高考英语基础写作新闻报道.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,1.learn about 了解,2.be to set for 将前往,3.places of interest 名胜古迹,4.an exchange visit 回访,5.gather together 集中,6.get close to 靠近,晨读背诵,相关短语,7.release pressure 释放压力,8.grow up happily 快乐地成长,9.according to 根据,10.appreciate poetry 欣赏诗歌,11.exchange thoughts 交流想法,12.recite ones works 背诵作品,13.at the invitation of 在的邀请下,14.be impressed by 被给予深刻印象,15.encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事,16.the best-known tourist spot 最著名的旅游景,1.,During their one-week stay,in Foshan,the students experienced the campus life,of Chinese students.在佛山为期一周的逗留,中,这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。,2.The British students,were impressed by,the kindness of Chinese students.英国的学,生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。,相关句式,3.,At the invitation of,a British school,38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.在一个英国学校的邀请下,华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。,4.,It was also said that,poetry could help them release pressure.据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。,5.,Its likely that,that famous sports star will also run with the torch.很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。,2.注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语,如It is reported that.,As is reported.,According to the report.等。,3.新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言,考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。,经典例题,时间,上周,地点,华文中学,事件,一批英国学生到访,行程,了解中国学生的校园生活参观佛山的著名景点，体验当地文化,佛山印象,洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品,回访计划,华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国,(2008年佛山一模),上周,一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员,请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。,写作内容,例题导写,认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种,但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来,还要注意情感的表达,而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道,因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。,句2：,(1)感受校园生活：_,_,句3：,(2)参观著名景点：_,_,(3)体验当地文化：_,词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语。,learn/know about the local culture,experience the campus life,of Chinese students,visit/pay a visit to some,places of interest/tourist attractions,句4：,(4)洁净的市容,友善的学生,美味的食品：,_,_,_,_,句5：,(5)回访：_,the clean city,friendly students and delicious food/the cleanness of the city,kindness of the students and niceness of food(注意并列词组的词性一致),an exchange visit,难句翻译 请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。,句4：,洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。,The British students,were deeply impressed by,the clean city,friendly students and delicious food./,What expressed the British students deeply was,the clean city,friendly students and delicious food./The clean city,friendly students and delicious food,left a deep impression on,the British students.,句5：,华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。,In return,38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited to visit Britain next March./,At the invitation of,a British school,38 students in Huawen Middle School,are to set for,Britain for,an exchange visit,next March.,连句成篇,参考范文,Huawen Middle School in Foshan City,received a group of,students from Britain last week.,During their one-week,stay in Foshan,the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students.,They also visited some,places of interest,in Foshan and,learned about,the local culture.The British students,were impressed by,the kindness of Chinese students,cleanness of the city and niceness of food.,At the invitation of,a British school,38 students in Huawen Middle School,are to set for,Britain for,an exchange visit,next March.,假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌,上个周末广州市教育局在你校举办了一场诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社的通讯员,为这个活动写一篇报道。,课堂练习,写作内容,举办目的,让青少年更了解和学会欣赏诗歌,举办时间,2011年12月11日,上周日,举办地点,第一中学,参与人数,200多个来自全市不同学校的高中生,举办详情,参赛者背诵自己的作品,交流经验,参赛者感受,1.通过比赛与诗歌更靠近了,2.诗歌可以帮助释放压力,帮助我们快乐成长,校长感受,鼓励大家像诗人那样思考,对世界更敏感和真诚,写作要求,只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。,In order to help teenagers,learn more,and appreciate,poetry,a poetry contest was held in the No.1 High School last Sunday,December 11,th,2011.200 senior students from different high schools all over the city,gathered together,reciting their works and exchanging thoughts,.,Many competitors said that they,were,getting close to,poems through,this competition.,It was also said that,poetry could help them,release pressure,and grow up happily.The headmaster,encouraged us to,think like a poet,that,is,be sensitive and sincere towards,the world.,精华点评,活动报道的第一句是开门见山地介绍活动的情况：活动的时间、地点、目的和内容都包含在里面。第二句包含了参与人数与比赛详情,范文用了伴随状语reciting their works and exchanging thoughts连接了这两个内容。第三句和第四句都是陈述比赛者的感受,因此范文为了显示句子多样性,用了两个不同的句型:Many competitors said that.(陈述句,主动语态)和It was also said that.(形式主语,被,动语态)。,课外练习,假设你是英文早报的兼职小记者,伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线,你将为这一事件进行报道,以下是报道的内容。,基本情况,伦敦奥组委员会公布伦敦奥运火炬传递路线,公布时间,11月7日,具体详情,1.途经多个著名景点,2.历经1000多个村庄，城镇和城市,3.6200多万英国人中的95%的人口都可以目睹,4.历时70天,5.在温德米尔湖火炬在汽船(steamboat)上传播,在泰晤士(the Thames)河在划艇(rowboat)上传播,在某处还会在马上传播,火炬传递者,8000名,大多数是普通的公众,但也可能有著名球星,如:贝克汉姆,写作内容,参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员 the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games,火炬传递 Torch Relay温德米尔 Lake Windermere,As is reported,the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games,released,the route of the London 2010 Olympic Torch Relay on November 7.The Olympic Torch will visit some of Britains best-known tourist spots,covering,1,000 villages,towns and cities across the country and,reaching,more than 95%of Britains 62 million population.,The 70-day torch relay,will be carried,in a steamboat across Lake Windermere,on a rowboat on the Thames,and on horseback elsewhere.,According to,the Committee,most of the 8,000 torchbearers will be ordinary members of the public,but,its likely that,famous sports stars like David Beckham will also,run with the torch,.,精华点评,新闻报道的关键在于客观，通俗易懂。考生写作的时候不用考虑花哨的词汇,但是要注意新闻文体的常用语，如本文用到的As is reported.,According to.等。本文的另一个写作难点就是写作内容较多,考生要运用各种技巧进行信息点合并融合,如范文通过现在分词作伴随状语把具体详情中的第一、二、三点进行了合并。,而第四点，范文用了一个短语the 70-day torch relay表达出来,简洁明了。至于最后一点关于火炬传递者,很多考生喜欢用there are 8,000 torchbearers 这样的there be句型,这个句型不仅容易显得累赘,而且容易出现语法错误,因此范文直接用most of the 8,000 torchbearers will be.的句型来表达,显得简洁直接很多。,Thank you!,