2023年MBA联考英语作文模板讲义.doc

第一类：图表分析

P. 69 2023真题
范文：
[1] What is illustrated in the diagram above shows us clearly that dramatic change have taken place in the number of recruitment of Master of Engineering in the past several (seven) years. [2] According to the figures given in the diagram, we can see the number of recruitments of ME was on a steady rise all the time. [3] In the year of 1998, the recruitment of ME was only about 2500, but within no more than seven years, the number attained to more than 35,000 in 2023.

[4] Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. [5] First of all, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and society, the persons with specific abilities are badly needed, especially in high-technology industries. [6] What's more. ME can enable people to find a high-paying job easily. [7] It is said that nearly 100% job hunters with ME can get an ideal post in China nowadays. [8] Furthermore, the conception of life-long learning has been commonly accepted by so many Chinese young people that most of them choose to study further a few years after graduation.

[9] Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number of recruitment of ME will keep increasing in the forthcoming ten years.

模板提炼
Para. 1 描述
图表内容：
1. What is shown in the diagram above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the number of (填数字).
2. As depicted in the graph, the past (填数字) years have seen/ witnessed some important/ dramatic changes with regard to (填单词).

总体变化：
1. Obviously, the number of (填单词) has shown a steady rise/ fall/ increase/ decrease over the past few years.
2. The past (填数字) years have witnessed a steady rise/ fall/ decline of the number of (填单词).

详细数据：
1. In the year of (填年份), (填句子) while it grew to (填数字) in (填年份).
2. Compared with (填年份), the number of (填单词) rose 10% in (填年份).
3. In comparison with (填年份), the number of (填单词) fall 10% in (填年份).

练习：

2023年作文真题
复合数据指代对象
As is depicted in the diagram, the past few years have witnessed the apparent changes that have taken place in mobile-phone subscriptions across the world. The mobile-phone subscription number in developed countries increased slowly, rising from about 0.6 billion in 2023 to around 1 billion in 2023. By contrast, the number of mobile-phone users in developing countries was on a sharp rise, surging from around 0.7 billion in 2023 to around 4 billion in 2023.

Para. 2 分析 原因/ 影响
原因总述：
1. Some driving factors/ forces that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows.
2. Some possible reasons/ driving forces behind the above-mentioned changes could be as follows.
3. It’s not difficult for us to find some factors to account for this rapid growth/ sharp decline.
原因提出与分析：

影响总述：
1. So far as I’m concerned, I believe that such changes will result in some consequences.
2. It follows that some remarkable effects may inevitably/ naturally come up.
影响提出与分析：

原因总结：（六大原因）
1. 经济增长

2. 生活水平提高，收入增长

3. 都市化，现代化

4. 全球化，信息化，老龄化

5. 技术进步

6. 个人态度，观念，意识

Para. 3 总结：预测/ 提议
预测：
1. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number of (填单词) will continue to climb/ decline in the forthcoming years.
2. As discussed above, it's not surprising to see the rising/ falling trend of (填单词). In my opinion, this trend will continue for a while in the future.
3. From what we have discussed, we can safely come to the conclusion that these changes will continue in the future.

提议：
政府措施
1. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is time that we put/ placed / laid considerable special emphasis on the development/ change/ growth of (填单词).
2. There is no denying/ little doubt that special/ adequate/ considerable/ further attention must be paid/ called/devoted to the problem of (填单词).
3. Obviously/ Clearly/ Apparently, there is very little chance that (填句子) unless there is an immediate action/ common realization of (填单词).

民众意识
1. We should make efforts to arouse people's awareness/ concern of (填单词).
We should make efforts to raise public awareness of (填单词).
We should endeavor to cultivate people's awareness of (填单词).
2. Public awareness should be raised/ aroused of (填单词).
3. The public should be educated to be more self-conscious of (填单词).
4. Everyone should realize the truth that the issue/ problem of (填单词) concerns not only the government but all of us.
5. Popularizing the national sense of (填单词) can gradually better the worsening situation in/ problem of (填单词)
Popularizing the national sense of saving water and using water economically can gradually better the worsening situation in water resources.
Popularizing the national sense of environmental protection can gradually better the worsening problem of environmental degradation.

第二类：现象分析/ 看图说话

现象分析
例：社会上酒后驾车现象分析
范文：
(现象总述) These days, one of the most controversial topics arousing general concern is drink-driving. (现象详细描述) According to the data given by the relevant government, as many as 89% of the drivers surveyed have such experiences. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it. Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
(原因分析) Drink-driving is actually a matter of great complexity, which can be traced to a variety of factors. First of all, some drivers firmly believe that they are able to drink much wine and a little cannot make them drunk. What's more, it's often found that there are still some who live under the delusion that they own excellent driving skills and wine will not influence their performance in the slightest. In addition, on some occasions one cannot avoid drinking for the sake of business.
(提议) As the situation is becoming worse, some serious consequences have come up. Accordingly, we should take immediate measures to put an end to the current situation. In my opinion, our government should play an active role in eliminating this social problem.

