浙江省2019届中考英语总复习第三篇书面表达篇话题写作04旅行交通篇课件外研版.ppt

书面表达,话题写作（四）,旅行交通篇,【话题点睛】,旅游交通包含两个方面的话题,:,旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等,;,交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。,典例分析,注意,(1),短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥,;,(2),文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息,;,(3),词数,:80,100,所给的文章开头仅供选择,不计入总词数。,In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,文章主要围绕对“,A trip to the countryside or to the city,”展开,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出小组的选择与理由。表中要点已列出,具体如下,:,(1),开门见山,:,交代小组讨论的话题,;,(2),分开阐述,:,城市或农村各自的优缺点,;,(3),最后点题,:,权衡利弊,做出选择。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时,【写作架构】,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,到农村郊游你可以通过钓鱼或游泳来放松你自己。,(relax oneself),Taking a trip to the countryside can,by,or,.,2.,在大商厦里来回走也是很激动人心的。,(Its+,adj.,to do sth.),Its very,back and forth in large malls.,3.,我认为,我喜欢到农村旅游胜于到城市旅游。,(prefer to),In my opinion,I,a trip to the countryside,a trip to the city.,relax yourself,fishing,swimming,exciting to travel,prefer,to,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.Youre from the countryside.A trip to the city is better.(,用,if,改为复合句,),2.You can lie under the stars,enjoying the quiet night.(,改为用,and,连接的简单句,),3.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights.Traveling can broaden our mind.(,用not only,but also,改写句子,),If youre from the countryside,a trip to the city is better.,You can lie under the stars and enjoy the quiet night.,Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also broaden our mind.,【连句成文】,In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.,Taking a trip to the countryside can relax you by fishing or swimming.And the fresh air might be your favourite.Yet,you might not have many choices in transportation.,Of course,a trip to the city also has its advantages and disadvantages.If you like shopping,its very exciting to travel back and forth in large malls.You can visit museums to broaden your mind.Nevertheless such a trip might cost much.And the traffic jam might let you down.,If youre from the countryside,a trip to the city is better.There,youll learn what youve never thought of.,In my opinion,a trip to the countryside is better.There,you can lie under the stars,enjoying the quiet night.,拓展积累,【相关短语】,enjoy the sunshine,享受阳光,;one of the biggest mountains,最大的山之一,;have a picnic,野餐,;as everyone knows,众所周知,;be famous for,因闻名,;have a good trip,旅途愉快,;have fun doing sth.,做某事很有趣,;have a good time,玩得愉快,【参考谚语】,1.Travel broadens the mind.,旅游开阔思维。,2.He who travels far knows more.,远行者见识广。,3.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.,读万卷书,行万里路。,【旅途经历】,1.Yangzhou dishes may be,one of the reasons why,so many people are attracted by the city.,2.,When,we stayed there,we got lots of help from local people.They were very friendly to us.,3.,Only in this way,can you enjoy your summer holiday happily.,4.,It is said that,Hawaii is more beautiful,than any other,place in the world.,【旅途收获】,1.Traveling can,not only,help us see the best sights,but also,broaden our eyes to the outside world.,2.Traveling is like a story.We can,make friends,with others and g,et,help and love,from,others.,3.Traveling,is like,a war.,实战演练,A,假如你是,Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去,100,公里外的许村游玩一天。但自行车来回路程需要,8-9,小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师,Mr.Black,做好说明、沟通工作。,要求,(1),文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息,;,(2),词数,:110,左右。开头和结尾已给出,(,不计入总词数,),。,Dear Mr.Black,Im Lingling.My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferences,but Im afraid well have to make some changes.,_,Im looking forward to your reply.,Best wishes.,Lingling,One,possible,version,:,Dear Mr.Black,Im Lingling.My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferences,but Im afraid well have to make some changes.,Well visit a mountain village called Xucun,which is very famous for its old houses,fantastic sights and delicious food.Im sure you will like it.,However,it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike.Even if we set out at 7:00 a.m.,well get there at about 11:30.Going around the beautiful,cultural places,including some old houses all with a history of over 500 years,will take us at least 2 to 3 hours.Having lunch(local food and drinks)takes another hour.Whats more,its very hot here in summer.So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice.,Im looking forward to your reply.,Best wishes.,Lingling,B,2017,扬州,为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词。,参考词汇,Slender West Lake,瘦西湖,Five-pavilion Bridge,五亭桥,He Garden,何园,double-path corridor,复道回廊,要求,(1),必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥,;,(2),词数,:100,左右,(,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数,);,(3),不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Yangzhou!Im your tour guide.Yangzhou,my hometown,lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River._,_,_,_,_,_,I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.,One,possible,version,:,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Yangzhou!Im your tour guide.Yangzhou,my hometown,lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River.Yangzhou has a history of over 2,500 years.There are many interesting places to visit,such as Slender West Lake,Five-pavilion Bridge,He Garden,double-path corridor and China Paper-cutting Museum.,Slender West Lake is a national park in Yangzhou City.The Five-pavilion Bridge is the symbol of the Slender West Lake.He Garden is the best-known private garden of the late Qing Dynasty.China Paper-cutting Museum is in Yangzhou,too.Yangzhou paper-cutting can be dated back to the Sui Dynasty.,Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why so many people are attracted by the city.They are not only delicious but also colorful.,I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.,