定语从句与写作公开课.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Attributive clause,Grammar and writing,1/32,Lead-in,Enjoy the song-the one you love,I know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone,but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love,I know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone,but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love,2/32,Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars above,3/32,Practice of the Attributive clause,1.,A plane is a machine _can fly.,2.,The car _my uncle bought last week,was stolen.,3.,The man_is walking on the playground is,my old friend.,4.,The woman _ you saw in the park,is our English teacher.which/that,(which/that),who/that,(who/that),4/32,5.I saw a woman _bag was stolen.,6.The reason _he was late was that he got,up late.,7.I still remember the day _I first came to Beijing.,8.It is an important day _ I will never forget.,9.The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful.,whose,why,when,Which/that,Which/that,5/32,定语从句在写作中应用,6/32,Part1:,高考满分作文中定语从句观赏：,年全国高考新课标,你知道，我叔叔李明要去,你居住,城市参加一个会议。,You know,my uncle Li Ming is going to the city,where you live,to attend an international meeting.,我让叔叔带去,你想要,中国画。,Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting,you have asked for before.,7/32,2.,年广东高考,那些,做普通简单工作,人也在推进着社会发展。,Those,who do simple and ordinary jobs,are also promoting the development of the society.,正如我们都知道那样，,扫大街是最为困难工作之一。,As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.,8/32,Part 2:,写作中定语从句主要作用,1.,增加词数,能够连接两个包含同一事物句子，防止单词重复和句式单一。,补充细节，以丰富文章内容。,9/32,Part 3:,怎样写出定语从句,题干中出现两句包括同一事物简单句。,Solution:1,找出这两个简单句中都出现了同一个事物。,2,将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外,一个句子中那个相同事物（注意关系词选取）,For example:,我们班是一个,大家庭。,这个大家庭,包含,17,个男生和,7,个女生。,10/32,Our class is a big,family.,The family,consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.,Our class is a big family,which,consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.,11/32,Practice:,把下面各题中句子合并为一个含有定语从句主从复合句,1,a.Seeing these changes,we cannot forget them.,b.They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.,_,_,答案：,Seeing these changes,we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.,12/32,2,a.I feel greatly honored to host the contest.,b.The contest is sponsored by the Students Union.,_,_,答案：,I feel greatly honored to host the contest,which is sponsored by the Students Union.,13/32,3,a.They sent the elderly some fruits,cleaned the rooms,and had a good chat with them.,b.The elderly always feel lonely.,_,_,答案：,They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits,cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.,14/32,4,a.The library is not far from here.,b.The writer often does some reading there.,_,_,答案：,The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here.,15/32,5,a.Ive always longed for the days.,b.I will be able to be independent then.,_,_,答案：,Ive always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent.,16/32,Practice:,1.,我最好朋友是李明，他外号叫河马。,2.,我不喜欢他外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。,3.,他居住在开封，在这里人们能够游览很多漂亮景点。,4.,我们过去经常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。,17/32,我最好朋友是李明，他外号叫河马。,My best friend is,Li Ming,.,His,nickname is hippo.,My best friend is Li Ming,whose,nickname is hippo.,18/32,I dont like his nickname.,The reason is that it deeply hurts him.,The reason,why,I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.,我不喜欢他外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。,19/32,她居住在开封，在这里人们能够游览很多漂亮景点。,He lives in Kai Feng.,People can visit lots of scenic spots,here,.,He lives in Kai Feng,where,people can visit lots of scenic spots.,(,注意此处不再有,here),20/32,我们过去经常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。,We used to attend painting class together.,I will never forget,the days,.,I will never forget the days,when,we used to attend painting class together.,21/32,2.,题干中只有一个孤立简单句,Solution:,找到这个简单句中中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。,For example:,开封是一个历史名城。,Kai Feng is a famous historic city.,Kai Feng is a famous historic city,which has a long history of more than 2700 years and large numbers of historic spots,such as the Iron Pagoda,Longting Park and so on.,有多久历史？因何知名？,22/32,Practice:,即将到来端午节是中国传统节日。,李明是一个热心肠人The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.,The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival,which is celebrated to honor our national hero,Qu Yuan.,(,节日目标,),23/32,李明是一个热心肠人。,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man.,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man,who always lends a hand to others.,(,详细化,),24/32,直击高考,（,年高考山东卷）,描述你假期打算（包含兼职，旅游，志愿者等）,（用定语从句增添做这些事情原因）,I would like to do a part-time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.,Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.,I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part-time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part-time job,Traveling is one of my choices,25/32,Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the attributive clauses.,God help those,who help themselves,.,2.He,who laughs last,laughs best.,3.He,who doesnt reach the Great Wall,is not a true man.,4.He,who is content,(,满足,)is always happy.,26/32,Challenge yourself!,27/32,依据以下句子，完成短文。,众所周知，北京已经成功地举行了,年奥运会。经过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一个国际语言，在和外国人交流中起着主要作用。本届奥运会上友好志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传输中国灿烂文化志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这么，才能为国家贡献自己力量。,注意：要使用定语从句,.,play apart/role in,seize the opportunity,make contributions to,28/32,As is known to us all,Beijing has successfully hosted the Olympic Games.Through the Olympics,China perfectly showed itself to the whole world.English,which is an international language,plays an important part in communicating with foreigners.Friendly volunteers,who made full use of the tool of English,as serving guests and athletes from all over the world during the Olympics,left deep impression on them.I desire to be a volunteer,who is a carrier for our splendid culture,some day.So now I should try my best to learn English well,by which I can make my contributions to my country.,29/32,写作训练,LI MING 是我们班同学。今年17岁。他个子不高留着短发。他父母都是老师，在油田二中工作。他家离学校不远。他学习很努力所以老师和学生们都很喜欢他。他经常帮助家里很穷学生。大家都很尊敬他。上大学是他理想之一。,30/32,Homework:,1.Polish the article we have written in the class.,2.Review the attributive clause.,2.Recite the new words.,31/32,Thank you!,32/32,