高考英语二轮基础写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,*,基础写作：图表式（,2007,）,提纲式（,2008-2015,）,考察能力：提取信息,+,整合信息,+,表达信息（,2007,）,整合信息,+,表达信息,(2008-2015),基础写作考察能力,命题形式,语言句子有限制,评分标准,;,基础写作要求考生必须做到句子结构准确，信息内容完整以及篇章结构连贯（语言大于内容）,基础写作易错知识范围,（,1,）整合信息失误，无法对所提供的信息进行适当地排列和整合,（,2,）语言表达失误，不能用正确的语言表达形式恰如其分地进行表达,（,3,）语篇衔接失误，忽视语言叙述前后的逻辑关系，不会正确应用连词,应试策略,中文信息整合（结合信息点及表达手段），强化信息整合能力。,找出中文信息主干，先写出英文主句，避免出现句子结构问题。,再分析次要信息，思考恰当的表达形式,(,复合句，,非谓动词，介词短语，同位语等）,年份,题材内容,命题方式,2014,报道,英国人查理德,阿维斯,提纲,2013,写,移民火星的快讯,提纲,2012,介绍传奇人物,提纲,2011,介绍图书虎妈,提纲,2010,报道禁烟决定,提纲,2009,报道采访近视问题,提纲,2008,介绍射击项目,提纲,2007,写调查报告“偶像”,表格,近几年广东高考考试对说明文体裁的考查,年份,考试,题材,2015,广一模,介绍,加拿大教授,的研究,2015,湛一模,写九寨沟冬令营的活动通知,2014,广一模,介绍,白茶,参赛,2014,广二模,介绍,佛山剪纸艺术,2014,湛一模,“雾霭”的班会报道,2013,广一模,介绍公寓,求合租人,2012,广一模,“春节活动”调查报告,近几年高考模拟试题：,2013,年广东：,请根据以下信息，,写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。,志愿者的选拔,到,2015,年，,在全球选出约,30,名去火星的志愿者。,志愿者的条件：,至少,18,岁；,做好不回地球的准备；,愿与他人保持良好的关系。,专家的观点,火星生活条件太艰苦；,面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。,志愿者观点,:,厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；,如果成功，,就是人类英雄。,火星：,the Mars,2012,年广东,你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍,。,【,写作内容,】,请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。,姓,名：,Allan Stewart,国,籍：澳大利亚,出生日期：,1915,年,3,月,7,日,世界纪录：,2006,年获硕士学位时年龄最大,学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。,第一个学位：,1936,年获得,第二个学位：医学博士,第三个学位：,80,多岁时决定学习法律，,2006,年获得硕士学位。,第四个学位：,2012,年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习,时间，受到老师表扬。,硕士学位：,masters degree;,博士,doctor,2011,年广东：,以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道，,根据以下信息写一篇图书介绍：,基本信息：,书名：,Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,作者：,Amy Chua,，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授,出版时间：,2010,年,内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事,效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论,相关报道：,中文版：,2011,年初开始在中国销售,意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法,最新消息：,17,岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取,耶鲁：,Yale,哈佛：,Harvard,2010,年广东,:,以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容,，,请根据以下内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,：,内,容：公共场所禁烟,实施时间：,2011,年,1,月,1,日起,实施范围：全国,目,标：所有室内公共场所无烟,措,施：张贴禁烟标志,相关数据：,（,1,）吸烟人数：约,3.5,亿,（,2,）分,布：男性,75,；女性：,25,（,3,）受二手烟影响人数：约,5.4,亿,（,4,）因二手烟死亡人数：超过,10,万,/,年,二手烟：,second-hand smoke,2009,年广东,:,你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况，根据以下情况写一篇采访报道,：,时间,:,上周末,对象,:,眼科医生（,eye-doctor,）王教授,主题,:,我国中小学生近视（,short-sightedness,）问题,基本信息,:,（,1,）发生率,:,略高于,50,（,2,）人数,:,世界第一,专家解读,:,（,1,）原因,:,很复杂,（,2,）治疗,:,没有哪一种药物能治愈近视,（,3,）建议,:,不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动,（,4,）特别提示,:,如何握笔也和近视有关,2008,年广东,:,请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：,背景：射击最初只是生存工具，,19,世纪末才发展成为,一项体育运动。,1896,：第一次成为奥运项目,1904,：中断,1928,：中断,1932,：重回奥运会,1968,：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,现状：稳步发展，,1896,奥运会只有三项射击项目，,现今有,17,项。,2007,年广东,:,上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在,2600,名,学生中进行了一次调查（,survey,）。以下是调查数据：,根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：,1,调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；,2,男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；,3,“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；,4,男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；,5,你的偶像及理由。,Last week,we did a survey among,2,600 students,on,“,Who Is Your Idol,”,.,The survey shows that,half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while,48%of the boys favor sports stars.,As the data shows,“,parents,”,ranks the second,for the girls,but,the fourth for the boys.,However,the percentage of the boys choosing,“,great figures,”,is the same as,that of the girls.,As for,me,Thomas Edison is my idol,because,his inventions have greatly changed our life.,Last weekend,，,I had an interview with,Professor Wang,，,an eye-doctor,，,concerning,the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.,According to,Professor Wang,，,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,，,ranking the first,in the world.,He also pointed