中考英语作文突破指导省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,nglish,中考书面表达突破,新乡市一中,1/71,1 听力15,2 单项-8,3 完形10,4 阅读-25,5 词语短语句式；,三查,：关键点、拼写和语法、连贯。,6/71,五、作文普通框架：,文章分3段：,（1）综述：,概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；,（2）正文主要内容：,层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；,（3）结尾：,紧紧围绕主题，2句话内结束，尽可能升华。,7/71,满分作文标准：,第一档：（1513分）,完全,符合,题目,要求,，,观点正确,关键点,齐全，,立意高,。,句式,多样,，词汇,丰富,。语言,准确,，语意,连贯,，表示,清楚,，,结构,合理，含有,逻辑性,。,卷面书写洁净，,整齐，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密适当，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。,最好能有一两个,亮点句,。,（主从，定从，表从，谚语）,8/71,六、怎样列提要：,例1：利弊型作文Microblog利与弊,Para1:,（综述）with the development of internet more and more popular,Para2:,（利）,First,convenient,anywhere,any time;,Second,share with;,Last,express views free,money-free,Para3:,（弊）,However,one coin has two faces,.,On the one hand,a waste of timeaffect study;,On the other hand,not safestolen,hurt feelings,Para4:,（个人）,As a student,make good use of it.,9/71,七、怎样列提要：,例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排,Para1:,（综述）graduate from,holiday is coming,plan for this holiday,Para2:,（正文）,Firstly,study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;,Secondly,visit tourist attractions;,Last but not least,do sports to build up my body.,Para3:,I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday.(Im looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.),10/71,八、常见作文类型模板：,1 书信,Dear.,Im glad to receive your letter,-,-,-,Best wishes!,Yours,Lucy,11/71,a书信开头惯用语,I am very glad to,receive your letter(hear form you),.,Hello,Jane.,Is everything going(on)well,?,/,How is everything going(on)?,Im writing to you for,some advice on how to,Im writing to,ask if you can.,How time flies!,It has been months/years since we last met.,Thank you for,inviting me to.,12/71,b 书信结尾惯用语,Best wishes(to/for you).,Wish you good luck.,(I am)looking forward to hearing from you.,13/71,二、口头通知常见写作模板：,呼语及开场白部分：,Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.,正文部分：,All the teachers and students are required to attend it.,Please take your notebooks and make notes.,Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.,Please come on time and dont be late.,结束语部分：,Please come and join in it.,Everybody is welcome to attend itI hope youll have a nice time here.,Thats all.Thank you.,14/71,八、常见作文类型提要模板：,2 图表、数字百分比型,（提出讨论或调查事实）,Last week,our class had a class meeting on,(how to),Here are the results,.,（表示出不一样看法或观点）,Most students think While 20%of them choose to.Another 15 believe There are also some saying that,（表示个人看法）,As a student,I agree to,15/71,3 说明利弊型,Nowadays,is becoming more and more popular,.,It has many advantages.,First,优点1,Besides,优点2,However,every coin has two sides.,It also brings us bad influences.,On the one hand,缺点1,On the other hand,缺点2,In my opinion,个人观点,16/71,4 不一样观点型,We made a survey about whether,we should 提出矛盾问题.,Different people hold different ideas.,Some believe,正方观点.,First,原因1,Besides,原因2,While others dont agree.They think,反方观点.,On the one hand,原因1,On the other hand,原因2,As for me,个人观点,17/71,5 处理问题型,Recently,the problem has been more and more serious.should,do something to solve it,.,Firstly,方法1,Secondly,方法2,Finally,方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to,the will become better and better.,18/71,九、惯用过渡性词语,叙事文惯用句子间连接词：,At first;at last;in the end,then/next/after that,when/while/as soon as/not until,at the same time;at times;once in a while;,so that,To ones surprise/joy,Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately,in a word/in all,19/71,议论文惯用连接词,表示并列：,eitheror;neithernor;bothand;not onlybut also;,表示递进：,besides;whats more;whats worse;(moreover);,表示原因：,because;for;because of;thanks to;(for the reason that);,表示结果：,so;as a result;sothat;therefore;,表示目标：,so that;in order that;(in order)to;for;,表示对比：,while;on the one hand+on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;preferto;would rather dothan do;,20/71,议论文惯用连接词,表示转折：,however;but;,表示举例：,for example;for instance;such as;like;that is to say,表示总结：,in all/short;in a word;in brief/total;last but not least;last;,表示利弊：,be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb benefit from sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;,表示喜爱：,love/like/enjoy;be fond of;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;,21/71,议论文惯用连接词,表示个人想法：,I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;,其它：,in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;,22/71,议论文惯用连接词,表示个人想法：,I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;,其它：,in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;,23/71,十、作文万能句式,I will work hard to make my dream come true.,I,hope,your dream will come true one day.,It takes sb.+时间+to do,Sb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./(in)doing sth.,Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.)to v,Its nice/kind of sb.to v.,Its time for sb.to do sth.,Its a waste of time to,Its years/days since sb.