2018高考复习之英语应用文写作practicalwriting.ppt

2018/2/10,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,1,应用文复习,Practical writing,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知,通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,邀请函之高考真题,2017,年,6,月,假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友,Chris,写封邮件邀请他参加。,内容包括：,1.,参加者；,2.,时间、地点；,3.,活动：登山、野餐等。,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,活动中的等？,时间、地点？,参加者？,写信人和收信人的关系？,李华的身份？,正式还是非正式？,Im greatly honored to extend to you an invitation to a mountain hiking.,Your presence would be greatly appreciated.,Were planning a mountain hiking this Saturday morning and wonder if you would like to join us.,Let me know if you are interested./,Looking forward to seeing you there.,How is everything going?I miss you much.,Hi,Im Li Hua,who is going to organize a mountain climbing,which I believe can be very exciting and meaningful and I was wondering if you can be so kind as to participate in this activity.,范例一,Hi,Chris,Im planning a spring outing with some of friends this Saturday and wonder if you would like to join us.,We are going to meet at the school gate at 7 a.m.and cycle to the East Mountain where we can go hiking and enjoy a picnic near the lake.Its been a month since we last met.We would be more than glad to have your company.,After the picnic,we can fly a kite at the foot of the mountain.I promise well have a great time.Looking forward to seeing you then.,Yours,Li Hua,范例二,Hi,Chris,Our class is planning an outing to the Tiger Hill next Saturday.Im writing to invite you to join us.,Well be gathering at 7:50 at the school gate and then take Bus No.18 there.Well be climbing the hill and having a picnic there.“Running Man”game will be played before we come back at around 3:30.,Please let me know if you are interested in or have time for the outing.We would be more than glad if you could be there with us.,Yours,Li Hua,Invitation letters,开门见山，表明写信目的,写清原因，阐述受邀人的特长,或优势等（尤其在正式邀请函）,写清细节，表明邀请内容,如：时间，地点，,具体要做什么,A,bout,诚意邀请，期待回复,区分正式与否，使用恰当语气,Invitation letters,A,bout,(1)I am writing to invite you to,(2)I would be more than happy if you could participate,in,(3)I wonder if you can come,(4)How would you like to join us in？,(,5,)Youre kindly invited to celebrating.,(,6,)I look forward to your attendance.,(,7,)It gives us great pleasure to invite you to attend,(,8,)We would be honored by your attendance and we look forward to seeing you there.,实战演习,邀请信,1,第一节：应用文写作（满分,15,分）,假如你是国际班的班长李华，你打算邀请外教,Bruce,到你们班作一个西方文化知识讲座。现请你给他写一封邀请信内容包括：,1.,同学们对他的课以及西方文化非常感兴趣；,2.,大家特别希望详细了解节日文化；,3.,讲座时间：下周三下午,4:00,到,5,：,00,。,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,实战演习,attendance,实战演习,邀请信,1,第一节：应用文写作（满分,15,分）,假如你是国际班的班长李华，你打算邀请外教,Bruce,到你们班作一个西方文化知识讲座。现请你给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：,1.,同学们对他的课以及西方文化非常感兴趣；,2.,大家特别希望详细了解节日文化；,3.,讲座时间：下周三下午,4:00,到,5,：,00,。,注意：,1.词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Bruce,I am writing to invite you to give our class a lecture on western culture.We all show great interest in your lessons and are particularly curious about the customs and traditions in your country.They are so mysterious and fantastic.Therefore,we would appreciate it if you could deliver a lecture them,especially something related to your traditional festivals.The time scheduled for the lecture is 4pm 5pm next Wednesday.,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知,通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,道歉信之高考模拟题,2017,年,5,月,假如你是李华，作为交换生（,an exchange student,）正在英国,Windmill College,学习。今天早上你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学，你无法在原地等候车主，请留一张便条，内容包括,:,表明身份；,2.,简述事情经过；,3.,道歉并表示愿意赔偿；,4,联系方式（,Tel:[phone],E-mail:lihuawindmillco.org,）。,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,词汇：刮擦,/,赔偿？,写信人和收信人的关系？,认识与否？,正式还是非正式？,Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,an exchange student from China,studying at Windmill College.Im so,sorry,that my bike,scratched,your car,accidentally,when I was riding to school this morning.I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood.I sincerely,apologize,for what I did and promise I will,cover,all the relevant costs/expenses.As school will start soon,I cant wait on the scene/spot for you.Please feel free to contact me at 5893671 or lihuawindmillco.org.,Many apologies again,for all the inconvenience Ive caused you.,Best regards.,Li Hua,apology letters,开门见山，表明写信目的,提出弥补办法,解释原因，表明诚挚的歉意,（最好把,sorry/apology,/apologize,都用一次）,A,bout,再次道歉，请求谅解,/,原谅,apology letters,A,bout,(1),Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email in time.,(2),I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.,(3),I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.,(4),It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.,(5),Once again,please accept my sincere apology.,(6),Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for.,(7),Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.,实战演习,道歉信,1,你是李华，与同学王明约好到他家讨论将要举行的英语演讲比赛，但是在路上目睹一起交通事故,并把伤者送往医院，没能赴约。请给他写一封道歉信，信的内容如下,:,1.,对李华表示道歉；,2.,解释未能赴约的原因；,3.,约定时间，再次讨论。