高中英语作文公开课.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Beautify your sentences(,闪亮你的句子）,步骤,1.,好句赏析,2.,技巧指导,3.,巩固提高,Enjoy a song,When I was young I_ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs.When they _ Id sing along.,It _me smile.,Those _ such happy times and not so long ago.,How I wondered where they _.,But theyre back again just like a long lost friend.,When I was young I_(listen)to the radio waiting for my favorite songs.When they _(play)Id sing along.,It _(make)me smile.Those _(be)such happy times and not so long ago.How I wondered where they _(go).,But theyre back again just like a long lost friend.,listened,played,were,had gone,made,思考：,What is a beautiful sentence?,Translation,郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了,IQ,很高的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（,THD Group,）,总裁黄药师的女儿。,Guo Jing is a man.He is not very clever.He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ.Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group.,Guo Jing,a not very intelligent man,married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ,who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.,Group 1,A.We have much homework to do .,B.We have,endless,homework to do.,C We,are burdened with,endless homework.,Tip 1,高分词汇是首要,高分词汇原则,1.,后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）,good,very,2.,词组优先,try to do,3.,避免重复,A.I like reading while my brother likes watching television.,B.I,like,reading while my brother,enjoys,watching television.,Group 2,A.This village built a school in 2008.,B.Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.,Tip 2,陈述不如倒装妙,Eg.,我从来不买日货,A.I will never buy any products made in Japan.,B.,Never,will I buy any products made in Japan.,天空中繁星点点,.,In,the sky,hang,little stars.,河岸上有很多花,.,On,the bank,grow,lots of flowers.,Group 3,A.We can borrow five books at most,and we can keep them for ten days.,B.At most five books,can be borrowed,at a time and they,can be kept,for ten days.,Tip 3,主动不如被动巧,Eg.,最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一次调查。（,07,广东）,Recently a survey has been done on“Who is you idol?”in our school.,Group 4,A.If I am given the chance,I will try my best.,B.,Given,the chance,I will try my best.Tip 4,分词结构不能少,口诀：一去，二看，三改。,一去：去连词；,二看：看主语；,三改：改分词。,1.,童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回忆,Back flies the paper-airplane and it brings me the fragrant memory of my childhood.,bringing,Tips to beautify your sentence,1.,高分词汇是首要,2.,陈述不如倒装妙,3.,主动不如被动巧,4.,分词结构不能少,Task I,Rewrite the sentences,1.In order to,reach,this goal,we will put up no-smoking signs in all indoor public places.,（,用被动结构,）（,10,广东）,2.According to Professor Wang,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,which is number 1 in the world,.,（,09,广东）,3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys,choose,sports stars.,（,06,广东）,4,Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.(,用分词结构,),（,08,广东）,1.In order to,achieve,this goal,no-smoking signs,will be put up,in all indoor public places.,2.,According to Professor Wang,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,ranking the first,in the world.,3.,The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys,prefer,sports stars.,4.,Shooting,originated,as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,Task 2,Translation,1.,他建议学生不要过度用眼（,09,广东）,He suggested that school children,avoid overuse,of their eyes,2.,近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。（,09,广东）,So complicated are the causes of short-sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.,3.1968,年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛（,08,广东）,Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.,4.,约,5.4,亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过,10,万年。（,10,广东）,Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.,Thanks,