现象总述：
1. Nowadays a growing number of people begin to realize/ be aware of/ notice the importance/ significance/ seriousness of the problem of (填单词).
2. Recently the topic/ issue/ problem of (填单词) has been in the limelight.
has brought into focus.
has aroused public attentive concern.
3. Recently the (填单词) has become the focus/ concern of the public.
4. One of the universal pressing/ burning/ urgent problems/ issues we are faced with/ confronting us is that (填句子).
5. The past few years have witnessed the emergence of a widespread social phenomenon, that is, (填句子).

看图说话

What a vivid and interesting cartoon The cartoonist depicts the image of a hen assuring the public that the eggs she lays are completely round, without any square corners, and that they all have shells and yolks. Then what on earth can we learn from this cartoon?
It is beyond any doubt that what the picture intends to convey is far reaching. By satirizing the phenomenon of making high-sounding promises for nothing but one's own duty the cartoonist reminds us that such phenomenon is not rare/ isolated in our society and life, but rather common. According to a recent newspaper survey, administration departments promise efficient performance of their tasks, without any bribery involved. Again, commercial enterprises promise to offer excellent products at reasonable prices and with warm services. In short, these days, it has turned out to be a growing trend worth our great concern.
Considering the possible negative aspects of doing this, we may come up with some tentative suggestions as follows. First of all, the authorities concerned have to make relevant rules and regulations to these promises. What's more, the public should be educated to be more self-conscious. In addition, we have to take practical actions to enhance our present social atmosphere.

画面描述
1. From the picture above we can see (填句子).
2. The cartoon/ picture vividly depicts an inspiring scene, in which (填句子).
3. As is clearly shown/ illustrated/demonstrated by the picture/ cartoon, (填句子).
4. What a vivid and thought-provoking cartoon/ picture!
We can see a vivid and thought-provoking picture above, in which (填句子).

寓意论述
过渡句
1. Simple as it is, the symbolic meaning the picture conveys is profound.
2. It is beyond any doubt that what the illustrator intends to convey in the picture is far reaching.

详细寓意
1. The pictures serve to remind us that (填句子).
2. It seems that the cartoonist is sending a message
about the significance of (填单词).
that (填句子).
3. Obviously, the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to
the phenomenon/ fact that (填句子).
the problem of (填单词).
4. The picture/ cartoon undoubtedly reveals a prevalent phenomenon that (填句子).
5. By satirizing the phenomenon of (填单词), the illustrator reminds us that such phenomenon is not rare/ isolated in our society and life, but rather common.
By demonstrating the phenomenon of (填单词), the illustrator reminds us that such issue cannot be neglected/ overlooked and needs greater attention.

练习

练习
1. 2023年真题 黄金周问题

2. 网络购物成为时尚

3. 大学生就业困难问题

第三类 正反对比论证
例：
人们对MBA教育旳见解不一，有人认为读MBA是挥霍时间金钱，而有人认为读MBA非常有用，谈谈你旳观点。

范文
现象引入These days, when asked about the issue of MBA education in China, people vary a lot in their viewpoints. 观点一分析A small group of people tend to hold that studying an MBA is a waste of money and time. A few of them even go to extremes to assert that MBA education should be cancelled. One of the facts they like to quote is that numerous entrepreneurs are self-made without any business education.
观点二分析 Despite the arguments above, there are still a sizable percentage of people in strong favor of MBA education. According to them, quite a number of factors contribute to this idea, of which the first and foremost one 理由一 is that as our economy grows rapidly, MBA education in China is not only useful to the individuals in particular but also to the society as a whole. 理由二 What's more, to succeed in today's competitive marketplace, the advanced management skills and knowledge is of vital importance for any ambitious individuals. The MBA education can widen the student's horizon in order to better prepare them for their future careers.
So far as I am concerned 提出自己旳观点, the latter viewpoint seems more convincing, and therefore more appealing to me. In fact, however sound the arguments of the former view may be, they only skim the surface of the problem. Admittedly, MBA is faced with a difficult situation now in our country and some people even have deep doubts about its value. But From a development perspective, the MBA education will benefit both the society and individual in many ways. Therefore, greater importance should be attached to MBA education in our country.

模板

现象引入 These days when asked about the issue of (填单词), people vary a lot in their viewpoints.
观点一分析 A small group of people tend to hold that (填句子). 详细例子 Some statistics appear to support their view: (填句子).
观点二分析 Despite the arguments above, there are still a sizable percentage of people in strong favor of (填单词). 详细例子According to them, there are quite a number of factors contributing to this idea, of which the first and foremost one is that (填句子).
So far as I am concerned (提出自己观点), the latter/ former viewpoint seems more convincing, and therefore more appealing to me. In fact, however sound the arguments of the former/ latter view may be, they only skim the surface of the problem. 分析自己旳观点 (填句子). Therefore (点明自己旳观点) , (填句子).