,choose,looking forward to,waiting,had,实战演习,第一节：应用文写作（满分,15,分）,你是李华，与同学王明约好到他家讨论将要举行的英语演讲比赛，但是在路上目睹一起交通事故,并把伤者送往医院，没能赴约。请给他写一封道歉信，信的内容如下,:,1.,对李华表示道歉；,2.,解释未能赴约的原因；,3.,约定时间，再次讨论。,Dear Wang Ming,I am writing to make an apology for failing to discuss with you about the coming English speech contest.,Please excuse me for my absence.On my way to your home,I witnessed a car accident.A man was seriously injured and I soon rushed him to hospital in a taxi.Not until the injured man was treated did I leave the hospital.Therefore,its not in my power to meet you.,Please accept my sincere apology.I will appreciate it if you will kindly tell me when you will be at convenience so that we will discuss the contest later.See you soon.,Sincerely,yours,Li Hua,。,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知,通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,感谢信之高考模拟题,2017,年,4,月,假定你是中学生李华，作为成员之一，刚刚访问完英国的姐妹学校,Morley College,回国，请你给该校校长,Mr.Declan,写一封感谢信，内容包括：,1.,感谢对方的热情款待；,2.,你的收获；,3.,邀请对方来访；,注意：,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,对方热情款待具体可以写什么？,写信人和收信人的关系？,个人名义感谢并邀请来访？,收获有哪些？,Dear Mr.,Declan,Im,writing to express our sincere gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in Britain.It was so nice and considerate of you to have prepared us so many cuisines of British flavor!We were also deeply impressed by the comfortable accommodation you arranged for us!And the activities you organized not only broadened our horizons but also promoted our mutual understanding.We now have a deeper insight into British culture.Thanks again for all your efforts!,We,hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future!,Best,regards!,Your,sincerely,Li Hua,thank-you letters,开门见山，表明写信目的,具体事例,解释原因，表明诚挚的谢意,（最好把,gratitude/,appreciate/thank you,都用一次）,A,bout,再次感谢,thank-you letters,A,bout,(1),Thank you so much for the.,(,2,),Im writing to express my heartfelt thanks for.,(,3,),I am very grateful for your assistance with my.,(,4,),On behalf of my whole family,I would like to extend my great appreciation for your timely help.,(,5,),Its so generous of you to let me stay with you.,(,6,),With your assistance,I was able to,(,7,),You were always there to lend a helping hand with my new life.,(,8,),Each time I feel defeated,you would,(,9,),Thanks again for being such a good friend and keep in touch.”,(,10,),I cant be more grateful for what you have done for me.”,实战演习,感谢信,1,假如你是李华。毕业在即，请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张,Thank-you Note.,主要内容包括：,1.,表达对老师的感谢；,2.,陈述老师对你的帮助和影响；,3.,表达对老师的祝福。,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,实战演习,假如你是李华。毕业在即，请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张,Thank-you Note.,主要内容包括：,1.,表达对老师的感谢；,2.,陈述老师对你的帮助和影响；,3.,表达对老师的祝福。,注意1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Ms.Yang,Im writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me.Im lucky to have you as my English teacher.,Over the,past three years,you have helped me a lot with my English as well as my character shaping.There is no exaggeration to say that without you I couldnt have been what I am today.You really make a difference to my life and I will follow your example to be ready to help those in need.,With the note is a sweet chocolate bar.Wish you as sweet a life.,Li,Hua,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,申请信之高考模拟题,2017,年,5,月,假定你是高三（,1,）班班长李华，近期你校学生会将组织“跳蚤市场爱心义卖,(flea market for charity)”,活动，请代表你班级给校学生会主席王越写一封邮件，申请参加本次活动，内容包括：,1.,申请一个摊位,(booth),；,2.,简要描述义卖的物品；,3.,就善款的用途提出建议；,注意：,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,善款用途？,义卖物品有哪些？,代表个人还是班级？,一些错误案例：,1.Im Li Hua,who is the monitor of Class 1,Grade 3.,建议直接用同位语：,Im Li Hua,monitor of Class 1,Grade 3.,2.Im writing to apply for participating in the activity which is very meaningful.,建议直接用前置定语：,Im writing to apply for participating inthis meaningful activity on behalf of my class.,3.We have decided to donate the money to be raised to help those students who are very poor and unfortunate.,建议直接用形容词前置定语或者介宾结构做后置定语：,We have decided to donate the money to be raised to helpthose poor and unfortunate students.,We have decided to donate the money to be raised to help those studentsin need.,Dear Wang Yue,Im Li Hua,monitor of Class 1,Grade 3.Im writing to apply for a booth in the flea market for charity.Weve prepared a wide range of goods that appeal to students with different needs,including reference books,inviting snacks and beautifully potted plants.We suggest the money we get be donated to poor children in mountainous areas,helping them receive a good education.,Wed appreciate it if we could participate in this meaningful activity.,Yours,sincerely,Li Hua,application letters,开门见山，表明写信目的,表明期待或信心,解释原因，,或阐述自己适合这个岗位的优势,A,bout,如果是对活动的申请,最好提及活动的意义,application letters,A,bout,(1),I,m,writing to apply for a position in your summer camp.,(,2,),I,sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered.,(3),I,do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.,(4),The,position of sales manager advertised in the newspaper interests me very much.,(,5,),I,m,writing to apply for the opportunity to.,(6),Thanks,for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.,(7),If,I am lucky enough to be admitted,Ill work hard and try to be a good engineer.,(,8,),I,think Im qualified for the position you offered in the advertisement.,实战演习,申请信,1,假定你是李华，从互联网,(the Internet),上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡,(Singapore),举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。