考研英语建议信写作方法.ppt

书信类别求职和申请信辞职和道歉信投诉信感谢信祝贺信通知与启示咨询信邀请信建议信推荐信05年：辞职信06年：请求信07年：建议信08 年：道歉信09年：建议信10年：招聘通知、感谢信11年：推荐信、祝贺信12年：建议信、投诉信13年：邀请信、倡议信14年：咨询信、建议信15年：推荐信、公告应用文历年真题应用文历年真题建议信写作流程及技巧建议信写作流程及技巧 By Maggie机构，上司机构，上司 熟人，朋友熟人，朋友建建议议信信行文得体，语气真诚，谦恭行文得体，语气真诚，谦恭用词正式，正规，用词正式，正规，内容合情合理内容合情合理，行文得体，语气礼貌行文得体，语气礼貌用词和善，真诚用词和善，真诚建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出建议和忠告。机构：服务质量，个人：生活重大决定提出看法，建议和投诉建议信写作框架分析建议信写作框架分析 道歉道歉信完整格式信完整格式Dear kevin,Dear kevin,XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Yours Sincerely,Yours Sincerely,LiMing LiMing 自我介绍，交代写作目的自我介绍，交代写作目的肯定对方好的方面，详述建议，肯定对方好的方面，详述建议，恳请考虑，期待回复恳请考虑，期待回复建议信主题段落结构分析建议信主题段落结构分析Dear.,第一段：1）you have asked me for my advice with regard to,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.2)In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions第二段：1）in the first place,.2)what is more,.3)Finally,第三段：1）I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details Direction Write a letter to your university library,making suggestions for improving its service.YOU SHOULD write about 100 words on answer sheet DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter use Li Ming instead DO not write the address 例题讲解例题讲解自我介绍 I am.,my name is.This letter comes to you from a students named.(这封信来自于一个叫。的学生)交代写信目1.I am writing to put forward some conductive suggestions as to the service of our library我写信的我写信的目的是就我校图书馆的服务给您提出一些可行性的建议目的是就我校图书馆的服务给您提出一些可行性的建议2.You have asked me for my advice with regard to.and I will try to make some conductive suggestions3.You asked for advice concerning(with regard to).and I will 4.I have received your letter saying.I recommend that.5.I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quaility of.6.I would like to propose several practical recommendations 我想提一些可行性建议我想提一些可行性建议You need to take the following factors into consideration when you make a decision当你做决定时需要考虑如下的因素Were it left to me to make a choice between them,I will not hesitate to prefer the latter.如果让我在二者之间做选择的话，我会毫不犹豫地选择后者I want to take this opportunity to express our heartful thanks to what librarans have done for us我想借此机会表达对图书管理人员由衷的谢意 自我介绍，交代写作目的自我介绍，交代写作目的 As a student of this university,I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your assistance as always.Meanwhile,I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the Library service.Version II I,as a senior student of the university,am writing here to provide some advice to improve the service in the library.I can find no better suggestions other than the following two.具体建议 In the first place,I find that most keyboards of the library compuers are in poor operation,which greatly inconveniences users.I would also recommend the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals.Last but not least,the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.具体建议To begin with,why not provide heater during winter time?It is always so cold in the library that many students catch cold when studying there.Besides,please pay more attention to the order at the reading room.So many disturbances such as talking aloud,mobile phone rings and the like make us difficult to concentrate on study.Under these circumstances,I find that I am falling behind on my studies 望考虑，期待回复望考虑，期待回复 I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.It will be grateful if you could take my suggestions seriously.I am looking forward to your early reply I relly wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and considerationI I hope hope that that my my suggestions suggestions are are helpful helpful for for your your decision-making decision-making anywayanywayI I would would be be more more than than happy happy to to see improvement in this regardsee improvement in this regardI I believe believe that that you you will will take take my my suggestions into serious accountsuggestions into serious account 小结小结语域时态信息点语言组织，避错Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to express my concern about the inconveniene the train ticket booking system brings to workers leaving hometown to earn a living in cities.I have heard that most of those migrant workers are poorly educated and can not master the on-line booking procedure.It is understandable to introduce an on-line booking system,since it is the age of the Internet.However,people illiterate about computer matters are unable to get tickets.In this sense,if internet grows into the dominant channel to sell tickets,they will be deprived of the chance to travel.To prevent the risk,you should develop telephone-booking service and reserve enough tickets at stations for them.