2025年英语九年级下册英语书面表达解题方法和技巧及练习题含解析.doc

英语】九年级下册英语书面体现(一)解题措施和技巧及练习题含解析

一、英语书面体现
1．假如你即将在学校英语爱好小组活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提醒如下:（1）几种月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3） 目前，奶奶比此前健康了，有了诸多朋友。（4） 有些邻居故意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
规定：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提醒写一篇学校英语爱好小组活动中发言稿。要注意伴随文章推进时态变化，一开始应当选择一般过去时，而背面应当选用一般目前时，最终体现自已观点时候也应当使用一般目前时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出也许会用到好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参照词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中在写作中注意运用恰当连词，使文章愈加顺畅，自然。

2．书面体现
假定你是李华，近来你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你英国朋友Peppa向你来信
问询讨论状况。请你用英语写封回信，简单简介如下讨论成果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参照词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我英国朋友Peppa写信，简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行讨论状况。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头我要简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来简介我们为低碳生活可以做事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

4．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据如下信息内容提醒，写一篇有关校园安全英语小短文。
提醒：1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
规定： 1. 语句通顺，体现精确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以合适发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提醒，可知本文重要从三个方面进行论述，注意围绕要点组织材料，合适发挥。根据材料内容确定重要句子时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。

5．立即要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍。班主任决定在下周举行一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参与。请你根据如下提醒，写一篇发言稿。
美好回忆
1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师协助；
3.获得互换生机会； 4.参与志愿者活动。
不开心事情
1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。
未来展望
1. 升上理想学校；
2. 能认识更多朋友；
3. 请你补充（至少两点）

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中运用表格形式，展示了文章详细内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时和一般过去时，注意根据体现需要使用对时态，并注意谓语动词对形式。内容应重要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里美好回忆；然后是不开心事情；最终展望自已未来高中生活。表格中有非常详细提醒，但不能逐词翻译表格中短语，应把他们变成自已话，并用英语体现出来。写作时应注意文章中应包括表格中所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分内容中还需要自已发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。此外注意句式构造要符合英语体现习惯，用完整句子体现。句式构造可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式使用，提高作文档次。同步语句之间使用合适连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，回忆了自已初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，构造清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，简介了过去美好回忆以及不开心事情；最终一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，注意了动词对形式变化。句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。语言精确、得体，体现自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

6．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参与多种户外活动。为了倡导中学生靠近大自然，某中学生英文报举行了一次征文活动，请你根据如下问题，用英语写一篇短文参与征文。
提醒：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.

【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面体现以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提醒可知本文会使用到一般目前时态，注意某些常见句式应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富语句，注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系，最终最佳要体现出人物感想和见解。
写作亮点：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富句型，例如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增长了信息容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错范文。

7． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.

Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日作业究竟是不是必要。首先需要陈说正反两方面观点，另一方面结合自已实际经验，刊登自已观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑精确，注意对使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自已观点。
写作亮点：首先用一种自然段来阐明写作主题，体现出自已观点（认为作业是很必要），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样句型。另一方面，开始详细陈说观点，陈说时候要合适使用实例，有关用到短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最终可以用说理方式来简介做作业必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者深度思考，总体来说杰出地完毕了既定写作任务。

8．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

9． 假如你是李华，你英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件体现了想参与你校暑期为外国学生举行汉语夏令营愿望，但愿你告知活动举行详细时间地点，活动安排以及你提议。
提醒词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提醒问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese cul