非谓语动词结合写作市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Non-finite Verbs in writing,非谓语动词在写作中应用,1/23,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue,is,our choice.,The next day,we set off early in the morning.,We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.,We were tired but happy.,What do you think of it?,年浙江省高考考试说明,(,写作,),考生应能,(1),清楚、连贯地传递信息，表示意思；,(2),有效应用所学语言知识。,2/23,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue,is,our choice.,The next day,we set off early in the morning.,We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.,We were tired but happy.,3/23,1.,Making our city greener,is,everyones duty,.,2.The government is determined to continue the green program.,3,.,I find my hometown changed so much.,4,.,Having fresh air,trees can reduce air pollution.,5,.,Every effort to make the program makes a difference.,5.,定语,2.,宾语,4.,状语,3.,宾补,1.,主语,找出非谓语动词，并判断成份,4/23,1.Looking from the top of mountain,the,city is beautiful.,2.,In,my,opinion,climb mountain,is a,n,enjoyable,thing.,3.,Wh,ich,team is good at cooking,?,A team called itself,thesupper cook,.,Correction,5/23,写作中非谓语动词常见错误,1,、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致,Looking from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful,.,Looked,from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful,.,6/23,写作中非谓语动词常见错误,2,、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语,2.In,my,opinion,climb mountain,is a,n,enjoyable,thing.,In,my,opinion,climbing,mountain is an enjoyable thing,.,7/23,写作中非谓语动词常见错误,3,、主动、被动含义混同,A team,call,ing,itself,the,supper cook,.,3,.Wh,ich,team is good at cooking,?,A team called itself,the,supper cook,.,A team,call,ed,the,supper cook,.,8/23,1.,It is high time we took part in some activities.,We want to make ourselves more healthy.2.,A girl,climbed so,hard that she,lost her temper,.,She complained about the long walk.,3.,The monitor has set a good example for us.,Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.,Connection,9/23,It is high time we took part in some activities.,We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities,to,make ourselves more healthy.,+,目标状语,10/23,Wangqi,climbed so,hard that she,lost her temper,.,She complained about the long walk.,Wangqi got so angry that she lost her temper,complaining,about the long walk.,伴随状语,+,11/23,The monitor has set a good example for us.,Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her,.,Having set a good example for us,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her,.,原因状语,+,12/23,高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气。,Step1,：拆分成几个简单句,(,汉字,),高考临近。,保持良好心态很主要。,它有利于减轻焦虑,（,relax,）,和勇敢地克服困难,。,Step2,：分别翻译这几个简单句,National College Entrance Examination is coming.,It is important to have a right attitude.,It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,13/23,Step3,：合并句子,With,National,College Entrance Examination,coming,it is important,to,have a right attitude,to,relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,National College Entrance Examination is coming.,It is important to have a right attitude.,It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence1:,14/23,Step3,：合并句子,With College Entrance Examination,coming,it is important,to,have a right attitude,which helps us to,relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming.,It is important to have a right attitude.,It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip:Try to use different,ways to express.,15/23,提议,有足够睡眠是必要。,原因,1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。,2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。,（,高考模拟）,要求1.,用,2-3,句话,表示表格内容,2.2-3,句话要有,连贯性,Having a try,16/23,提议,有足够睡眠是必要。,原因,1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。,2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。,Having a try,It is necessary to,have enough sleep.,Having enough,sleep,is necessary.,It will be an effective way to,improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy,is the base for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy,is the base for our further study and work.,17/23,Passage,：,Having enough sleep,is,necessary,because,it will be an effective way to,improve our learning in the class.,Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Tip:Never ignore the conjunction.,18/23,1.beggar,lie,sleep,2.Mr.Li,hurry,pay no attention to,3.stick out,，,trip over(,绊倒,),angry,A beggar,19/23,A beggar,Writing,2.,Mr Li hurried home,paying no attention to a beggar.,1.The beggar lay on the ground,sleeping,.,3.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping over Mr Li,which,made him very angry.,Make an ending,20/23,Exchange and discuss your partners composition,following the criteria.,Criteria,（标准）,Content,（内容）,Language,（语言）,Coherence,（连贯）,Pair work,21/23,A beggar,One day,hurrying,home,Mr.Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground,sleeping.,Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping Mr.Li over,which made him very angry.,Realizing,the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket,to,give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.,Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly,to run,after the note,making,Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.,22/23,Rewrite the composition,and hand it in.,Homework,23/23,