2025年中考英语书面表达专题含答案14.doc

中考英语书面体现专题(含答案)1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
假如你是Amy，德国互换生Sara下周即未来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她来信，在信中，她问询如下信息：1．你家状况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担家务劳动；4. …目前，你就她提出问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！
规定：1. 文章必须包括图片中重要内容，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息；
3. 字数约110词。
Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________
Love，
Amy
【答案】Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.
As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.
Love,
Amy
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列构造In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校利和弊；读走读学校利和弊；你选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容反复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥。
A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。第二段要写详细论述读寄宿学校利弊；读走读学校利弊第三段要表述作者自已选择和理由。
【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些规定？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？阐明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定期态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用合适句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落构造句型及关键词句完毕文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增长了文章亮点。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

3．书面体现
根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（lucky money）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？请结合自已实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你压岁钱来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱提议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节省用钱，把自已压岁钱用在最需要、最故意义地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（luckymoney）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容体现出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文重要使用人称就是第一人称，时态为一般目前时态，注意谓语动词变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
假如你是华,你英国笔友对中国文化很感爱好,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你家乡一安徴一游,请你根据如下提醒用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.提议
提醒词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera

注意:1.词数80-100
2.可合适增长细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自已真实校名和人名
4.开头和结展已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章提纲，审题可知，短文应从如下几种内容论述：首先简介家乡位置；然后简介来这里最佳时候；接下来是简介家乡景点和文化，并给出提议。短文应使用一般目前时，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应合理安排几种内容，分清主次，并注意上下文连贯。此外，英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，写完整句子。如可以使用简单句构造，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提高文章档次，也应穿插某些并列句构造或复合句，以及使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定邀请Dave来自已家乡旅游，并简介了家乡景点和文化。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容愈加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后详细简介了家乡位置、景点、文化等，并提出了提议。全文论述清晰，层次清晰，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文以一般目前时来论述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式变化。句式构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，尚有某些好句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

5．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提醒用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同学协助；祝愿，在写作中合适发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿格式，没有出现自已真实姓名。

6．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做，以及你感受。
提醒词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提醒问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提醒写一篇自已在初中生活中坚持做事；文中写明自已是怎么做并谈谈自已感受。
【详解】
1.本篇规定根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自已坚持做一件事，根据提醒，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般目前时。书写时要紧紧围绕主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自已坚持做事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自已起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到目前比此前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自已影响；文章构造清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了诸多短语和重点句型。例如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句体现多样。

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7． 假如你是李华，你英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件体现了想参与你校暑期为外国学生举行汉语夏令营愿望，但愿你告知活动举行详细时间地点，活动安排以及你提议。
提醒词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提醒问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：该题规定写作体裁为书信格式，因此例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照原则书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般目前时和一般未来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提醒都已体现清晰，并进行了合适拓展，所给单词也都所有用上。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。
句型：被动句型，目前分词作状语，主语从句。

8．书面体现（本题15分）根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人协助，也要学会协助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：
1. 你对节目中挺身而出顾客见解；
2. 说说你协助他人或他人协助你一件事例；
3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充斥正能量。
作文规定：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实名称和学生真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______
【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.
In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出顾客见解、发生在你身上正能量事件以及鼓励大家互相协助，并让世界充斥正能量。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其合用某些亮点词句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

9．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
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试题分析：本题给出了两个都市飞行时常、气温、旅馆状况。食物等有关信息，规定考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自已要去暑假旅游目地。虽然字数规定不多，但可以很好地考察考生英语写作基本功，需要考生对常用英语句型纯熟掌握。熟悉英语体现方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。此外，一定要注意题目规定，把每一种信息都进行比较，不要有遗漏。
写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目规定选择了都市A作为自已暑假旅游目地。对于都市A缺陷，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于长处则重点突出，由于在都市A可以做诸多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，例如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择都市A原因时，用了that引导宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较纯熟英语写作水平。

10．假如你是李华，你美国朋友Jack热爱中国唐诗宋词。近来他对母亲节你在博客里发《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感爱好，给你写信想理解该诗，请你根据如下提醒给他回信：
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱伟大
注意：
1.文中不得出现你真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.
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