2025年九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编模拟试题及解析.doc

九年级上册英语英语书面体现汇编模拟试题及解析

一、中考英语书面体现汇编
1．（·天津中考模拟）假设你是 Susan，在家里你父母总是对你有诸多规定，你与否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样处理？请你根据下列要点提醒用英语写一篇短文。
（1）父母规定你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉
（2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。
（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。
（4）你认为……。
My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family.__________________________________________

【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你规定过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是怎样处理。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, communicate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do be busy with以及get on well with。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

2．（·湖南中考模拟） 阅读可以使人开阔视野，阅读可使人心旷神怡，不管是参与中国中文听写大会，还是中国诗词大会，都需要有良好阅读基础。下面请大家谈谈阅读好处并在生活中养成良好阅读习惯。
注意：作文字数，不低于60字.
参照词汇：increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills
learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorful
Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading
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Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without going out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful.
Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading
【解析】
此篇书面体现是根据提醒简介读书好处及养成良好阅读习惯。文章时态以写作时为主。写作时注意firstly，secondly，thirdly，Finally使用。开篇点题，分析读书好处。最终发出呼吁让人们读书。

3．（·天津中考模拟）书面体现
86.目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播.有人通过看历史剧来理解历史，有人选择读史书来理解历史，你选择哪种措施？理由是什么？请你根据如下内容写一篇英语短文。
措施
理由
看历史剧
情节有趣、通俗易懂；
读历史书
资料真实、引人深思；
……（你选择）
……（你理由）

规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.________________________________________________
【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.
Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.
I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表，规定简介人们通过什么方式来理解历史。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用对英语句子把这些内容体现出来，在此基础上亦可合适发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出要点。根据材料可知本文重要是应用第一般目前时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间逻辑关系，语意连贯。

4．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习最佳方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据如下思维导图提醒，写一篇短文，并刊登你见解。
注意：
1. 要点齐全，合适发挥；
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当格合理运用在短文中；
3. 词数：100词左右；

【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非谓语动词构造Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京楷模优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充足体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做意义。
提醒词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提醒问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，详细写出怎样做以及这样做意义。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，人称用是第一人称复数形式，时态重要用是一般目前时，描述详细怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

6．（·北京中考模拟）环境保护人人有责， 假如我们每一种人都能珍爱漂亮地球 保护自然资源，相信我们家园会越来越美好。
某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望。
提醒词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提醒问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?
Now there are many environmental problems.________________
【答案】例文
Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.
I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.
I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于阐明文写作，写作时要把我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望所有包括。
例文点评：例文采用是三段式；用第一人称来论述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用是一般目前时，描述提议时，描写详细，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。
句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，必要时可合适运用表达转折、因果、并列、比较等关系连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最终，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

7．（·扬州中学教育集团树人学校初三）目前有些学生缺乏“感恩”意识，看待家人、朋友、老师等很冷漠，并且行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供信息，以 “Learn to Express Thanks” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
学生现实状况
认为父母供他们吃好穿好是应当，不懂得感恩
为何要感恩
1、父母养育之恩；2、老师授业之恩；3、朋友……
怎样感恩
……（至少两点）

规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中有关信息，并合适发挥；3）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.”_____________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. However, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.
I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties.
In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them.和They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

8．（·重庆一中中考模拟）书面体现。
“开心是暑假如期而至；期望是我们独自旅行；烦恼是父母不予支持。我们，可以独自出游么？”这是本月我校英语“烦恼墙”上最令人关注内容，并引起了大家热烈讨论。同为青少年你觉得在没有父母陪伴下出游可行吗？请你按规定写一篇英语作文。
参照要点：
1. 解读“烦恼墙”内容；
2. 陈说你观点及理由；
3. 提出合理有关提议。
规定：
1. 词数80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自已真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.
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【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is coming, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to accompany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our self-care capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important self-help knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题议论文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三部分：
第一部分：阐明论点。解读“烦恼墙”内容并陈说自已观点——青少年应当被容许独自旅行。
第二部分：主体部分。分条逐一阐明理由并提出合理有关提议。
第三部分：再次重申论点。

9．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微局限性道,但也能有所作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
规定:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，简介自已曾经做过一件令自已感到自豪事情。作文是开放式，题目中只给了主题，详细写作内容，需要学生们自已发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自已做过事情，且是能让自已感到自豪，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分构成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，详细描述事情过程；最终一部分简要描写一下自已感受。写作时应注意英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式英语，应从句子整体构造出发，使用较常见、易于把握简单句构造，如主谓宾或主系表构造。为提高作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感慨句等特殊句式构造。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，以使文意连贯。