英语中考英语书面表达综合测试含答案12.doc

英语】 中考英语书面体现综合测试（含答案）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
假如你是九年级学生李华，你美国笔友Billy发来邮件问询你平时锻炼状况。请你根据如下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：
1. 你近来正忙于为即将到来体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 简介你平时锻炼状况：
（1）每天锻炼时间：不到一种半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作规定：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 可合适加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，体现精确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，简介自已平时锻炼状况，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表达很快乐收到Billy来信，接下来简介我平时锻炼状况，最终指出锻炼给我带来好处以及我提议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2． 世界卫生组织一项研究汇报显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关重视点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。如下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供信息，用英语写一篇调查汇报，陈说学校调查成果，并表明你自已观点和理由。
我校学生近视问题调查
状况
60%本校学生戴眼镜。
原因
1. 不良看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书……
2. 长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑……
3. 学习时间长，作业多……
提议
1. 认真做眼保健操
2. 多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益食物
3. ……

参照词汇： 近视 nearsighted
注意： 1. 内容须包括所提醒信息，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自已真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中有关信息简介一下怎样保护视力。所提供表格中列举了近视原因和提议。重要从原因和提议两个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含表格上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 因此保持良好视力对每个人都很重要。
本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.
【高分句型二】
And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书时候，你应当把它从你眼睛里移开一英尺。
when you read是由when引导时间状语从句。

3． 书面体现
暑假即未来临,对于怎样安排孩子初中毕业后第一种假期,家长们和孩子自已有着各自想法。根据下表提醒,写一篇英语短文,描述他们不一样见解,同步刊登你自已对暑假安排观点。
Parents' opinions
Get ready for high school. Do some housework…
Kid's opinions
Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing…
Your opinion
…

注意]
（1）表格中观点仅供参照,容许合适发挥;
（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
（4）词数:不少于80。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
______________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点合适发挥．写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；结合材料内容，可知本文重要是第三人称，一般目前时态进行论述．语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯．合适使用连词，做到上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了某些好句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

4．人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇有关学生网上交友短文，简介人们不一样观点，并体现自已见解。
赞成理由
反对理由
你见解
1. 广交朋友
2. 可自由体现思想
3. 有助于外语学习
1. 挥霍时间
2. 影响学习
3. 也许上当受骗（be cheated）
1. ...
2. ...

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。
2. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友人观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友观点，第三段要表述作者自已观点。
【详解】
本篇作文规定作者就上网交友刊登意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提醒，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以合适发挥，写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文紧密联络，要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你见解。注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．书面体现
假如你是华,你英国笔友对中国文化很感爱好,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你家乡一安徴一游,请你根据如下提醒用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.提议
提醒词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可合适增长细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自已真实校名和人名
4.开头和结展已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章提纲，审题可知，短文应从如下几种内容论述：首先简介家乡位置；然后简介来这里最佳时候；接下来是简介家乡景点和文化，并给出提议。短文应使用一般目前时，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应合理安排几种内容，分清主次，并注意上下文连贯。此外，英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，写完整句子。如可以使用简单句构造，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提高文章档次，也应穿插某些并列句构造或复合句，以及使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定邀请Dave来自已家乡旅游，并简介了家乡景点和文化。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容愈加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后详细简介了家乡位置、景点、文化等，并提出了提议。全文论述清晰，层次清晰，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文以一般目前时来论述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式变化。句式构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，尚有某些好句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

6．环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中所有提醒内容，条理清晰，作合适发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即制止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想提议
环境可以变得更好......

Change for a better China
_____________
____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。规定中已经给出了部分提醒，动笔先应先认真阅读提醒，确定写作内容。写作中注意体现观点时常用句式，注意在体现不一样观点时，连词使用。内容上应注意描述全面性；语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧紧围绕规定对家乡做了简单简介，内容完整，用了表格中信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了某些好句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

7． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日作业究竟是不是必要。首先需要陈说正反两方面观点，另一方面结合自已实际经验，刊登自已观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑精确，注意对使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自已观点。
写作亮点：首先用一种自然段来阐明写作主题，体现出自已观点（认为作业是很必要），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样句型。另一方面，开始详细陈说观点，陈说时候要合适使用实例，有关用到短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最终可以用说理方式来简介做作业必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者深度思考，总体来说杰出地完毕了既定写作任务。

8．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个都市飞行时常、气温、旅馆状况。食物等有关信息，规定考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自已要去暑假旅游目地。虽然字数规定不多，但可以很好地考察考生英语写作基本功，需要考生对常用英语句型纯熟掌握。熟悉英语体现方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。此外，一定要注意题目规定，把每一种信息都进行比较，不要有遗漏。
写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目规定选择了都市A作为自已暑假旅游目地。对于都市A缺陷，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于长处则重点突出，由于在都市A可以做诸多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，例如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择都市A原因时，用了that引导宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较纯熟英语写作水平。

9．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网但愿对杭州茶文化进行宣传。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇简介，词数80左右。
What is Longjing Tea famous for?
Good taste
What is it used for?
Keep healthy
How is it produced?
Grow on the sides of mountains ...
What’s the best place to learn about it?
Why?
Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...

Longjing Tea
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