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单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,Company Logo,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Unit 3 A Crime of Compassion,1/58,1.If you have ever witnessed the sufferings of a dying person,tell us the feelings that the scene evoked from you.,2.Do you think doctors and nurses should do everything within their means to try to save a terminally ill patient even when they know clearly all their efforts would mean nothing more than prolonging his suffering?,2/58,Topic for Discussion,Euthanasia,ju:nezi,or mercy killing,is one of the most controversial issues in the world.Some people maintain that one is entitled to choose when to die and how to die;some other people hold that the legalization of euthanasia might pose dangers for society,for it might be used as a pretext for murdering.Discuss the main ideas of either party and present your own view.,3/58,4/58,Argumentative Narration,What Is Argumentative Narration,If an essay is,basically an argumentative,one and the,chief means,used for argumentation is,narration,it is called argumentative narration.,Text Analysis,Huttmann begins the essay with the incident that the TV audience lodged strong accusations against her for murdering a patient she was supposed to care for.But her response does not follow immediately.,5/58,She withholds her response to the accusation until the last paragraph,where the audiences accusation of her is mentioned again,and her argument is presented.,Most of the essay is devoted to the narration of the painful dying process of a terminally ill cancer patient,which she witnessed.Based on the narrated incident her argument seems only a natural conclusion.,6/58,7/58,There seems to be a contradiction in the title A Crime of Compassion.What is it?,There are various kinds of crimes,but criminals can be anything but compassionate.It is hardly possible to associate compassion with any crime and being compassionate with a criminal.,8/58,to play God,to function as God,i.e.to decide when to terminate a persons life.Christians believe that only God has the right to decide when a persons life should end.,9/58,1.Huttmann begins her essay with a metaphor.Locate it and then explain it.(para.3),The first sentence of para.3:It was the Phil Donahue show where the guest is a fatted calf and the audience a 200-strong flock of vultures hungering to pick at the bones.,Huttmann likens herself(the guest of the talk show)to a fatted calf,and the audience to a flock of more than 200 vultures hungering to pick at the bones.With the metaphor she intends to tell the reader that the way she handled the case of Mac was strongly disapproved of by the general public,and that theconcept of mercy killing was unacceptable to them.,10/58,Para.4,“Otherwise,he felt great.”,He had nothing wrong but some coughing.,Para.5,“without ever giving death a thought.”,None of us had ever thought that Mac would die.,11/58,Six months isnt such a long time in the whole scheme of things,but it was long enough to see him lose his youth,his wit,his macho,his hair,his bowel and bladder control,his sense of taste and smell,and his ability to do the slightest thing for himself.,Paraphrasing:,Six months shouldnt be considered a long period of time,but six months is an unbearably long passage of time when we had to see him gradually reduced from a strong and intelligent young guy to a helpless and disabled man.,在万物发展过程中，六个月并不长，但长得足以目睹他失去那么多东西：年轻身体、灵活头脑、强壮体魄、头发、控制大小便能力、味觉和嗅觉、还有一丁点儿自理能力。,12/58,When Mac had wasted away to a 60-pound skeleton,When Mac had been reduced to a 60-pound skeleton,waste away,(of a person or a part of the body)become progressively weaker and more emaciated,e.g.,She is dying of AIDS,visibly wasting away.,He became ill and began to waste away,.,13/58,i.v.solutions,i.v.is the abbreviation of intravenous,meaning within a vein,and i.v.solutions refers to the liquid substances infused directly into the vein of a patient for therapeutic purposes.,14/58,Para.6,“When Mac had wasted away to a sixty-pound skeleton kept alive by liquid food we poured down a tube,I.V.solutions we dripped into his veins,and oxygen we piped to a mask on his face,he begged us:Mercy for Gods sake,please just let me go.”,Suffering the disease,Mac was much weaker than before who cannot live without the instruments or medical substances.The treatment itself is a torture also.Mac could not bear the agony anymore and pleaded for death.,15/58,work their miracles:,resuscitate the patient who has stopped breathing,make the patient who almost dies alive again.Its a miracle process.,16/58,irrigate the big craters of bedsores,The verb irrigate normally means to supply water to land or crops to help growth.,In medicine,the word can be used to mean to apply a continuous flow of water or medication to an organ or a wound.,17/58,suction the lung fluids that threatened to drown him,drain the excessive lung fluids that threaten his life,18/58,Where in the essay can we find descriptions of Macs condition when he was being treated?Why do you think Huttmann is being so specific and detailed?