,内容主要包括,:,1.,自我介绍,(,包括英语能力,),；,2.,参加意图,(,介绍中国、了解其他国家,),；,3.,希望获准,Dear Sir/Madam,I,m Li Hua,a second-year high school student from China.I got 7.5 for IELTS early this year,which indicates that I will have little difficulty communicating with others in an English-speaking country.,I,m writing to apply for a position in your summer camp in Singapore.I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for me to introduce China to young people from other countries and to learn from them about their countries.,I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered.If more information is needed,please do not hesitate to contact me via this email.,Yours,Li Hua,实战演习,Dear Sir or Madam,The,other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet,saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world,and I,m interested to participate in it.,I,m,Li Hua,a middle school student in China.As a teenager,I,m interested in making friends with kids of my age from all over the world.Your camp will provide a good chance for me to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China.,What,s,more,I can improve my,English by communicating,with people from other countries.,I,do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.,Looking,forward to your early reply.,Besh wishes,Li Hua,。,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知,通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,投诉,信之高考模拟题,2017,年,5,月,假设你是李华，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。,要点：,问题：,手机,不响铃，不能发短信；,该,产品已售完，无法更换；,型号,新，无配件，无法维修。,2.,要求,：,公司,应尽快予以更换。,参考词汇：配件,spare part,有何要求？,写信人和收信人的关系,？,投诉理由？,Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20,th,Apr,2017,at Tele Mall in Wuhan,P.R.China,.I contacted the saleswoman but the problem of my mobile phone could not be effectively solved.,The main problems are as follows:First,the mobile phone does not ring and messages cannot be sent out.Second,all the mobile phones of the same model were sold out,so it is impossible for me to exchange a new one.Third,since the phone is a new model,there are no spare parts available,and therefore,it cannot be fixed at the local store.,A mobile phone is a very important tool in my daily life.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.,Thank you for your consideration.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan,P.R.China.,I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone.First,the phone bell doesnt ring at all.Whats worse,it cant be used to send short messages to others.Besides,because the product here has been sold out,the salesman cant change it for me.Later,I went to have it repaired.However,I was told that the model can not be repaired due to a lack of,spare,parts.,Taking into account all three factors above,I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.,Thank,you for your consideration.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,complaint,letters,开门见山，表明写信目的,提出你的要求,投诉理由，对产品或对服务,不满的具体原因,A,bout,期待答复,complaint,letters,A,bout,1.I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone.,2,.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one.,3,.,Taking into account all three factors above,I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.,4.To my regret,it didnt work normally.,5,.,I received such poor service that I felt I should bring it to your attention,.,6.,Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated.,7,.,I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.,8.I am,waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.,实战演习,投诉,信,1,假如你是李华，昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇，回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时该营业员对你的态度恶劣，对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信。,Dear Mananger,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,实战演习,Dear,Manager,I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.,Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop,but when I got home and turned it on,it didnt work.So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem.To my surprise,instead of helping me solve the problem,the man,in a rude manner,refused to examine it.,Generally,your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop.I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.,I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,书信,通知,应用文分类,倡议,报道,应用文分类,书信,报道,邀请函,道歉信,感谢信,申请信,投诉信,询问信,建议信,推荐信,倡议书,书面通知,口头通知,通知,套路是关键,得体很重要,询问,信之高考模拟题,2017,年,5,月,假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。,参考词汇：住宿,accommodation,询问,目的,？,写信人和收信人的关系,？,询问内容？,Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and