2025年中考英语书面表达易错题集锦名师教育13.doc

中考英语书面体现易错题集锦-名师教育经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
我英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多经验与措施，请你向你表弟简介你做法，根据下面表格中内容，按规定用英语写一篇短文，
多听
听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松......
多说
运用英语，增强能力与信心......
多读书
开阔视野，理解英语文化......
语法规则
更好地理解与运用......
写作
写写平常生活......
其他
......

规定：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作合适发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。
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【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感慨句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句构造Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2． 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和规定，给这位家长答复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自已见解。
2. 陈说自已理由。
3. 提出至少2条提议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长博客进行答复。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表明自已见解，接下来陈说自已理由，最终简介自已提议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面体现
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，通过一段时间适应，同学们发现目前课堂跟此前比较发生了某些变化，请你根据所给提醒以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右文章，谈谈你感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
规定：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；
3.文章必须包括所提供所有重要信息，并作合适发挥。

The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.
【解析】
【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，通过一段时间适应，同学们发现目前课堂跟此前比较发生了某些变化，请你根据所给提醒以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右文章，谈谈你感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁文中运用了某些好句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4． 书面体现
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
1.随地可见，出行以便
2.有益健康，减少污染
3.费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
1.未及时归还
2.占道挡路
你观点
我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自已对共享单车见解。题目中运用表格形式给我们列举了短文重要内容，包括：共享单车优势；存在问题以及你自已对这件事情见解。前两个内容我们需要根据表格提醒用对英语体现，而自已观点则需要学生们自已发挥想象力，组织语言，并体现出来，规定至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时态，第三人称来论述，短文可以提成两段或者三段，一种内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，变化文章句式节奏，使用不一样句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目规定所有信息。短文提成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车某些长处；第三段简介了某些问题；最终一段作者提出了自已见解。分段论述使文章构造清晰，主题明确，有层次性。另一方面短文中使用了恰当时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般目前时态为主，语法规范，用词精确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几种长句；此外文章中还使用了恰当连接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。对文章行文连贯、语句通顺、体现流畅。

5．书面体现
如下图画展现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生事情。请用英语写一篇约100词短文。
规定：1.完整论述图画内容。
2.简要陈说你从中学到了什么。
【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.
Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，规定我们仔细观测图片，弄清晰里面发生事情，用英语将这些内容完整地论述出来，并简单陈说自已从中学到东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，理解图片中所发生事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到词汇、短语等，或者列出大概写作提纲。通过度析可知，这篇短文讲述是过去发生事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展先后次序，这样可以使文章条理清晰。还需注意是英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句基本句型，如主谓宾构造或主系表构造。在文章中点缀几种并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达信息，表述精确。作者在短文中论述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生先后次序论述，条理清晰。文章最终两句话也点明了文章主题。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、精确。短文中还使用了较丰富句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

6．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做，以及你感受。
提醒词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提醒问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提醒写一篇自已在初中生活中坚持做事；文中写明自已是怎么做并谈谈自已感受。
【详解】
1.本篇规定根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自已坚持做一件事，根据提醒，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般目前时。书写时要紧紧围绕主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自已坚持做事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自已起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到目前比此前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自已影响；文章构造清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了诸多短语和重点句型。例如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句体现多样。

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7．书面体现
为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷身份，根据下列表格中要点提醒，用英语向同学们简介足球这项运动并谈谈自已梦想。
常 识

历史悠久，深受爱慕
世界杯4年举行一次

好 处

男生女生皆可参与
利于培养团体精神
考生自拟（至少1点）

偶 像

梅西，有足球天赋

梦 想

考生自拟（至少1点）

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文中不得真实人名、校名等有关信息。
参照词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by .

Thank you for your attention.
【答案】Dear classmates，
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by ．
Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题规定按提纲提醒，简介足球运动并谈谈自已梦想。规定仔细阅读有关提醒，弄清试题提供所有信息，明确本文重要从三个方面来写：简介足球运动及其好处；说说自已偶像；谈谈自已梦想。要根据提醒情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要体现内容确定句子时态、语态；语言体现要符合英语习惯。
写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，不过句意体现清晰；同步，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使体现生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清晰。

8． 中国老式文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国老式文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国老式文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，简介你校上周举行“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你收获与感受。
提醒词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提醒问题： ● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来论述讲成语故事活动；由于活动已经举行，因此时态采用一般过去时；对参与活动过程描写完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。
句型：被动句型。

9．书面体现
中考后暑假即将开始，你和某些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供信息，将你选择用英文向同学们简介。
Britain

Australia
Time
July 1 - July 14

Time
August 15 -August 24
Activities
visit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫）
visit the British Museum （大
英博物馆）
watch football matches
…

Activities
visit the Sydney Opera House
travel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸）
have fun with kangaroos and koalas
…

Attention
changeable weather

Attention
winter
Cost
20,000 yuan

Cost
16,000 yuan

规定：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家所有信息及选择理由；
2. 结合游玩国家状况，自拟但愿可以安排活动，并提出1-2点出游注意事项；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清晰、书写规范；
5. 不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.

I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be