任务型写作指导广东市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,summary,?,Writing,How to write a,Welcome,1/35,IV.写作,(共两节,满分40分),第一节:基础写作,第二节:读写任务,(共1小题,满分25分),请依据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150词左右英语短文.,任务说明 请认真阅读下面短文,然后完成以下任务:,1),概括短文内容关键点,该部分词数大约,30-50字左右;,),Leading in,2/35,Summary:,Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.,摘要,Warming up,3/35,Preparation for writing a summary,Find key words,Find key sentences,Find the main idea,Warming up,4/35,任务型写作-归纳大意写作,仔细阅读所给文段.,找出每一个段落主题句(topic sentence),并用下划线划出。注意首句和首段标准。,依据题目标详细要求，审清要写短文题材和体裁如“讲话/演讲稿”、书信、日志、通知、记叙文、说明文或议论文（,比较少是议论文,）等等。从整体上把握好文章格式和结构。,依据要求和主题以及自己要表示观点，确立好,标题,依据找出每一个段落主题句，用同义词、短语或句子，经过恰当关联词或过渡词串写成个句子。（30词）,5/35,Passage I,How to choose a career,1.,At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance.,2.,Most students are confused about what career to choose.,3.,They need to be told what to do.,4.When students choose a career themselves,they usually pick one they dont know much about.,5.,When they get a job,they discover they dont like it,then all their education and training is wasted.,6.,If careers were assigned instead of chosen,society would always have the right number of workers.,7.,Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher.,8.,And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.,6/35,How to choose a career,1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance.,2.,Most students are confused about what career to choose.,3.,They need to be told what to do,.,4.,When students choose a career themselves,they usually pick one they dont know much about.,5.,When they get a job,they discover they dont like it,then all their education and training is wasted.,6.,If careers were assigned instead of chosen,society would always have the right number of workers.,7.,Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher.,8.,And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.,7/35,Task,Summary,At fifteen,students should know what career they will have in the future based on their school performance.They need instructions.Society pays when young people choose the wrong career.(30 words),8/35,Task,:Write a summary of passage,Lets have a try!,Read the passage,and write a summary,Group work,9/35,Task Two,Recently,students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.30%of us think space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution.On the other hand,70%think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it.We use satellites for communication and weather forecast.Also,space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.Whats more,with further space research,we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.,10/35,Task Two,1,Recently,students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.,2,30%of us think space exploration is not worthwhile.,3,They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.,4,And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution.,5,On the other hand,70%think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it.,6,We use satellites for communication and weather forecast.,7,Also,space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.,8,Whats more,with further space research,we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.,11/35,Task Two,Part,:,Part,:,Part:,Three parts:,How many parts can we group the passage into?,Sentence One,Sentences Two-Four,Sentences Five-Eight,12/35,section,:,Recently,students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring,.,section,:,30%of us think space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution.,WhatA survey on whether,(Result)Disagreement,Task Two,What does the writer want to tell us in each part?,13/35,Task Two,section,:,On the other hand,70%think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it.We use satellites for communication and weather forecast.Also,space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.Whats more,with further space research,we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.,(Result)Agreement,14/35,Task Two,Outline,because,and,.,While,because,and,.,A survey on whether space is worth exploring,What:,Disagreement:,Agreement:,not worthwhile;,too far awayour daily life;,a waste of money.,worth;benefit a lot;solve problem of communication,weather forecast,energy shortages,even the population.,15/35,Task Two,A survey,whether space is worth exploring,of our class,shows 30%of the students think it unnecessary,because,the exploring has little to do with our daily life,and,it will be a waste of money.,While,70%think it worthwhile,because,it brings us benefit,and,helps to solve the problem of communication,weather report,energy shortage,and even population problem.,(64words),Summary,16/35,Task Two,A survey,whether space is worth exploring,of our class,shows 30%of the students think it unnecessary,because,the exploring which wastes money has little to do with our daily life.,While,70%think it worthwhile,because,it brings us benefit.,(42words),Summary,17/35,What should you pay attention to,when writing a summary?,Focus on main ideas and omit(省去)examples,specific details,and minor supports,.,2.,Mainly use the words and phrases in the,original passage.,Do not,include your own opinion,but be sure to,use our own words,.(主要引用原文词句,不能添加自己看法,，不过要用自己语言概括）,3.,Write it in the,third,person.（第三人称）,To sum up,suggestions,18/35,Change unnecessary clauses into phrases,2.Change useless phrases into single words,3.Change the sentence structure(结构),4.Change the voice(语态)of the sentence,5.Use the synonyms(同义词),To sum up,About the,language,19/35读写任务型写作模板,标题,第一段:,第二段:,第三段:,概括所给短文内容关键点,约30字,过渡词引出主题句-自己观点-理由,约105字,总结句,约15字,20/35,标题,标题是段落中心思想精练表示形式。依据所写短文内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，确定标题；（假如没有要求，能够不写）,Is time more valuable than money？,On Smoking,How to make friends？,Happiness,Is watching TV a good thing?,My view of money/time/pollution,My attitude toward building a car factory,21/35,第一段：概括所给短文内容关键点,注意：利用原文中所给语言材料，用自己话来写；概括后文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。,写作详细方法和要求:,第一段概括要做到,开门见山,:比如:,According to the passage,we know,This article is mainly about,The writer states that,2.,第一段要做到,有层次感,:,必要时概括段中利用,firstly,secondly,lastly,或but,so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。,3.第一段概括要,抓住关键点,语言精练:,22/35The writer tells us that,the parents should also do something about education.,To start with,parents should provide friendly atmosphere.,Next,parents should help their children become more independent and responsible.,Parents Help Is Important,23/35,第二段:,过渡词引出主题句-自己观点-理由,开头用语：,I do agree with the author,In some way,I agree with,but,Every coin has two sides.It is right in that,but,This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.,It is definitely not like that.As a matter of fact,In my opinion,From my personal point of view,As far as Im concerned,24/35,第三段,最终一段,:,总结句开头用语：,In conclusion,In short,In general,In a word,In belief,On the whole,All in all,25/35,Examples:,1),All in all,the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents,but also the responsibility of the whole society.,2),In a word,smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors,so it should be strictly forbidden.,3),In conclusion,we value money but cant put money above everything else.,26/35,读写任务型,写作方法,总结,27/35,写作详细方法和要求:,第一段概括要做到开门见山:比如:,According to the passage,we know,This article is mainly about,The writer states that,28/35,2.做到整体语篇和概括段层次感要强,如:,1)整体语篇用连接词等引出每一段,第一段:According to 约30词/约3句,第二段In my opinion,约105词/约10句,第三段:All in all,约 15词/约2句,2)概括段中利用,firstly,secondly,lastly,或but,so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。,29/35,3.重视以下几点:,1)每一段开头句,做到正确无误,引人入胜;,2)文中要有亮点,如地道表示,谚语或名言;,3)句子要精练简练,做到不罗嗦,控制在十五个句子左右,比如:能用非谓语做定语或状语就不要用定语从句或状语从句,4.一定要留有时间进行检验,防止小语法错误扣印象大分;,5.重视字体美化,卷面整齐。,30/35,.Continue to finish writing the next part of the,composition and exchange with your partner,and evaluate each others composition according,to the checklist.,Home work:,Checklist:,1.All main points included?,2.In your own words?,3.Insert any transitional words?,4.Any grammar,spelling,and punctuation(标点)mistakes?,31/35,读写训练,English Weekly No.21,32/35,.,Optional work:Write a summary of Passage,Home work:,33/35,Any questions,?,34/35,Thank You,Good luck&Successs ahead!,Your criticism will be appreciated!,35/35,