2025年英语中考英语书面表达单元测试版附答案1.doc

英语】 中考英语书面体现单元测试（word版附答案）（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和规定，给这位家长答复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自已见解。
2. 陈说自已理由。
3. 提出至少2条提议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长博客进行答复。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表明自已见解，接下来陈说自已理由，最终简介自已提议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校利和弊；读走读学校利和弊；你选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容反复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥。
A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, ________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。第二段要写详细论述读寄宿学校利弊；读走读学校利弊。第三段要表述作者自已选择和理由。
【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些规定？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？阐明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定期态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用合适句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落构造句型及关键词句完毕文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增长了文章亮点。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

3．人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇有关学生网上交友短文，简介人们不一样观点，并体现自已见解。
赞成理由
反对理由
你见解
1. 广交朋友
2. 可自由体现思想
3. 有助于外语学习
1. 挥霍时间
2. 影响学习
3. 也许上当受骗（be cheated）
1. ...
2. ...

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。
2. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友人观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友观点，第三段要表述作者自已观点。
【详解】
本篇作文规定作者就上网交友刊登意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提醒，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以合适发挥，写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文紧密联络，要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你见解。注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

4．书面体现
假如你是李明，你英国笔友Jack来信问询你家乡与否有雾霾天气，状况怎样。请你按照如下提醒给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生多次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气危害，正在采用多种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在平常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参照词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. ______________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李明身份给自已英国笔友写信，告诉他有关家乡雾霾状况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提醒，来组织语言，充实内容。首先简介去年家乡雾霾状况严重；然后简介为减少雾霾人们采用了某些措施；最终简介一下你自已在平常生活中应当怎么做。因此文章应重要提成三段，一种内容一段。文章内容中论述状况不一，时态不能统一，根据体现需要使用对时态，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时，应注意英语句式体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，写完整句子，运用简单句基本句型，使用恰当词汇和短语。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文中作者根据题目规定简介了自已家乡治理雾霾状况，并结合自身实际状况，讲述了自已平常生活中是怎样做。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章构造清晰，提成了三段，每一段中心明确，意思体现清晰、明了。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，作者根据体现需要使用了一般过去时、一般未来时态和一般未来时态，动词形式变化精确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式体现符合英语习惯。句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了某些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中很好句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

5． “漂亮琼海我家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们生活环境得到了很大改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞文明行为随地可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

规定：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提醒，并做合适拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
______________________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创立文明都市、创立健康都市，都市生活环境有了很大变化。这篇作文规定我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参与到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定详细写作内容，而是用图表形式，列出了写作提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来论述：即应当做什么；不应当做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文提成两个层次，这样可以使文章构造清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般目前时态，第一人称we来论述。写作时应注意：首先英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语，而应从句子整体构造考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型，以常见主谓宾或者主系表构成简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，变化文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到都市“双创”活动中来。首先短文内容完整，文章根据题目中列出图表，补充了详细写作内容，从应当做和不应当做两个方面，对中学生平常行为提出了规定。文章条理清晰，有层次。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，语言精确，语句通顺，符合英语体现习惯。短文中句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及某些较复杂高级句式，语句之间也使用了很好连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

6． 中国老式文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国老式文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国老式文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，简介你校上周举行“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你收获与感受。
提醒词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提醒问题： ● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来论述讲成语故事活动；由于活动已经举行，因此时态采用一般过去时；对参与活动过程描写完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。
句型：被动句型。

7．2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京楷模优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充足体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做意义。
提醒词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提醒问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，详细写出怎样做以及这样做意义。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，人称用是第一人称复数形式，时态重要用是一般目前时，描述详细怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

8．书面体现
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你计划。
活动
毕业晚会
时间
6月28日晚上七点
地点
学校礼堂school hall
参与者
全体初三学生和老师
活动内容
1.
邀请校长作演讲；

2.
互赠礼品送祝福；

3.
各班演出精彩节目

4.

规定：1.要点完整，可合适发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.对使用语态，语法对，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面体现重要是推荐自已毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。

9．书面体现
我校决定让学生轮番打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈反响，请你把下列不一样意见整理成一篇书面材料，汇报给学校。
同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应当学会做艰苦工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人劳动。
不一样意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应当做事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提醒respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do