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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,怎样提升书面表示句子档次,Welcome,to our school,第1页,你英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地生日庆贺方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日方式。请你依据以下关键点写一篇短文：,一、通常方式,1生日聚会,2生日礼品,3生日祝福,二、我认为更有意义庆贺方式和理由,*词数100-120 （浙江卷）,第2页,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishes.Sometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.,But I think that its better to help other people.We know that its important to learn to help other people.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy,学生作品（1）,第3页,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually,a party is held so that people can get together.Best friends,as well as relatives,are going to be invited.Its polite to buy a small gift which stands for ones best wishes.Whats more,sending short messages on ones birthday is becoming more and more popular,as a result of its convenience.,However,as far as Im concerned,its more meaningful to care about others than about oneself.As is known to all,to give is better than to receive.Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world.Therefore,its of importance to learn to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can do you a lot of good.For one thing,people will help you in return in the future;for another,youll be happy.,As a result,I think it better to help others to spend ones birthday.,学生作品（2）,第4页,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually,a party is held so that people can get together.Best friends,as well as relatives,are going to be invited.Its polite to buy a small gift which stands for ones best wishes.Whats more,sending short messages on ones birthday is becoming more and more popular,as a result of its convenience.,However,as far as Im concerned,its more meaningful to care about others than about oneself.As is known to all,to give is better than to receive.Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world.Therefore,its of importance to learn to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can do you a lot of good.For one thing,people will help you in return in the future;for another,youll be happy.,As a result,I think it better to help others to spend ones birthday.,学生作品（2）,第5页,1.关键点齐全,2.较多语法结构和,高级,词汇,3.全文结构紧凑,高档书面表示要求：,第6页,1.时间：昨天下午放学后,请依据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词英语新闻,广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。,2.地点：回家路上,3.人物：高一（2）班两名男生田力和段凯,4.事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，以为好,玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在,地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。,5.警示：严格恪守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。,第7页,There,was,an accident,happened,to two students,in our school yesterday afternoon.(经典病句）,There was an accident,that happened,to two,students in our school yesterday afternoon.,(定语从句）,An accident,occurred,to,two students in our,school yesterday afternoon.（高级词汇）,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,第8页,Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by,side on the way home after school.They were,talking and laughing loudly.(,陈蝉),Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side,by side on the way home after school,talking,and laughing loudly.,（用分词合并）,第9页,The traffic lights turned red.They found it,was too late to stop the bikes.,The lights turned red,but,they found it was too,late to stop their bikes.(,黄颖),（用连接词连接）,Seeing the red traffic lights,they tried to stop but it was too late.,（用分词合并）,第10页,Ones left arm,was hurt,and,the others leg,was hurt too,.(,戴靓),Ones left arm,was broken,while,the others leg,got hurt,.,(,边昶)(防止用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）,One,had his left arm broken,while,the other,got,his leg hurt,./the other,was badly hurt in the leg,.),(,高级结构）,They were knocked off their bikes,one,with the,left arm broken,and the other,with one leg hurt,.,(,高级介词短语/独立主格结构）,(昭昭),第11页,5.If we dont obey traffic rules,we might die.,a.If we go against traffic rules,we might lose our,lives.,b.If we go against traffic rules,we might end up in,hospital.,c.Going against traffic rules might cost us our lives.,d.Dont risk our lives going against traffic rules.,(各种表示）,第12页,6,.He got up at 7 oclock.,（,使用各种句式,）,It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.,Not until 7 oclock did he get up.,(强调句）,（倒装句）,He didnt get up until 7 oclock.,第13页,1.I had a good idea.,a.A good idea occurred to me.,b.I came up with a good idea.,2.Dont worry.Well try to help you.,make every effort to,make great efforts to,spare no efforts to,try every means to,do all we can to,do what we can to,各种表示&高级词汇,第14页,Practice:,1.,There are 80%of the population live on farming.,2.,At 8 this morning,there were about 50 American,students came to visit our school.,80%of the population live on farming.,At 8 this morning,about 50 American students came to visit our school.,第15页,Practice:,（用分词合并）,He had finished his homework.,He went out to play football.,I was moved by his words.I decided to lend,him a hand.,Moved by his words,I decided to lend him a hand.,Having finished his homework,he went out to play football.,第16页,Practice:,（用连接词连接）,The police searched everywhere.The missing,boy could not be found.,The police searched everywhere,but the missing,boy could not be found.,Though,the police searched everywhere,the missing,boy could not be found.,第17页,Practice:,(防止用相同结构和词汇）,1.I like sports.I like music,too,.,I like sports and music as well.,I like sports as well as music.,My favorite subject is English while my sisters favorite subject is history.,My favorite subject is English while my,sisters is history.,b.,My favorite subject is English while my,sister likes history best.,第18页,My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa.,He had a book on his knees.,Practice:,（用介词短语）,My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa with a book on his knees.,第19页,提升句子档次小结：,1.