雅思写作如何写高分句子市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,雅思写作评分标准,TR:Task Response,回答下列问题,CC:Coherence and Cohesion,连贯性及一致性,LR:Lexical Resource,词汇量,GR:Grammatical Range and Accuracy,语法范围及准确性,1/115,雅思写作高分句子要求,2/115,句子：语篇基本组成单位,句子结构：,简单句,复杂句：,并列句、复合句、并列复合句,3/115,简单句：,只包含一个主谓结构句子。,Jane and George are good friends.,The Olympic Games can promote friendship and boost the economy of the host country.,The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable.,4/115,简单句,五种基本句型：,不论多么复杂英语句子都不能离开五种基本句型。,主语+谓语 I work hard.,主语+,系动词+表语,I am smart.,谓 语,主语+谓语+宾语 I love you.,主语+谓语+宾语+宾语,My parents gave me a gift.,主语+谓语+宾语+补语,I consider him a hero.,5/115,主语+,谓语,Crimes,fall,significantly.,犯罪大幅度下降。,Recent figures of juvenile crime,are increasing,.,最近青少年犯罪数量在上升。,Without guns,both suicide rate and homicide rate,will go down,.,没有枪，自杀率和他杀率都会下降。,6/115,主语+,系动词,+,表语,Resisting a criminal with a gun,is,the safest thing to do,.,用枪来反抗罪犯是最安全做法。,The penalties for criminals,should be,severe,.,对罪犯处罚应该严厉。,7/115,主语+,谓语,+,宾语,Media violence,can affect,childrens health,.,媒体暴力影响小孩健康。,Gambling and alcohol abuse,cause,crimes and destruction,.,赌博和酗酒造成犯罪和毁灭。,8/115,主语+,谓语,+间接,宾语,+直接,宾语,My parents,bought,me,a gift,on my birthday.,我父母在我生日那天给我买了礼品。,Community services,offer,wrongdoers,an opportunity,to correct their misconduct.,小区服务给做坏事人一个改过自新机会。,9/115,主语+,谓语,+,宾语+,补语,We,consider,greed,a source of evils,.,我们认为贪婪是罪恶源头。,Parents,should encourage,their kids,to take part in more rewarding activities,.,父母应该勉励孩子参加更多有益活动。,10/115,句子成份,主语、谓语、宾语、表语、定语、状语、补语、同位语,11/115,主语,Media violence,can affect childrens health.,媒体暴力影响小孩健康。,Gambling,causes crimes and destruction.,赌博造成犯罪和毁灭。,To telecommute,usually means working at home.,远程上班通常意味着在家工作。,12/115,We,consider greed a source of evils.,我们认为贪婪是罪恶源头。,Two million,were turned away by American officials.,有200万人被美国官员拒绝入境。,13/115,That,a nation should protect its cultural heritage,is very essential.,国家保护文化遗产是至关主要。,It is very essential,that,a nation should protect its cultural heritage.,It is generally accepted,that,the Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world,.,人们普遍认为中国文化是世界上最古老文化之一。,14/115,What,effects tourism will exert on local culture,are well-documented.,旅游业对当地文化影响是显而易见。,How,we can carry forward our traditional arts,has become a hot issue.,怎样弘扬传统艺术成了个热门话题。,15/115,What,is needed in this country,is stricter control of guns.,这个国家所需要是更严格地管理枪支。,Who,will be responsible for the senior citizens,will be discussed tomorrow.,谁对老年人负责这个问题明天将被讨论。,16/115,谓语,Crimes,fall,significantly.,犯罪大幅度下降。,China,arrested,69,780 juvenile delinquents in.,年中国逮捕了69780青少年罪犯。,Without guns,the suicide rate,will go down,.,没有枪，自杀率会下降。,17/115,Recent figures of juvenile crime,are increasing,.,最近青少年犯罪数量在上升。,The government,was putting,great efforts to develop the IT industry when Internet bubbles collapsed.,在互联网泡沫破裂时，政府正努力发展信息产业。,If we are incapable of looking after our own planet,what good is it to go elsewhere?We,will be duplicating,our mistakes.,假如我们不能照看自己星球，去别地方又有什么好处呢？我们将重复自己错误。,18/115,Pornography,has developed,alongside technology.,色情业伴随科技发展而不停蔓延。,TV，radio，newspaper and magazines,had served,as the mainstream media before the Internet was invented.,在互联网创造之前，电视、广播、报纸、杂志是主流媒体。,The human race,will have immigrated,to another planet when the earth becomes uninhabitable.,在地球变得不宜居住时候，人类已经移民到另外星球上去了。,19/115,The computer industry,has been growing,rapidly in the world in the last en years.,世界计算机产业在过去几十年发展快速。,Dick,had been smoking,for ten years before he decided to give it up last year.,Dick 去年决定戒烟之前，就已经抽了十年了。,20/115,宾语（动词宾语）,Media violence can affect,childrens health,.,媒体暴力影响小孩健康。,To telecommute usually means,working at home,.,远程上班通常意味着在家工作。,Most weight losers decide,to have a vegetarian diet,.,许多减肥者决定吃素。,21/115,My parents bought,me,a gift,on my birthday.,我父母在我生日那天给我买了礼品。