高一英语读后续写练习短文.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高一英语读后续写练习短文,读后续写,:,提供一篇,350,词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（,150,词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文,。,（满分,25,分）,新高考考试说明,2,3,4,第五档：,21-25,第四档：,16-20,第三档：,11-15,第二档：,6-10,第一档：,1-5,5,评分原则,本题总分为,25,分，,分,5,个档次给分,6,Step 1.,Read the passage,Step 2.,Get the main idea,(who?When?Where?What?Why?How?),Step 3.,Predict the possible plot development,(the plot,logical,reasonable,the given two sentences),Step 4.,Begin to write(,the underlined words),Step 5.,Polish your writing(,词汇、句式、语法的多样性,),How to write a,continuation,?,7,When?,Where?,Who?,what?,Why?,how?,how to get the main idea,8,大家学习辛苦了，还是要坚持,继续保持安静,9,Basic forms of the 6 questions,When did the story happen?,Where did the story happen?,Who is the main character?,What happened in the story?,Why was the matter caused?,How was the matter solved/ended?,10,读后续写练习,II,When,I,was a little girl,every time my,dad,was repairing something,he,would ask me to hold the hammer,and meanwhile,have a,conversation,with me.I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out.All he did after work was taking care of his family.I grew up and left home for college and,since,then,my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning,no matter what.Several years later I bought a house,which,my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat.All he asked was for me to,talk,to him.But I was always busy,unable,to find any time for conversation with him.One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual.I noticed that my dad had,forgotten some things we discussed lately.I was in a hurry,so our conversation was short.Later that day came a call saying my father was in,hospital,.,Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad,注意：,1.,所续写短文的词数应为,60,左右；,2.,至少使用,4,个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；,3.,续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；,4.,续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,11,When?,Where?,Who?,What?,Why?,How?,when I was a little girl,my dad,I,have a conversation with me,my dad takes care of my family,12,Step 1.,Read the passage,Para.1,When,I,was a little girl,every time my,dad,was repairing something,he,would,ask me to hold the hammer,and meanwhile,have a,conversation,with me.I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out.All he did after work was taking care of his family.,Main idea:,When I was a little girl,my dad,like to,have a conversation,with me,who takes care of my family.,13,Step 1.,Read the passage,Para2.,I grew up and left home for college and,since,then,my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning,no matter what.Several years later I bought a house,which,my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat.All he asked was,for,me to,talk,to him.But I was always busy,un,able to find any time for conversation with him.,Main idea:,When I,grew up,my dad want to talk to me.,But I was busy,un,able to,have a,conversation with him,14,Step 1.,Read the passage,Para.3,One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual.I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things we discussed lately.I was in a hurry,so our conversation was short.Later that day came a call say,ing,my father was in,hospital.,Main idea:,One Sunday morning came a call say,ing,my father was in hospital.,15,Para.4,Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the miss,ed,occasions to have a talk with my dad.,when I got to the hospital.,16,Step 3.Predict possible,plot development,In a group predict how the story will develop,:,To predict,doesnt mean you can write whatever you like.Continuation writing must be designed in a,logical,and,reasonable,way.And on top of that being,creative,will be appreciated.,17,Step 4.,Begin to write,注意：,1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；,2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；,3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；,4.续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,The underlined words:,I,dad,conversation talk,unable,hospital,18,参考词汇：,pass away,die,(vi),dead,(adj.),lose sb.,regret doing sth.,后悔做过某事，,find sb.lying on the bed,burst into tears,burst out crying,only then did I realize.,get over the illness,recover from the illness,my heart is broken.selfless,be worried about,be concerned about,19,P,ossible version,1:,When I rushed to,hospital,I found my,dad,lying there,weak and hopless.Holding back the tears,I talked to him gently.His face lit up.Only then did I realize the,conversation,was more than conversation.It was love.I was gra,t,eful that my father got over the illness and now it is,I,who always enjoy starting the coversation.,(62,字）,20,P,ossible version,2:,Bythe time I got to,hospital,my father had passed away.Now it washe who did not have time for a,conversation,with me.I realized howlittle,I,know about my,dad,his deepest thoughts and dreams.After his death I learned more about him,and even more about myself.（,53,字）,21,Step 4.,Polish your writing,简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。,主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、,with,的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。,常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。,比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。,句式结构：,语法结构：,词汇选择：,修辞手法：,22,