用分词短语合并句子,用介词短语合并句子,用独立主格结构合并句子,用连接词连接句子,2.用高级结构和词汇,3.用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句,4.用不一样结构和词汇,第20页,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.School was over.Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike.They were talking and laughing happily.When they saw a car which was passing by,they started to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time.They fell off the bikes.Tianli broke his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg.,(,学生作文）,第21页,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,School was over.Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike.They were talking and laughing happily.,When they saw a bus which was passing by,they started to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.,The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.,The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time.,They fell off the bikes.Tianlis broke his his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg.,第22页,An accident happened to two students in our school,yesterday afternoon.,School was over.Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were,going home by bike.They were talking and laughing,happily.,An accident,occurred to,two students in our school,yesterday afternoon.,After,school was over,Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were,on their way home,by bike,talking and laughing,happily.,第23页,When they see a bus which was passing by,they started,to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.,The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.,Seeing,a,passing,car,they started to,chase,it,thinking,it great,fun,.,Unfortunately,the bus stopped,the moment,the traffic light turned red.,第24页,The two students were very close to the bus and they,couldnt stop their bikes in time.,They fell off the bikes.Tianlis broke his his left arm,and Dunkai hurt his leg.,The two students were,so,close to the bus,that,they,were not able to,stop their bikes in time.,As a result,they were,knocked off,the bikes,one with,his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt,.,第25页,An accident,occurred to,two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,After school was over,Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were,heading,home,by bike,talking and laughing,happily.,Seeing,a,passing,bus,they started to,chase,it,thinking,it was great,fun,.,Unfortunately,the bus stopped,the moment,the traffic light turned red.,The two students were,so,close to the bus,that,they,were not able to,stop their bikes in time.,As a result,they,were,knocked off,the bikes,one with his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt.,(95 words),第26页,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishesSometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.,But I think that its better to help other people.We know that its important to learn to help other people.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy,Improve this composition,try!,第27页,(1)Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,(2)Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.,（用where定语从句）(,3)They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishes.,（和并句子）,(4)Sometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular,（用which定语从句）,.,(5)But,(替换）,I think,（替换）,that its better to help other people.(6)We know that its important to learn to help others.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.(7)People will help you in return and youll be happy,（用For one thing,For another 替换）,.,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in,various,ways.,Usually,a party is held,where,best friends,as well as,relatives can get together and,have fun.,They usually buy a small gift,with which,to express their best wishes.,Sometimes,people send short messages too,which,is becoming very popular.,However,as far as Im concerned,its better to do something for others.,As is known to all,its of importance,to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can be not only,meaningful,but also do you a lot of good.,For one thing people will help you,in return,;for another,youll,get happiness out of that,.,第28页,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in,various,ways.,Usually,a party is held,where,best friends,as well as,relatives can get together and,have fun.,They usually buy a small gift,with which,to express their best wishes.Sometimes,people send short messages too,which,is becoming very popular.,However,as far as Im concerned,its better to do something for others.,As is known to all,its of importance,to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can be not only,meaningful,but also do you a lot of good.For one thing people will help you,in return,;for another,youll,get happiness out of that,.,In short,the best way to,celebrate our birthdays,is to,help others.,第29页,Thank you!,第30页,