+ved,Its great fun to do=sb.have great fun doing,Its a pity that,Its an honor to,24/71,十、作文万能句式,Im/Were not allowed to,Im afraid of making mistakes,There be doing,Great changes have taken place in,sth is/are well worth v-ing.,It seems/seemed that,It seems(im)possible to v,It is said that,As the saying goes,and.are different in many ways.,too+adj./adv.to do,There are many differences between and,25/71,十、作文万能句式,I have made up my mind to,I am sure that,I am not sure whether/if,I would rather.than,It doesnt matter if,Thank you for v-ing.,If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/nature/society,our life will be better and better.,26/71,十一、作文万能短语,have/look for a chance to do,do outdoor activities,be/get used to(doing)sth.,learnfrom,be proud of/take pride in,play an important/active part/role in,agree with sb.to do sth.,with the help of sb.=with ones help(反义：without ones help),be/get ready to do sth.=be/get ready for sth.,pay attention to,take good care of,make friends with,get on/along well with,27/71,十一、作文万能短语,wish you successful/success,as time goes by,graduate from,looking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态）pass the(final)exam,stick to doing,keep you mind on your goals,make up ones mind to do sth.(on sth.),make a decision to do,work hard at English,once in a while/at times/now and then,from then on,28/71,十一、作文万能短语,in the future（未来）/in future（从今以后）,increase our knowledge/enlarge our vocabulary,in fact/as a matter of fact,in the beginning/at first,feel like giving up,have trouble/difficulty in(doing)sth.,have(no)time to do,have experience in(doing)sth.,follow ones advice/suggestions,master some basic skills,be required to do,ask sb.for help,cant wait to do,29/71,十一、作文万能短语,be supposed to do,encourage sb.to do,deal/do with,work out/solve the problems,all sorts/kinds of,at home and abroad,one of,be full of,learn sth.by oneself,come up with good ideas,be surprised at sth.(to do sth.),in order to,keep healthy/fit,a good way to v,30/71,十一、作文万能短语,keep(on)trying,worry about/be worried about,in ones spare/free time,be kind/friendly to,be strict with,help others,say thank you to,have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time,plenty of+C/U,worry about/be worried about,ask sb.for help/turn to sb.for help/call sb.for help,be popular with,share sth.with sb.,know little/much about,31/71,十一、作文万能短语,do/try ones best to v,be/feel sorry for,help sb.(to)do sth./with sth.,in/during class,before/after class,teach sb.to do sth.,32/71,*,词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于 100词。,不能使用其它颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标识工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。,33/71,四、Language errors in writing纠错,34/71,.be多出或缺乏,Im enjoy studying English.,It bad for our health.,I enjoy,studying English.,It is bad for,our health.,35/71,2.时态错误,At that time,they always help me with my English.,I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.,At that time,they always,helped,me with my English.,I,have enjoyed,studying English,since,I,met,him.,36/71,My favorite sport is run.,I think do some sports is very important for us.,My favorite sport is,running.,I think,doing some sports,is very important for us.,37/71,3.非谓语动词错误,I like do sports.,I wish take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I,wish to take part in,the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I,like doing,sports.,38/71,4.副词位置错误,I very thank her.,I very like football.,I thank her very much.,I like football very much.,39/71,5.代词错误,They are good for us body.,I hope me also become a basketball player.,They,are,good for,our body.,I hope,I also become,a basketball player.,40/71,6.缺介词或介词错误,I thank him very much help me study English.,He even came to my home for help me.,I thank him very much,for helping,me study English.,He even came to my home,to,help me.,41/71,I like it because its exciting and good for my healthy.,I have ever gived up English.,(单词错误),(动词P.P.错误),I like it because its exciting and good for,my health,.,I have ever,given,up English.,7.其它错误,42/71,Its good for my health.Not only make me brave,but also make me become taller.,If you want to keep fit,it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.,Its good for my health.,It not only makes,me brave,but also makes,me become taller.,If you want to keep fit,it is important for you to,spend,an hour,on,sports every day.,（缺主语）,（句型错误）,43/71,Lets practise.,44/71,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,1.I climed slowly and was very tried.,2.I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3.,On a friday afternoon,I went shopping with my mother.,Spelling（拼写）,（others),Friday,4.I cant forget that day.Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.,I cant forget that day because,5.What a crazy day it was,I will remember it forever.,!,Capital letter（大小写）,Punctuation（标点符号）,45/71,6.I will remembered that day forever.,remember,7.I thought it is hungry.,was,8.My grandmother always tidy up my room.,tidies,9.How unforgettable this things is!,thing,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Tense（时态）,Verb agreement,(,主谓一致),Word form,(,词形）,46/71,10.In my fathers help,I became more patient than before.,With my fathers help,11.To cut a long story to short,.,To cut a long story short,12.I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother.,by bus,13.My mother told me dont give it up.,told me not to give it up,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Phrases(短语和固定搭配）,14.I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road.,saw an old lady lying,47/71,16.We played snow in front of house.,played with,15.I sat on a seat,listening music.,listening to,17.Then a lady asked who had broken her window.We all were afraid.,were all,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Missing words（漏词）,18.We should do things by our own hands.,with,the house,19.It is tired work.,tiring,Words order（词序）,Using wrong word（选词错误）,48/71,22.He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.,carefully,21.One Sunday morning,I went to Shihua by bus and sat beside me was a girl.,I went to Shihua on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me.,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Chinese English（中式英语）,In my life,many things happened.,20.In my life have many things happened.,49/71,During the winter holidays,It happened a lot of things.One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother.When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall,we saw a small girl cried in a corner.We asked what happened on her.She said she cuondt found her mother.So we started to helpt she to found her mother.Luckily,we found her mother,they were very happy and we were happy,too.I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.,The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.,Check and correct this article.,a lot of things happened.,helping,I,were shopping,crying,happened to,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,could also,so,50/71,1.,是否有大小写错误,(capital letters or lowercase letters),是否有拼写错误,(spelling mistakes),是否有标点错误,(punctuation mistakes),4.是否有语法错误,(grammar mistakes),主谓是否一致,动词时态,语态使用是否正确,词组搭配是否合乎习惯,Common Errors in English writing,51/71,五、整齐性,1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。,2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。,3 字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。,字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。,52/71,4 规范,三写,：,大 小 写,拼 写,书,写,53/71,54/71,55/71,以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇100字左右英语短文，提醒以下：,1 孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。,2 关心热爱学生。,3 教学方法生动有趣。,4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；,六、实战训练,56/71,Pre-writing,1.审：,2.定,：,“My English Teacher”为题写一篇100字作文,记叙文，第三人称，普通现在时,篇章结构：三段式,首段：个人简历,正文：教学特色,尾段：作者评价,57/71,be fashionable,love students,and care about the students,be lively and interesting,get on well with,be popular with,Writing:,3.列,打扮入时,2.热爱学生，关心学生,3.生动有趣,4.相处融洽，深受欢迎,58/71,My English Teacher,Miss Sun is our English teacher.She is 25 years old.She is 1.65 meters tall.,She,is very fashionable.,She loves her students.She cares about us.,Her lessons are,interesting and lively;,Miss Sun,gets on well with,us.She is very,popular,.,We all love her and her teaching!,Writing,4.连：,连词成句，连句成篇,59/71,复写Rewriting：,5、美,润色丰富关键点；,6、改,查错改错,7、抄,修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在要求地方。,60/71,Writing,My English Teacher,Miss Sun is our English teacher.She is 25 years old.She is 1.65 meters tall.,She,is very fashionable.,She loves her students.She cares about us.,Her lessons are,interesting and lively;,Miss Sun,gets on well with,us.She is very,popular,.,We all love her and her teaching!,61/71,62/71,homework,63/71,请依据关键点提醒，用英文写一篇简明介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师短文。字数100词左右。内容关键点以下：,1谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，,2在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严厉，,3对学生要求严格，,4深爱学生。,5谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。,6你感受及愿望。,参考词语：1.graduate from a university,大学毕业 2.be strict with,对严格3.the Wenchuan earthquake,汶川地震 4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹,64/71,三段式：,首段：,正文：,结尾：,谭老师个人介绍,谭老师英雄事迹,作者感受和愿望,65/71,列出7个内容关键点：,1）外表严厉；,2）对学生要求严格；,3）深爱学生；,4）地震时在上课；,5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；,6）感受；,7）愿望。,He looks serious.,Hes strict with his students.,He loves his students deeply.,He was giving lessons at that moment.,When the teaching building callapsed,he protected four students with his body.,I feel deeply moved.,Ill learn from him.,66/71,连句成文：,Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province.He graduated from Hunan University.He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city,Sichuan province.He had taught there for 27 years.He looked serious.He was very strict with his students.He loved them deeply.,When the Wenchuan earthquake happened,he was giving a lesson.The school building collapsed.he protected his four students with his body.The students were saved.Mr Tan lost his life.,I am deeply moved by his deeds.Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero.I will learn from him.,67/71,Homework,Finish rewriting the composition after class，using the techniques learned in this lesson.,68/71,Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province.,After,graduating from Hunan University,he taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city,Sichuan province.He had taught there for 27 years.,Though,he looked serious,and,was very strict with his student