英语中考英语书面表达难题及答案1.doc

英语】中考英语书面体现难题及答案（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．假如你即将在学校英语爱好小组活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提醒如下:（1）几种月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3） 目前，奶奶比此前健康了，有了诸多朋友。（4） 有些邻居故意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
规定：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提醒写一篇学校英语爱好小组活动中发言稿。要注意伴随文章推进时态变化，一开始应当选择一般过去时，而背面应当选用一般目前时，最终体现自已观点时候也应当使用一般目前时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出也许会用到好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参照词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当连词，使文章愈加顺畅，自然。

2．亲爱同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有诸多感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右短文。
提醒：
1.个人基本状况简介
2.校园（校园洁净而漂亮，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,常常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。
规定：
1. 文章包含以上提醒内容，合适发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我个人状况，接下来简介我们校园，老师和同学，最终对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．假定你是David，来自美国，你QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你理解有关这方面状况。请认真阅读下面邮件，并根据信中内容和实际用英语答复，可以有合适发挥。
To: davidwoodlandschool@
From: limingsunshineschool@
Subject: Volunteering
Dear David，
I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions?
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?
●Do you have any problems with volunteering?
●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes，
Li Ming

注意：1.词数90左右。答复信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.答复中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
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I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.
It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，简介暑假做志愿者状况。。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到快乐，接下来简介我们可以从事志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来某些问题，最终我但愿你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心感动，存在于每个人心中。但诸多人缺乏不是感动，而是一种显示感动勇气。请为你身边人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据如下提醒要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我要点赞人，接下来简介他状况，最终指出我从他身上学到东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

5．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略

7．写作
某英文网站“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括如下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。
2.文中不得出现也许透考生真实身份任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题材料作文，需要逐条完毕要点问题回答，描述一次自已让他人开心快乐经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，另一方面要用恰当语言和衔接手段把这五个问题回答联络在一起，变成一篇短文，同步也要注意在描述过去故事时候要对运用过去时态。
写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应当完整地展现故事，需要加上必要背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配对使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（伴随时间流逝），“made great progress”（获得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（综上所述）等等短语使用对。在收尾部分体现了作者积极人生态度，表达假如尚有机会自已还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章构造完整，表意愈加清晰。

8． 朋友是我们生活构成部分，他们总是在我们最需要协助时候陪伴我们。你最佳朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们友谊？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据如下提醒写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要简介你最佳朋友外貌和性格;
2. 简介和你朋友之间发生一件令人难忘事；
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间友谊
规定：
1. 语句连贯穿顺，文章衔接紧密
2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
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【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：这是一种提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目规定可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般目前时和一般过去时。我们要做就是用对英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表构造，注意主谓一致关系。简介发生一件难忘事情，要用到一般过去时态。此外在写作时可以合适使用某些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。
【点睛】
人物简介是记叙文中常见一种写作类型。内容可以是简介自已也可以简介他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、爱好爱好，有时也可以包括平常活动。时态为一般目前时态。在简介长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来简介某人穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来简介专长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来简介某人最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

9．书面体现
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你计划。
活动
毕业晚会
时间
6月28日晚上七点
地点
学校礼堂school hall
参与者
全体初三学生和老师
活动内容
1.
邀请校长作演讲；

2.
互赠礼品送祝福；

3.
各班演出精彩节目

4.

规定：1.要点完整，可合适发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.对使用语态，语法对，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面体现重要是推荐自已毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关