浅谈英文论文写作与投稿几点经验市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,浅谈英文论文写作与投稿几点经验,汇报人：,1/17,汇报内容,1.,论文写作中易犯几个错误,2.,投稿过程中几点注意事项,3.,关于审稿信回复,2/17,1.,论文写作中易犯错误,“删繁就简三秋树，标新立异二月花”,论文中数据并非越多越好；,要以最精炼语言和最精简图片把问题说清楚；突出重点，突出新意；,自己都解释不清楚公式、定理等等最好不要写上去，以免给审稿人留下把柄。,以最近,Materials Letters,接收文章为例,3/17,最初时：,Title,：“,Biomimetic Fabrication of Hydroxyapatite Assisted with Bamboo Membrane”,（无新意，不能吸引眼球）,8 figures,19 equations,26 pages,修改后：,Title,：“,Fabrication of,Flower-like,Hydroxyapatite Agglomerates with the Assistant of Bamboo Membrane”,5 figures,no equations,8 pages.,Reject,Accept,4/17,“提要法”,非常有用,能够找几篇与自己想要撰写文章相近文件（最好是大牛写），看看人家是怎么组织内容，分别总结他们写作提要；,在此基础上理清思绪，列出自己提要；,开始动手写作。,“站在巨人肩膀上”来构思我们论文。,关于文章结构组织：,5/17,The flower-like,hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were,investigated intensively,through a unique designed crystallizer.Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory,and also,the influences of various factors,on the morphology and crystalline of the agglomerates such as temperature,pH value,and holding time,were,furthermore explored,in detail.,Via the,SEM,FESEM,FETEM and XRD,it was clear that,with higher temperature,larger pH value,and longer holding time the formation of,flower-like,hydroxyapatite agglomerates,are produced with better crystalline,which is,certain significance of,the formation process of bone.,例子,（,Colloids&Surfaces B,）：,*注意：上文中蓝色标出地方都是有问题,关于英文写作：,6/17,The flower-like,hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were,intensively investigated,through a unique designed crystallizer.Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory.,In addition,the influences of various factors,such as temperature,pH value,and holding time,on the morphology and crystallinity of the agglomerates,were,studied,in detail,by means of,FESEM,TEM and XRD.,It was found that,flower-like,hydroxyapatite agglomerates with high crystallinity,can be produced under higher temperature,larger pH value,and moderated holding time,which is,significant to,the formation process of bone.,主编,Dr.Brush,（英国人）将其修改为,：,7/17,多读,欧美人,写文件，学习其写作方法，将好句子统计下来，自己写文章时就能够用到；多积累，培养语感；,写作时尽可能使用短简单句，长难句往往让人看得很费劲，并轻易留下把柄；多跟写作经验丰富老师和同学交流，请他们帮忙修改。,排版尽可能清楚、整齐：字体普通为,Times New Roman,，,字号普通为小四,，,2,倍行距,；,为了便于审稿，最好加上行号；,Tips,：,8/17,2.,投稿过程中几点注意事项,投稿前一定要先看清楚目标期刊,Author Guideline,，普通会相关于稿件类型、字数、图片、排版要求说明。可在期刊主页中找到。,比如通讯类论文普通要求不超出,3000,单词，图片不超出,5,幅，有要求更少。,有期刊会要求使用给定模板。,比如,Wiley,数据库,Advanced materials,Small,等；英国皇家化学会,(RSC),期刊,Chemical Communications,Journal of Materials Chemistry,等都要求使用指定模板。,一定要先看清楚期刊,Scope,，这一点很总要,以最近,Chemical Communications,接收文章为例,9/17,最初,：,Small(IF6),Advanced MaterialsIF8),Title,：“,Sea Cucumber-Like Hydroxyapatite:Cation-Exchange Membrane Assisted Synthesis and Application for Simultaneous Determination of Lead(II)and Cadmium(II),”,拒稿理由：不符合投稿范围，内容偏重于电化学分析，过于专业化,改投,1,：,Biosensors&Bioelectrics(IF5),拒稿理由：不符合投稿范围，内容不是生物传感器,改投,2,：,Electrochemical Communications(IF4),拒稿理由：不符合投稿范围，提议改投分析化学类期刊,改投,3,：,Talanta(IF3),拒稿理由：不符合投稿范围，提议另投它刊,Give up,？,10/17,最终：,Title:“,Sea Cucumber-Like Hydroxyapatite:Cation-Exchange Membrane Assisted Synthesis and,Application for Ultra-sensitive Heavy Metal,”,Chemical Communications(IF5),25/1,投出,，,14/2,收到主编信：,Dear Dr Zhang:,I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been recommended for publication in ChemComm subject to revision in line with the attached reports,.,11/17,要多跟老师和有经验学长们交流；,不轻易放弃，在对数据结果有把握基础上要勇于挑战影响因子高期刊。,Tips:,12/17,3.,关于审稿信回复,“谦虚诚恳、巧妙避重就轻”,例子,(CC),：,The authors argue that the“large surface area”of the cucumber-like hydroxyapatite nano-structure(used to prepare the electrode)is one of the(main)factors conferring an advantage to the electrode.I would go along with that,but it would be good to quantify what is the magnitude of that surface area.,13/17,Answer:,Thank the referee for the comments.,A definitive surface area value in not very informative in this case,asthe surface coverage will alter the surface area and thus a value is not very useful,but rather the magnitude relative to the carbon paste electrode is more informative and can be ascertained by comparing the size of the peak heights for the SW-voltammetry,of the cucumber-like hydroxyapatite to the CPE electrode which indicates the current observed from HAp is much higher in comparison with nearly neglected current from CPE electrode.,14/17,结果：,Dear Dr Zhang,Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript.I am satisfied with the changes you have made,and I am therefore pleased to inform you that your paper has been accepted for publication in ChemComm.Proofs for correction will be sent to you by e-mail in due course.,15/17,Tips:,碰到“刁钻”审稿人不要慌张，先诚恳地感激他对论文提出问题，必定他意见是正确，然后用“,However”,等词转折，提出自己观点、说清依据；,千万不能直接删掉原稿中“有问题”内容，也不能编造数据。,防止选择自己研究领域“大牛”作审稿人，不然被拒可能性较大，除非是我们认识人。,16/17,预祝各位同学论文顺利发表！,17/17,