,22/115,Experts predict,that,half of the worlds language will be extinct in 100 years,.,教授预测世界上二分之一语言100年后会消亡。,Many experts doubt,whether,English should be used as the only global official language.,许多教授怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一官方用语。,23/115,I dont know,what,is needed in learning English.,我不知道学习英语需要做什么。,We havent decided,who,will be responsible for the senior citizens.,我们还没有决定由谁对老人负责。,24/115,宾语（介词宾语）,The disease spread quickly,across,the country,.,You are never a loser until you,give up,trying,.,I am sorry,for,what I said,.,25/115,宾语（非谓语动词宾语）,Taking,a job,for a long time is usually considered a proof of loyalty.,长时间从事一份工作通常被认为是忠诚表现。,Educators advise,sending,children,to schools instead of,keeping,them,at home.,教育家提议送孩子上学，而不是把他们留在家里。,26/115,It is ridiculous,to force,an employee,to retire at the age of 50.,强迫员工50退休是荒谬。,Most weight losers decide,to have,a vegetarian diet,.,许多减肥者决定吃素。,27/115,Facing,high competition,people may suffer great pressure.,面对高度竞争，人们可能负担巨大压力。,Suffering,great pain,cancer patients have to take some drugs sometimes.,因为忍受巨大痛苦，癌症病人有时不得不服用毒品。,28/115,表语,That a nation should protect its cultural heritage is,very,essential,.,国家保护文化遗产是至关主要。,The result of the competition is quite,satisfying,.,比赛结果很令人满意。,The guests were quite,satisfied,with the party.,客人们对晚会非常满意。,29/115,Heavy work pressure is,the major,reason,for family breakdown nowadays,沉重工作压力是家庭破裂主要原因。,The aim of telework is,saving costs and reducing workload,.,远程工作目标是节约成本，降低工作量。,The best way to escape urban pollution is,to move to rural areas,.,逃避城市污染最好方法是搬到乡下去,30/115,事实是很多动物被用于医学研究。,The fact is,that many animals are used in medical research,.,这就是为何广告被认为是垃圾原因。,This is,why TV commercials are regarded as rubbish,.,31/115,These articles are,for intensive reading,while other articles are,for extensive reading,.,这些文章是做精读而其它文章是做泛读。,My book is,on the desk,.,Students are,in the classroom,.,You dont look,like fifty,.,32/115,I will be,back,soon.,我马上就回来。,He was,abroad,at the time.,他那会儿在国外。,This is,her,!,Its,me,!,Four and two is,s,ix,.,33/115,定语,Junk,food impairs,childrens,health.,垃圾食品严重危害孩子们健康。,A nursing house should provide better,living,conditions and more professional care.,敬老院应该提供更加好居住条件和更专业照料。,34/115,Almost all the Chinese believe that,overseas,study is a,good,chance to receive,high,quality education and to experience,diverse,cultures.,几乎全部中国人都认为出国留学是接收高质量教育和体验不一样文化好机会。,Todays white-collars face,increasing,pressure.,现今白领面对越来越大压力。,Practice is the only way to improve your,spoken,English.,练习是你提升口语唯一方法,35/115,Pet raising can turn children into citizens,who have a caring mind,.,养宠物把孩子培养成含有同情心人。,People,under great work stress,find life frustrating and depressing.,处于巨大工作压力下人们以为生活令人沮丧和压抑。,Practice is the only way,to improve your spoken English,.,练习是你提升口语唯一方法。,36/115,With the rapid development of economy,the number of people,riding bicycles,is decreasing.,伴随经济快速发展，骑自行车人数是越来越少。,Money,used in space research,can be spent on the people struggling under the poverty line.,用于太空探险钱能够用在那些在贫困线下挣扎人们身上。,What we should do next is to avoid eating food,rich in fat and calorie,.,我们下一步应该做就是防止吃富含脂肪和热量事物。,37/115,状语,Last Sunday,we went to the seaside.,上星期日我们到海滨去了。（时间状语）,When,he was still a young man,he was forced to leave his homeland for political reasons.,他在年轻时候就因为政治原因而被迫离开他祖国。,38/115,While the firefighters were tying to control the fire,helicopters flew,to the burning building,.,当消防人员正设法控制火势时，直升机飞向这座燃烧着大楼。（地点状语）,Where,he made mistakes,he admitted these willingly.,不论在什么地方做错了事，他都乐于认可。,39/115,Because of such a climate,much of daily life happens outdoors.,因为这么气候，许多日常生活都在户外进行。（原因状语）,Many species have become extinct in the wild,so,zoos should be established to preserve as many species as possible,.,许多物种已经在荒野中灭绝，所以应该建立动物园，保护尽可能多物种。