out that,the causes for short-sightedness are,so,complicated,that,no medicine can cure short-sightedness.,He suggested that,school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.,He particularly reminded,us that how to hold a pen,is also related to,short-sightedness.,He also pointed out that,the causes for short-sightedness are,so,complicated,thatno medicine can cure short-sightedness.,He suggested that,school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.,He particularly reminded,us that how to hold a pen,is also related to,short-sightedness.,Last weekend,I had an interview,with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,about the,issue of short-sightedness of the school children,in China.According to Professor Wang,slightly,more than half of the school children in our country,are short-sighted,which ranks the first in the,world.He also pointed that the causes for,short-sightedness are so complicated that no,medicine can cure short-sightedness.So he,suggested that school children avoid overuse of,their eyes and do more outdoor activities.He,particularly reminded us that how to hold,a pen is also related to short-sightedness.,Practice:Fill in the blanks of the introduction of Canada,【,写作内容,】,模拟题,假如你是来自加拿大的留学生,Jason,，请你写文章介绍一下加拿大。内容包括以下要点：,国家,加拿大,特征,第二大国家,面积,东西跨越,5,，,500,千米，,6,个时区,人口,29,，,000,，,000,首都,Ottawa,官方语言,法语和英语,气候,气候差异大，北部冬天漫长寒冷，西部沿海冬天温暖,资源,淡水、森林、渔业资源丰富,【,写作要求,】,1.,只能用,5,个句子表达全部内容；,2.,把,5,个句子组成连贯的短文。,Main problems in writing,1.language:inaccurate,2.main points:disorganized,1.,东西跨越,5500,千米，,6,个,时区,2.,气候,差异大,3西部,沿海,4.,淡水,、,渔业,资源,cover an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west,/,six time zones,Difficult points in the writing,the west coast,fresh water/fishing resources,vary from place to place,_(cover)an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west _ six of the world,s time zones and with Ottawa _ its capital,Canada is the _(two)largest country in the world._ population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two _(office)languages,French and English.,Covering,as,second,The,official,A possible version(,语法填空,),：,with,_ in China,the weather in Canada is different _ area to area.In the north,the winters are long and hard,_ the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter.Canada has one third of the world,s supply of fresh water,abundant forests and fishing _(resource).,As,from,while,resources,How to organize the main points in 5 sentences and make the passage fluent?,【,写作内容,】,模拟题,2,假如你是来自加拿大的留学生,Jason,，请你写文章介绍一下加拿大。内容包括以下要点：,国家,加拿大,特征,第二大国家,面积,东西跨越,5,，,500,千米，,6,个市区,人口,29,，,000,，,000,首都,Ottawa,官方语言,法语和英语,气候,气候差异大，北部冬天漫长寒冷，西部沿海冬天温暖,资源,淡水、森林、渔业资源丰富,Covering an area of,over 5,500 kilometers from east to west,with,six of the world,s,time zones,and,with,Ottawa,as,its capital,Canada is the second largest country in the world.The population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two,official languages,French and English.,As in China,the weather in Canada is different,from area to area,.In the north,the winters are long and hard,while,the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter.Canada has one third of the world,s,supply,of fresh water,abundant,forests and fishing resources.,Covering an area of,over 5,500 kilometers from east to west,with,six of the world,s,time zones,and,with,Ottawa,as,its capital,Canada is the second largest country in the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,As,the second largest country in the world,Canada,covers an area of,over 5,500 kilometers from east to west,with,six of the world,s,time zones,with,Ottawa,as,its capital.,Canada,with an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west,with,six of the world,s,time zones,is the second largest country in the world,with,Ottawa,as,its capital,The population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two,official languages,French and English.,Possible versions for Sentence,Canada,whose official languages,are French and English,has the population of 29 million.,Aspects for the place