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英语）英语书面体现练习题

一、英语书面体现
1．书面体现
李华所在国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不一样国家同学简介中国老式节日——端午节，内容包括：
1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）
2. 节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原
3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……
4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个老式节日
注意：1. 词数80~100；
2.可合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人有关信息；
4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不一样国家同学简介中国老式节日——端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We welcome to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来简介端午节由来以及庆祝活动，最终欢迎大家一起体验这个老式节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
伴随电子时代到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国老式文化传承面临着巨大挑战。有人认为学校应当开设老式文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设老式文化课见解。
Your opinion
necessary or unnecessary
Your reasons
the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,
spread, develop
Your suggestion
…

Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设老式文化课见解。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了中国老式文化面对问题，接下来简介我认为开设老式文化课必要性原因，最终号召更多学校开设老式文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路

你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

4．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提醒用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同学协助；祝愿，在写作中合适发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿格式，没有出现自已真实姓名。

5．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

6．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀老式文化, 某双语杂志将举行征文活动来简介中国经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一种选题。请你根据下面内容提醒, 用英语写一篇短文参与此活动。
内容提醒：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过简介这个故事, 刊登你见解或者观点。
规定：
1. 可以合适增长细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校真实名称、老师和同学真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，重要简介中国经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目是宣传和弘扬中华优秀老式文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词过去式。作文要包含材料上所有信息，通过简介这个故事，刊登见解或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系具有条理性。

7．书面体现
我校决定让学生轮番打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈反响，请你把下列不一样意见整理成一篇书面材料，汇报给学校。
同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应当学会做艰苦工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人劳动。
不一样意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应当做事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提醒：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干规定，这是一篇见解类作文，那么首先得点明讨论话题，然后分别写出不一样人群对此事见解，时态以一般目前时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth协助某人做某事；get sick生病。
亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场剧烈争论。目前完毕时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习怎样做困难工作好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

8．书面体现
为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举行以"My Mother"为主题征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供信息，写一篇短文，简介你母亲和你之间故事。

参照词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to…
提醒：
1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做事和你将为母亲所做事各一件，并论述原因；
2）请注意短文构造层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；
3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4）文中不得出现学校和个人有关信息。
My  Mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my
mother．___．
【答案】My mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，规定以"My Mother"为主题写一篇短文简介你母亲和你之间故事，参与某英语网站正在举行征文活动。在写作时，注意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章连贯性，要层次清晰，要点分明，中心突出。同步要注意语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯；尽量使用自已熟悉单词句式，最佳不要写太长复合句；尽量选用简单易拼写单词，保证对率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，必要时可合适运用表达转折、因果、并列、比较等关系连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同步注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最终要细心复核检查，保证对无误。

9．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个都市飞行时常、气温、旅馆状况。食物等有关信息，规定考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自已要去暑假旅游目地。虽然字数规定不多，但可以很好地考察考生英语写作基本功，需要考生对常用英语句型纯熟掌握。熟悉英语体现方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。此外，一定要注意题目规定，把每一种信息都进行比较，不要有遗漏。
写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目规定选择了都市A作为自已暑假旅游目地。对于都市A缺陷，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于长处则重点突出，由于在都市A可以做诸多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，例如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择都市A原因时，用了that引导宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较纯熟英语写作水平。

10．中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好自已，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据如下要点提醒，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文简介你曾经读过一本书或—首诗，并提议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提醒：
读书重要性
1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；
2. 提高自我，增强自信……
读过一本书或
一首诗
1. 作品内容简介；
2. 读书感悟及对自已影响。
多读书，读好书
1. 运用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书好习惯；

2. 多读经典文学作品……

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不得出现自已真实姓名、学校及地名。
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参照词汇：classic 经典作品； open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提高自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。
Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.

【答案】Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This p