,40/115,Lets go out,for a drive,next Sunday.,星期天咱们开车出去兜风吧。（目标状语）,Schools provide far more services,in order that,freshmen can adjust to the new college life as soon as possible.,学校提供更多服务，目标是使新生尽快适应新校园生活。,41/115,补语（宾语补语、主语补语）,We consider greed,a source of evils,.,我们认为贪婪是罪恶源头。,Greed is considered,a source of evils,.,Parents should encourage their kids,to take part in more rewarding activities,.,父母应该勉励孩子参加更多有益活动。,Kids should be encouraged,to take part in more rewarding activities,.,42/115,People under great work stress find life,frustrating and depressing,.,处于巨大工作压力下人们以为生活另人沮丧和压抑。,People are found,frustrated and depressed,when they are told the truth about their diseases.,当病人知道自己病情真相时，他们会沮丧和压抑。,43/115,同位语,Tom,a doctor,is a very nice man.,Tom,那个医生，是个非常好人。,The fact,that a nation should protect its cultural heritage,is very essential.,国家保护文化遗产很主要。,44/115,广告给我们提供很多有用信息。,Advertisements supply us a lot of useful information.,简单句：,45/115,人们变得越来越自私和贪婪。,People are becoming,increasingly,selfish and greedy.,46/115,旅游者有机会体验一个完全不一样文化。,Tourists have chance to experience a completely（entirely/totally）different culture.,47/115,8月和9月期间汽车价格波动。,fluctuate,The price of cars fluctuates between August and September.,48/115,电视观众人数在晚上8点到10点之间急剧上升。,TV viewers,climb significantly,The number of TV viewers climbs significantly between 8 pm and 10pm.,49/115,妇女暴力事件最近几十年急剧上升。,female violence,rise,dramatically/sharply/significantly,in recent decades,Female violence has risen dramatically in recent decades.,50/115,伴随经济快速发展，环境也在不停地恶化。,worsen/deteriorate,The environment has been worsening/deteriorating along with the rapid development of economy.,51/115,克隆技术是违反自然和不道德。,cloning,unnatural,not ethically correct,Cloning is unnatural and not ethically correct.,52/115,网上一些信息是误导人和带有坑骗性。,on the Internet,misguiding and cheating,Some information on the Internet is misguiding and cheating.,53/115,这个方案听起来相当令人信服和含有建设性。,project,convincing and constructive,This project sounds quite convincing and constructive.,54/115,逃避城市污染最好方法就是搬到乡下去。,escape,urban pollution,rural areas,The best way to escape urban pollution is to move to rural areas.,55/115,许多稀有物种处于灭绝边缘。,rare species,be on the edge of,extinction,Many rare species are on the edge of extinction.,56/115,巨大工作压力是家庭破裂主要原因。,heavy work pressure,family breakdown,the major reason,Heavy work pressure is the major reason of family breakdown.,57/115,不良生活习惯有害健康。,improper living habits,impair,Improper living habits impair our health.,58/115,打游戏机浪费父母血汗钱。,computer games,waste/squander,hard-earned money/cash,Playing computer games squanders parents hard-earned money.,59/115,旅游业无限制发展破坏生态平衡。,unrestricted,break,the ecological balance,Unrestricted development of tourism breaks the ecological balance.,60/115,跳槽给人们展示才艺机会。,job-hopping,offer an opportunity,show/display ones talents,Job-hopping offers people an opportunity to show their talents.,61/115,该表格向我们展示了关于性别和兴趣之间关系调查结果。,table,show,a survey on,the relationship between gender and hobbies,The table shows us the results of a survey on the relationship between gender and hobbies.,62/115,担心生活令许多人生病。,the stressful life,The stressful life makes many people sick.,63/115,急剧上升失业率使人沮丧和压抑。,the soaring unemployment rate,frustrated,depressed,The soaring unemployment rate makes people frustrated and depressed.,64/115,英语中，人们称肥胖人为沙发土豆。,name sb./sth.,couch potato,In English,people name fat people couch potatoes.,65/115,我们认为摄像头安装是对人隐私侵犯。,the installation of cameras,consider(to be)/regardas,an infringement on peoples privacy,We consider the installation of cameras（to be）an infringement on peoples privacy.,66/115,互联网使我们很轻易接触到全世界最新资讯。,the Internet,enable sb.to do,have easy access to,the latest information,The Internet enables us to have easy access to the latest information worldwide,67/115,教授提议政府拆除市区里旧房子来改进城市形象。