introduction,Useful expressions,Location(,位置,):,Area,（面积）,:,History,（历史）,:,Population,（人口）,:,be located/situated in/on/at/to;lie in/on/at/to,in the center of;in/to/on the east of,Useful expressions,cover/have an area of;with an area of,It is long/wide(from east to west).,have/with a history ofyears,date from/date back to,have/with a(large)population(of),The population ofis,percent of the population are,5.Climate,（气候）,:,6.Resources,（资源）,:,7.Tourist attractions,（旅游景点）,:,The climate varies/is different from place,to place neither too hot nor too cold,Useful expressions,be rich/wealthy in;with abundant resources,be famous/well-known for/as,mainly produce,The main agricultural products are,places of interest,scenic spots,resort(,旅游胜地,),Let,s have a try!,实战训练：,假如你是刘风，大运会即将在深圳举行。,你作为一个大运会志愿者，向来访的外国游客介绍深圳,-,我国一个重要东南沿海城市，位于广东省南部，,人口超过一千万。,城市,深圳,旅游,中国著名的旅游胜地之一，有很多旅游点，其中,著名的有欢乐谷、世界之窗、小梅沙等,气候,四季如春，气候宜人,经济,经济特区，发展迅速。,体育,深圳人热爱体育，当选,2011,年大运会举办城市,欢乐谷,Happy Valley,世界之窗,Window of the world,锦绣中华,Splendid China,红树林,Red Wood,海上田园,Sea Garden,仙湖植物园,Fairylake Garden,小梅沙,Xiao Mei Sha,海洋世界,Sea World,明斯克航母,Minsk Aircraft Carrier,东部华侨城,OCT East,沿海城市,2.,四季如春，气候宜人,3.,经济特区,4.,大运会,a mild temperate climate,with spring all the year around,Difficult points in the writing,special economic zones,the Universiade,coastal/seaside/seashore city,实战训练：,假如你是刘风，大运会即将在深圳举行。,你作为一个大运会志愿者，向来访的外国游客介绍深圳,-,我国一个重要东南沿海城市，位于广东省南部，,人口超过一千万。,城市,深圳,旅游,中国著名的旅游胜地之一，有很多旅游点，其中,著名的有欢乐谷、世界之窗、小梅沙等,气候,四季如春，气候宜人,经济,经济特区发展迅速。,体育,深圳人热爱体育，当选,2011,年大运会举办城市,Shenzhen,a key,seaside city,is located in,the southern part of Guangdong,Province,with a population of,more than 10 million.It has a mild temperate climate,with spring all the year around,.,That is,the reason why it becomes one of the,well-known travelling resorts in China with a good many scenic spots,some of which are,Happy Valley,Window of the World and Xiao Mei Sha.,As,one of the special economic zones in China,Shenzhen has been developing rapidly.,What excites us most is that,more and more people in Shenzhen,get involved in,sports,which makes,it a,host city of the 2011.,【,写作内容,】,假如你为学校英文报刊的“海外之声”栏目投稿，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍澳大利亚。,位置,太平洋的西侧,面积,大洋洲（,Oceania,）最大的国家，面积,760,万平方公里,人口,人口稀少，只有,1,000,多万，多数集中在东部沿海地区。,首都,堪培拉（,Canberra,），风景秀丽,最大城市,悉尼（,Sydney,），有许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（,Opera House,）闻名于世；,2000,年奥运会在此举行的。,【,写作要求,】,1.,只能用,5,个句子表达全部内容；,2.,把,5,个句子组成连贯的短文。,Australia _,Australia,the largest country in Oceania,lies,on the west coast of the Pacific,with,an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Possible versions for Sentence,As,the largest country in Oceania,Australia,lies,on the west coast of the Pacific,covering,an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Located,on the west coast of the Pacific,Australia,is,the largest country in Oceania,covering/with,an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,It,has,a small population of over 10 million,and,most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea.,Possible versions for Sentence,It,has,a small population of over 10 million,most of which,live in the east coast of the country.,Sydney,is,the biggest city in Australia,which has,many places of interest,and,the Opera House is well known all over the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,Sydney,the biggest city in Australia,has,many places of interest,including,the world famous Opera House.,Sydney,is,the biggest city in Australia,with,many places of interest,including,the world famous Opera House.,Australia,the largest country in Oceania,lies,on the west coast of the Pacific,with an area of,7.6 million square kilometers.It,has a a small population of,over 10 million,most of whom live,in the east coast of the country.The capital city Canberra,where you can enjoy,beauiful scenery,attracts a good many people every year.Sydney,is,the biggest city in Australia,which has,many places of interest,and,the Opera House,is well known,all over the world.,It was in this place that,the 2000 Olympics were held.,