(paras.6&7),Mostly in para.6,and the latter part of para.7.,She gives such detailed and specific descriptions of Macs condition to make vivid to the reader the horrifying sufferings Mac had to endure,ultimately to support her argument that a patient in such condition should be given the right to die if he should so request.,19/58,Para 7 当他第一次停顿呼吸时，护士按动按钮去呼叫遍布整个医院紧抢救命，然后派遣医疗小组赶去抢救这个病人。每次他停顿呼吸，有时一天会有两三次，医疗小队又会过来抢救他。医生和技术人员创造着他们奇迹然后离开。护士们会继续留在那里擦拭着从病人嘴里流出来唾液，冲洗掉充满他臀部因为褥疮而产生点点，抽吸掉几乎要把他淹死肺部液体，清理掉那些像碱液一样会燃烧他皮肤粪便，把营养液注入他胃部管道，把枕头放在他膝盖中间去减轻骨头与骨头碰触疼痛，每隔两个小时要换掉他病服以防被汗水浸湿。,20/58,that seemed woven into the fabric of my uniform,that seemed to have become an element of the fabric of my uniform,weave sth.into,include sth.as an integral part or element(of a fabric);include an element in a story,an artistic work,etc.,Some golden threads are woven into the fabric.,Argumentative paragraphs are naturally woven into Huttmanns narration.,21/58,And every night I prayed that Mac would die,that his agonized eyes would never again plead with me to let him die.,Paraphrasing:,Every night I spoke to God,wishing that He could let Mac go peacefully so that he would no longer look at me so painfully,begging me not to let him suffer anymore.,22/58,to be liable for negligence,to be held responsible for failing to perform my duty,be liable for,to be responsible for by law,to be legally answerable to,be liable to,be likely to do or to be something,likely to experience sth.(unpleasant),e.g.,Once you have contacted the credit card protection scheme,you are no longer liable for any loss that might occur.,He is suffering from hypertension(,高血压),and thus is liableto fall if he gets up too suddenly.,The low-lying areas are liable to floods during the rainy season.,23/58,To not do it isto be liable for negligence,at least in the eyes of many people,including some nurses.,Paraphrasing:,If we fail or refuse to resuscitate him,we are likely to be sued for criminal negligence,and at least many people,including some of our nurses,believe that we should be thus punished by law.,24/58,8.晚上我回到家试图擦洗掉已经渗透到我工作服腐烂肉味道。它在我头发里，在我汽车座位垫子里洗也洗不掉。天天晚上我请求着他万分痛苦双眼不要再哀求我让他死去。,9.天天早上我都去向医生请求一个不再紧急治疗命令。没有那个命令话，我们就不得不去抢救每个已经停顿了呼吸病人。他（Mac)医生就是其中一个相信只要有方法和知识去抢救病人，就一定要延长他们生命。不这么做就等于要对自己疏忽负责任，最起码在有些人眼里，这也包含一些护士。我想着假如Mac停顿了呼吸而我没有按动那个救援按钮，那么当我被控告作为一个杀人者，站在法官面前时，这一切会变得怎么样。,25/58,when no amount of pain medication stilled his moaning and agony,when his pain was so acute that no matter how much pain-relieving medication was used,his suffering could not be eased,still,vt.&vi.,e.g.,He clapped his hands to still the agitated audience.,When night fell,the village which was boisterous(,喧闹,),with tourists in the daytime stilled.,26/58,I wondered about a spiritual judge.,I wondered if there was a spiritual judge(as against a legal judge),who would be supportive of my decision not to push the code blue button,thus to put an end to all this.,27/58,“Was all this misery and suffering supposed to be building character or infusing us all with the sense of humility that comes form impotence?”,Does God inflict all this misery and suffering on us in order to build our character or let us learn humility by knowing that we are so tiny that we cannot rival with the destiny?,building character,developing his personal qualities(so that he could face up to the adversity better),28/58,10.在抢救Mac 52次后，当他头脑还足够清醒时，他再一次向我请求死亡，Maura也在我怀里瓦解了，当不论再多止痛药也无法停顿他呻吟和痛苦时，我在思索着一个精神审判。是不是全部痛苦都应该被拿去塑造个性或者使我们充满因为我们无能为力而带来所谓谦逊感。,29/58,self-righteous,adj.,having a certainty,especially an unfounded one,that one is totally correct or superior,He is critical of the monks,whom he considers narrow-minded and self-righteous.,他对僧侣们颇有微词，认为他们思想偏狭，自视清高。,30/58,meddle in,interfere in,e.g.,Young people today do not like their parents to meddle in their lives.,meddle with,touch or handle sth.without permission,e.g.,You can use my room but youre not supposed to meddle with my stuffs,especially my computer.,31/58,11.我们相信着只要经过科学就能救人错误观念，我们，整个医学界，是否已经变得太自大了？认为插手上帝工作也是我们责任，道德律令及法律义务，我们是否已经变得过于自认为是？我们真相信我们有这个权利去强制一个十分痛苦并哀求能有权利死去人继续活下去吗？,/我们全部医务人员是否变得如此高傲，真会相信科学伎俩能拯救生命这么妄想？我们是否变得如此自认为是，把勇于上帝工作当做是我们天职、我们道德责任、我们法律义务？我们莫非真相信我们有权把“生命”强加给一个痛不欲生、哀求给他死权利病人？