高三英语写作优质公开课获奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达,How to make your writing more effective,？,By Janet,字数不够或,未能传达读者任何信息。,samples of student work,字迹潦草难以辨认,read and write,find it hard,fluent English to write,Great changes,roads,had taken place in my hometown,buildings,widened,It will be wonderful when,you come to China if you are free,show you around,I will be glad to,语言不地道,;,中文式思维,;,语言错误较多,samples of student work,A good,composition,Content,structure,language,What is a good writing？,Content:,cover the key points,(内容要完整),everything must be,to the point,(,切题,),Structure:,*Good beginning and ending(,好的开头结尾,),*Well organized and smoothly developed,(,结构合理,行文流畅,),Language:,*No Chinglish(,避免中文式英文,),*No Grammatical mistakes(,没有语法错误,),*,appropriate vocabulary and expressions(,得体的词汇和表达,),good sentence patterns,（句式）,4.We are very,happy,during winter holidays.,We,have a lot of fun,during winter holidays.5.Everyone,should,do his homework.,Everyone,is supposed to,do his homework.,6.We all,think,Miss liu is,a great teacher,.,（评 价很高）,We all,think highly of her.,Lets appreciate some sentences.,II.,丰富的句式：,Only in this way can we learn English well.,2.With the noise going on,I couldnt go on studying,.,3.Located at the southwest corner of our school,the garden covers an area of 1000 square,metres,.,4.It was not until she took off her glasses that her father recognize her.,In China,our winter holidays last about 20 days,during which time we celebrate the biggest festival-the Spring festival.,倒装句,with复合结构,非谓语动词短语,强调句,定语从句,Lets imitate the sentences.,I realized Janet was a nice teacher only after I left school,We can live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings only in this way.,一、,only,倒装句,We can expect our hometown take on a new look only with combined efforts.,Only with combined efforts,can we expect,our hometown take on a new look.,Only after I left school,did I realize,Janet was a nice teacher,.,Only in this way,can we live,in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.,二、强调句,It is/was,+,被强调部分,+,that/who,+,其他,.,The lack of environmental awareness causes such behavior.,It is,the lack of environmental awareness,that,causes such behavior.,I didnt know Wangkai until I saw Disguiser.,It was not until I saw Disguiser that I knew Wangkai.,The thief was taken away by the police.His hands were tied.(with+,宾语,+,分词）,2.The woman is beautiful and tears are running on her cheeks.(with宾语,+,分词）,The thief was taken away by the police,with his hands tied.,The woman is beautiful,with tears running on her cheeks.,三、,with,复合结构,有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。,With,so many people,helping you,you neednt worry.,随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的压力,。,With,the college entrance examination,drawing near,some students choose to tear their books into pieces in order to reduce stress and pressure from their learning.,由于我的耳机坏了，我不能做听力练习。,With,my earphone,broken,I cant do the listening exercises,.,Two people are walking on the grass and totally ignore the notice which says,“keep off the grass”.,Chenjiale,walked out of the classroom and many girls followed her.,四、非谓语动词,Two people are walking on the grass totally,ignoring,the notice which says,“keep off the grass”.,Chenjiale walked out of the classroom,followed,by,many girls.,The kids were invited to the party and they were very excited.,When I walked through the park,I saw many beautiful flowers.,Invited to the party,the kids were very excited.,Walking through the park,I saw many beautiful flowers.,我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（,a key university,）。,My dream is,that I can enter a key university,.,我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。,That I can enter a key university,is my dream.,I have a dream,that I can enter a key university.,我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。,我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。,I always dream,that I can enter a key university,.,五、名词性从句,2.,他建议我努力学习。,He suggested,that I should study hard.,宾语从句,2.It is suggested to me,that I should study hard.,主语从句,3.He gave me a suggestion,that I should study hard.,同位语从句,4.,What he suggested to me,is,that I should study hard.,主语从句,+,表语从句,Lets conclude.,Inversion,Emphatic sentence,Non-predicate verb,With composite structure,Noun clauses,A,s a result;In addition;,To begin with;However,Use proper linking words,Dear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.,These books have many advantages._,one of them is that we can find a variety of topics,such as science,culture and history.,These topics,I think,are very popular with us students.,To begin with,In my opinion;,Therefore,;,However,;,whats more,_,along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand English better.Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject._,some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us._,Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.,whats more,However,Therefore,Good afternoon,everyone!,The topic of my speech today is“My Attitude to Pursuit,of Fashion in School”.,Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion.Some,students live a very expensive life,_._,they hope to look smart and special.,they want to win others admiration and respect.,In addition,it makes them feel cool.,_,we students should hold the right sense of,values.We should practice thrift in our daily life._,it,is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the,Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can,return to school._,it is the inner beauty rather than,our appearance that makes us respectable.,Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows,B.firstly C.last but not least D.whats more,E,.,as far as I am concerned F.Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,技 巧,1.,使用得体的词汇,3.,使用恰当的连接词,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,2.,使用较丰富的句式,Lets polish the following paragraph.,Last Sunday,a big fire broke out in a building near my home.The people were rescued when the firemen arrived.The firemen depended on their professional knowledge and quickly prevented the fire from spreading.Finally,the fire was put out,people were all in relief.,It was,last Sunday,that,a big fire broke out in a building near my home.,Only when the firemen arrived,were the people rescued.,Depending,on their professional knowledge,the firemen quickly prevented the fire from spreading.Finally,with the fire put out,people were all in relief.,联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：,1),大小：近,100,户人家，约,500,口人。,2),变化：过去很穷，,78,年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。,3),教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有,4,层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。,注意：,1,）要点齐全，前后连贯2,）词数：,100,-,120,之间。,Practice,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.,The school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.,Thank you.,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!,This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.,People here are richer than before.,Now it is taking on a new look.,This village is,a small one with/which has,nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978,and has been developing very fast.,People here,live a much better life,than before.,书面表达：,Now it is taking,on a new look.,In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.,The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village,.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.,Thank you.,In the past,the school here was very small,and most children couldnt afford to go to school,.,But,now it has been rebuilt,and,which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one,in the village.,All the school-age children can study here.,Whats more,they enjoy free education.,May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,