,expert,advise sb.to do sth.,demolish,in the downtown area,promote the city image,Experts advise the government to demolish the old houses in the downtown area to promote the city image.,68/115,并列句：,两个或以上独立分句,并列连词或连接性副词,各分句主谓完整,各分句意思同等主要，相互独立,69/115,主要连词：,and，but，or，neithernor，yet,惯用连接副词：,however，therefore，nevertheless，as a result，instead，thus，in contrast，at the same time，on the other hand，consequently，in addition，furthermore,70/115,把小孩送到寄宿学校是个好主意，不过对于许多家庭而言，它是个奢侈梦想。,boarding school,a luxury,Sending children to a boarding school is a good idea,but,it is a luxury to many families.,71/115,许多广告确实提供了相关产品主要信息，然而，其中一些却是误导人和带有坑骗性广告。,Many advertisements do give important information about products；however，some of them are merely misleading and cheating.,72/115,要保护野生动物，不然生态平衡会被打破。,the wildlife,the ecological balance,The wildlife should be protected;otherwise,the ecological balance will be broken.,73/115,看电视是一个廉价娱乐方式，另外，它还是学习英语好路径。,cheap/inexpensive form of entertainment,a good way to do sth.,Watching TV is an inexpensive form of entertainment;additionally,it is a good way to learn English.,74/115,广告在美国商业中起着主要作用，而且它对国家经济有着极大影响。,play/perform,an,important/significant,role in,produce,great/enormous,influence on,Advertising performs a significant role in American business;besides,it produces enormous influence on the nations economy.,75/115,旅游业对当地经济有主动影响。比喻说，当地人能够靠把纪念品卖给游客盈利。,produce/exert favorable influence on,the local economy,the locals,souvenirs,Tourism exerts favorable influence on the local economy;for instance,the locals can earn money by selling souvenirs to the tourists.,76/115,那家企业整天制造毒气，所以，附近居民患癌症百分比急剧上升。,produce poisonous gas,day and night,the incidence of cancer,residents nearby,rise sharply,The company produces poisonous gas day and night;consequently,the incidence of cancer among residents nearby rises sharply.,77/115,复合句：,一个主句和一个或多个从句,主句表示主要意思,从句表示次要意思,优点：主次分明、,防止过多使用独立简单句或并列句,降低无须要重复,表示愈加简练和完整,78/115,采取有效办法来结束日益恶化空气污染势在必行。,imperative,end/put an end to,It,is imperative,to take some actions to end the worsening air pollution,.,It,is imperative,that,some actions should be taken to put an end to the worsening air pollution,.,79/115,谁对老年人负责这个问题明天将被讨论。,Who,will be responsible for the senior citizens,will be discussed tomorrow.,我将要讲内容非常主要。,What,I am going to say,is very important.,80/115,人们普遍认为太空探索能促进科学事业发展。,It is commonly/widely/generally,believed/accepted/acknowledged that,space exploration,improve/promote/boost,It,is commonly believed,that,space exploration can promote the development of science.,81/115,有些人认为旅游业发展会对传统文化产生一些负面影响。,think/believe/hold,exert/produce/bring aboutimpact/influence/effect on,Some people hold,that,the development of tourism exerts some adverse impact on traditional culture,.,82/115,许多教授怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一官方用语。,expert,doubt,the only global official language,Many experts doubt,whether,English should be used as the only global official language.,83/115,一个迫切问题是许多稀有物种正处于灭绝边缘。,a pressing issue,rare species,be on the edge of extinction,A pressing issue is,that,many rare species are on the edge of extinction.,84/115,事实是很多动物被用于医学研究。,medical research,The fact is,that,many animals are used in medical research,.,这就是为何广告被认为是垃圾原因。,TV commercials,This is,why,TV commercials are regarded as rubbish,.,85/115,国家保护文化遗产这个事实很主要。,protect,cultural heritage,The fact,that,a nation should protect its cultural heritage,is very essential.,86/115,有证据显示，英语已经成为网络主要语言。,There is evidence that,dominant language online,There is evidence,that,English has been the dominant language online.,87/115,越来越多人赞同广告是有效信息交流工具这种说法。,There is a growing consensus that,effective,information exchanges,There is growing consensus,that,advertising is an effective way of info