,32/58,the blessed relief of coma,Coma,refers to a state of deep unconsciousness that lasts for a prolonged period,caused especially by severe injury or illness.,When in a coma,the patient is not conscious of any pain.Thats why Huttmann thinks it is a blessed relief.,“I thought he at last had the blessed relief of coma.”,Coma is a relief to him which is much better than the clear feeling of pain.The narrator thought he had coma because he was still for so long.,33/58,riddled me with guilt,filled me with a strong sense of guilt,The verb,riddle,here means fill or permeate sb.or sth.esp.with sth.unpleasant or undesirable.,34/58,A clutch of panic banded my chest,I was so seized by panic that I felt simply suffocated,clutch,n.,grasp,band,v.,surround(an object)with sth.in the form of a strip or ring,typically for reinforcement or decoration(usu.,be banded,),e.g.,The doors to the warehouse are all banded with iron to make them stronger.,35/58,A clutch of panic banded my chest,drew my finger to the code button,urged me to do something,anything.”,The nurse was not cold-blooded as the public thought.The original panic and the respect of life drove her to do something or anything rather than to stand around to see Mac die.,36/58,a waxen pallor slowly transformed his face from person to empty shell,the unhealthily pale colour of his face indicated that he was sinking,Nothing Ive ever done in my 47 years has taken so much effort as it took,not,to press that code button.,Paraphrasing:,It is the toughest decision I have ever had to make in the 47 years of my life that I shall not press the button this time to summon the code team.,37/58,1.Was it a difficult decision for Huttmann to make not to push the button in time?(para.15),Obviously it was,as she relates in para.15 Nothing Ive ever done in my 47 years has taken so much effort as it took,notto press that code button.,38/58,the legal twilight zone,Twilight zone,refers to a situation of confusion or uncertainty,which seems to exist between two different states or categories.,Thus the legal twilight zone Huttmann says she entered here refers to the situation in which her action of pushing the button to call code blue can be deemed either legal or not legal.,39/58,Cradling her in my arms was like cradling myself,Mac,and all those patients and nurses who had been in this place before,who do the best they can in a death-denying society.,译文：,怀里搂着她，就像是搂着我自己、迈克、还有每一个曾经在这里病人和护士。这些人以最大努力生存在一个否定死亡社会中。,a death-denying society,a society where its members are not given the right to die,40/58,Until there is legislation making it a criminal act to code a patient who has requested the right to die,Until it becomes law that it is a criminal act to call a resuscitation team to save a patient who has voluntarily asked for the right to die,We will all experience the same as Mac did unless a new law is adopted,stipulating that it shall constitute a crime to try to bring back life to a patient who is perfectly justified to claim the right to end his life.,41/58,1.Where does Huttmann state her thesis?(para.18),In the last paragraph:Until there is legislation making it a criminal act to code a patient who has requested the right to die,we will all of us risk the same fate as Mac.For whatever reason,we developed the means to prolong life,and now we are forced to use it.We do not have the right to die.,42/58,43/58,1.,In the Phil Donahue Show Huttmann as a guest was accused of murder by most,if not all,of the audience with regard to Macs death.Put yourself in Huttmanns position and give a talk to defend yourself.,2.,Thirty years after the publication of Huttmanns essay,euthanasia is still an unsettled issue in todays world.Form two groups,one for legitimizing euthanasia and the other against it,and have a debate on the issue.,44/58,45/58,Body Paragraphs,Purpose of Body Paragraphs,The,ideas,facts,details,and examples,enclosed in the body paragraphs are designed to support and develop the central point stated in the opening.The body paragraphs in an essay may vary in number depending on the subject matter and the purpose for writing.While the body paragraphs,relate directly to the thesis statement,in the opening,each paragraph has its own main idea to highlight and information to support that main idea.,46/58,Strategies of Writing Body Paragraphs,Essays employ a number of rhetorical strategies,each of whichdescribes a particular form of development or arrangement of ideas.Only rarely is any one of these strategies employed alone.Instead,they are almost always used in a combination suited to the subject matter often along with one or another of the primary modes of discourse as well.,Remember,the aim of an essay is invariably a clear presentation or explanation of ideas.You may base your choice of a strategy or strategies upon several factors:,your writing purpose,the central point of your essay,your intended audience,and your viewpoint as a writer,.,47/58,Example,An essay of multiple paragraphs makes it possible for you todecide flexibly how to apply and blend strategies when you write an essay.For example,suppose you wanted to compare life in a large city with that in a small town.In only a single paragraph,you would have to focus on a few major similarities and differences and cover these briefly.,However,in an essay,you might even devote an entire body paragraph to similarities and another,differences.You might even devote a third to another strategy drawing an analogy,for instance,or relating an anecdote.,48/58,Guidelines for Choosing Body Paragraph Strategies,When you write an essay,you can combine strategies to suit your purpose,content and audience.Use the following guidelines tochoose a strategy or combination of strategies wisely.,Cons