九年级英语中考书面表达复习专题.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,九年级英语中考书面表达复习专题课件,How,can we write a,good,composition(作文)?,What is a good composition?,“一点”:有“亮点”.有独到之处。,“二整”:书写工整,卷面整洁。,“三要”:数量要达标,词汇和语法 结构要准确、上下文要连贯。,“四不行”:漏掉内容不行,写错体裁不行，用错人称不行，用错时态不行。,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封申请信。,姓名,王林,性别,男,本人特点,身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处,“爱心”表现,（见图片）,加入目的,1.,2.,要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；,2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；,3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；,4.词数：80-100字左右。,第一步：,要,认真审题,，明确写作,体裁,、,人称,、,时态,、,提示,和,要求,具体做法：,用笔勾画或写下,1:,体裁,2:,人称,3:,时态,4:,提示,5:,要求,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,姓名,王林,性别,男,本人特点,身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处,“爱心”表现,（见图片）,加入目的,1.,2.,1:体裁:申请信。,2:人称:“我”-第一人称,3:时态:一般现在时,4:提示:想加入俱乐部.,“我”的特点,爱心表现等.,5:要求:要写表格,图片中的,内容,80-100 字,加入的目的.,Thinking :,第二步：,列出写作提纲,(,Outline,)。,具体做法：,根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Write an,Outline,Introduction,介绍,Main body,正文,Conclusion,结束,I want to join,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,看表格,看表格,看图,自拟,I hope you will agree with me.,姓名/性别,易漏掉的要点！,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture 1,help,with,help,classmates,with,lessons,我的,I,often,help classmates with lessons.,Picture 2,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,give my seat to,give my seat to,people in need,I often,give my seat to people in need,on a bus,.,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,Picture 3,clean up,help,clean up the park,I often,help clean up the park.,连,恰当运用,关联,词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第三步：,加,加首尾,，使结构完整。,可以采取,总分总,结构或者,总分,结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第四步：,美,选好词句，,美化,文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Please write your own composition.,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student called,Yours,Wang Lin,Lets enjoy our own compositions!,Dear Chairman,I am a boy student from Class1,Grade 3.Id like to be,a member of the Helping Hands Club.My name is Wang Ling.,Im hard working and Im in good health.I often help others.,And be friendly to classmates.,When someone is in trouble,Ill go and help he or she.I,usually help the old people to cross the road.They often say,thanks to me.In the bus,Ill stand up when a women with her,son get on the bus.In every Satuarday,Ill go to center park,to pick the rubbish.,I want to take part in this club.,because of I want to help more people.,I will be glad if I am received.I am waiting for your answer.,yours,Wang Lin,小组合作互批评分标准 满分15分：,(1)找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1-3分；,（2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分；,（3）词数不够扣1分；,（4）单词拼写错3个扣1分；,（5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5-1分；,（6）时态用错扣1分；,（7）主谓不一致扣1分；,（8）惯用语、句型用法不当扣1分；,（9）书写不规范，卷面不整洁扣2分；,（10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3分；,Dear Chairman,I am a boy student from Class1,Grade 3.Id like to be,a member of the Helping Hands Club.My name is Wang,Ling.Im,hard working,and Im in good health.I often help,others.And,be,friendly to classmates.,When someone is in trouble,Ill go and help,he or she,.,I usually help the old people to cross the road.They often say,thanks to me.In the bus,Ill stand up,when a women with her,son get on the bus,.,In,every,Satuarday,Ill go to center park to,pick the rubbish.,I want to,take part in,this club,because of,I want to help,more people.,I will be glad if I am received.I am waiting for your answer.,yours,Wang Lin,hard-working,Im,him or her,E,clean it up,join,because,1分,其它六处错扣3分,只得,11,分,and give the seats to the,lady with a baby.,作文中,应避免,的几种常见,语言错误,：,1.时态错误(扣分多,一个时态错误扣分在,1,分左右)。,2.中国式的英语(不正确的英文表达会让,整句不得分,)。,3.单词拼写错误及大小写(单词拼写一定,要过关,)。,4.介词,代词,非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用(对单词的,词性,要,熟悉,)。,5.名词单复数(,细心,就可以避免的错)。,书面表达常见错误例句分析,1.I very like playing sports.,I like playing sports,very much,.,2.I study is very hard.,I study very hard or I am hardworking.,3.I think the city more beautiful.,I hope the city will be more beautiful.,4.I very want join to Helping Hands Club.,I want to join the Helping Hands Club,very much,.,5.I want to help more have troubles people.,I want to help the people,in trouble,.,6.I have a good healthy.,I am in good health.,I am healthy.,书面表达佳句欣赏,1.In the bus or subways,I usually give the seats to the people,who need them,.,2.I,enjoy the happiness,when I help others,away,from trouble.,3.In,the daily life,I often help the old people,cross the street,though we dont know each other,.,4.,Id be glad to,help the old people cross the road,and give seats to others on the bus.,5.I love helping,others,as the saying goes,“Giving is much better than receiving,.”,Thank You,