英语中考英语书面表达20附带答案解析2.doc

英语中考英语书面体现20(附带答案解析)经典

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”消息引起了学生和家长们讨论。你们学校English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感爱好
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增长家庭承担
你观点
1.……
2.……

注意：
1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有有关信息，观点可作合适发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
____________________________________________________________________
【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目规定，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此不一样观点和态度。文章需要使用一般目前时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段体现支持这种行为做法原因和好处，第三段描述反对人观点及原因，最终一段体现自已观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式    
 第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.  
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 第一种原因。 They also argue that _________________________支持X 另一种原因。  
  第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.  
They consider it harmful to do X.  
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 第一种理由。  An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一种例子。   
  第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.  
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.  
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一种害处。

2．书面体现
难忘初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“辞别初中生活”主题班会。假如你是班长，根据如下提醒，用英语写一则告知。要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1） 对老师用话语体现谢意；2）与同学交流自已未来梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。
参照词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，告知开头已拟好，不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句构造In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现

假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy来信。她在信中诉说了她烦恼，请你根据Lucy来信，用英语写一封90词左右回信。规定内容合理,信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
_______________________________________
All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同步For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文论述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4． 诚信是中华民族老式美德，也是社会主义关键价值观内容之一。而你朋友Daming近来却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，不过他却由于在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自已见解，并给Daming某些提议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实校名和人名；
4、文章开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺事情，谈自已见解。信守承诺是中华民族老式美德，在写作过程中，注意文章构造，先写出大明和玲玲之间事情，然后再说自已对此见解。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者观点，大明是出错了。然后仔细论述了事情发生通过。接下来说出自已对此事件见解，不信守承诺会导致失去他人信任，对大明提议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章构造清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自已观点，然后论述事情，提出自已观点和提议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了某些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章愈加通顺。

5． “漂亮琼海我家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们生活环境得到了很大改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞文明行为随地可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

规定：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提醒，并做合适拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创立文明都市、创立健康都市，都市生活环境有了很大变化。这篇作文规定我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参与到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定详细写作内容，而是用图表形式，列出了写作提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来论述：即应当做什么；不应当做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文提成两个层次，这样可以使文章构造清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般目前时态，第一人称we来论述。写作时应注意：首先英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语，而应从句子整体构造考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型，以常见主谓宾或者主系表构成简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，变化文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到都市“双创”活动中来。首先短文内容完整，文章根据题目中列出图表，补充了详细写作内容，从应当做和不应当做两个方面，对中学生平常行为提出了规定。文章条理清晰，有层次。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，语言精确，语句通顺，符合英语体现习惯。短文中句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及某些较复杂高级句式，语句之间也使用了很好连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

6．假如你叫李华，近来你班里美国互换生Lucy想要感受中国老式文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地会面。
提醒词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate
提醒问题：Where are you going?
What will you do there?
When and where will you meet?

【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地会面。
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来简介我们去那里做什么，最终指出我们要在何时何地会面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

7．书面体现
中考后暑假即将开始，你和某些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供信息，将你选择用英文向同学们简介。
Britain

Australia
Time
July 1 - July 14

Time
August 15 -August 24
Activities
visit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫）
visit the British Museum （大
英博物馆）
watch football matches
…

Activities
visit the Sydney Opera House
travel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸）
have fun with kangaroos and koalas
…

Attention
changeable weather

Attention
winter
Cost
20,000 yuan

Cost
16,000 yuan

规定：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家所有信息及选择理由；
2. 结合游玩国家状况，自拟但愿可以安排活动，并提出1-2点出游注意事项；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清晰、书写规范；
5. 不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.

I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.
However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 0 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和某些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。规定根据旅行社提供信息将你选择用英文向同学们简介。首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章连贯性，要层次清晰，要点分明，中心突出。同步要注意语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯；尽量使用自已熟悉单词句式，最佳不要写太长复合句；尽量选用简单易拼写单词，保证对率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最终要细心复核检查，保证对无误。

8．你是一位九年级学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你笔友Amy，感谢她对你关怀，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比很好，不过你对自已不满意。你认为自已学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你父母对你严格规定，不过也很关怀你。（举例阐明，合适发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意协助你们。他们但愿你们实现自已理想。他们说（合适发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作合适发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's imp