,扩,连,查,抄,主题句,结束语,1,、明白主语和谓语动词在句子中的重要性；,2,、关注主谓一致；,3,、使用不同的主语使文章变得丰富；,4,、学会句子的变通，用自己会的语言写作；,5,、写作过程：审、列、扩、连、查、抄！,6,、注意一定要写加上主题句和结束语！,Summary,Todays Homework,Finish off the composition,