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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Writing is,different,from Talking,My boss is a hard person to work for.,Its not safe to walk in our neighborhood after dark.,Poor study habits keep getting me into trouble.,Raising the petrol price will solve the traffic and pollutiion problems casued by,vehicles.,Students are better off working for a year before attending college.,Remoting learning(online learing)can be a better option than classroom-based learning.,In writing,any idea that you advance must be supported by specific reasons or details.,1/46,Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways.,Firstly,a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work.So positive feedback from superiors is important in this respect.A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole.,Secondly,when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities,for example,then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker.,The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to the job satisfaction because,cooperation can be a source of uique satifaction that an individual never get all by him/herself.Consider the happniess of football players when,along with team-work,they defeated their common rivals and win the honor of championship.,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,2/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remoting learing can is an exciting technological advance.,The flexible learning schedule is extremely convenient for full-time workers.They could plan their personal learing progress according to the working arrangments.And learing serivices are always available no matter they are on a trip or vacation.,Remoting learning also makes education affordable.Unlike the classroom learing where a lecturer could serve literally limited number of students,the digitial resources,like videos,voice records,word transpcripts,can be used by infinte number of learners.That may be why every single student is charged a little fee to cover the cost of such services.,Moreover,all the students have equal access to the courses of the best qulaity.Courses given by professors of the top-class universities are available to all instead of being monoplied by the lucky few.,3/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remote learing makes learing extremely convenient for students.,With the flexible learning schedule,full-time workers could plan their personal learing progress according to the working arrangments.And learing serivices are always available no matter they are on a business trip or vacation.,It is also a blessing for students who prefer to take cross-disciplinary courses offered by different learning institutions.I had always been interested psychology,but unfortunately,it is not included in the curricula of my college.Three months ago,I enrolled in an online psycholoy course offered by a famous college in Britain,and I am enjoying this wonderful learing experience.,Disabled people could also benefit from this online learning.Many of them are deprived,openly or in disguise(for example,the condescending help and empathetic care from others),of the chance of learing.This remote learing enable them to take courses independently.,4/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Evidence,reasons,anecdotes,personal experiences,facts,studies,statistics,opinion of experts,5/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support in an Essay,Writing is a,skill,process of self-discovery,6/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy,Writing is a process that involves the following steps:,discovering a thesis-often through prewriting.,developing solid support for the thesis-often through more prewriting.,organizing the thesis and supporting material and writing it out in a first draft.,revising and then editing carefully to ensure an effective,error-free paper,.,7/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Begin with a point or thesis,A good thesis does two things:,1)it tells readers an essays topic,.,2)it presents the writers attitude,opinion,idea or point about a topic.,eg.Owning a pet has several important benefits.,topic:owning a pet,the writers main point:has several important benefits.,8/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Exercise,Our company president,should be fired for three main reasons.,The internet,has led to new kinds of frustration in everyday life,.,The twentith century produced three inventions that dramatically changed the lives of all Americans.,My first night as a security guard turned out to be one of the most frightening experience of my life.,Advertisers target young people in order to market cigarettes,alcohol,and adult movies.,Before moving away from home,every person should have mastered certain key skills.,Independent mom and pop stores are superior to larger chain stores for a number of reasons.,9/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Writing a good thesis(确定一个好论点),General Subject,limited subject,Thesis,Marriage,Family,Television,Smile/human distance,habit/temptation,10/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Writing a good thesis(确定一个好论点),General Subject,limited subject,Thesis,Marriage,Honeymoon,Family,Dependence on parents,Television,Commercials,Smile/human distance,Pleasant relationship,habit/temptation,refuse comfort/ease/idleness,11/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Writing a good thesis(确定一个好论点),General Subject,limited subject,Thesis,Marriage,Honeymoon,A honeymoon is perhaps the worst day to begin a marriage,Family,Dependence on parents,Many factors prevent the young from living an indepent life even if they are years old or even elder.,Television,Commercials,Commercials on TV might be both an annoyance and a financial loss.,Smile/human distance,Pleasant relationship,Smile can be the best manner to create a pleasant relationship .,habit/temptation,refuse comfort/ease/idleness,Taking and maintaing a new pattern of behavior usually means a painful break-away from comfortable and cozy zone,and a person has to resist against tempation of an easy way of life.,12/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),Writing a good thesis(确定一个好论点),1.Write Statements,No Announcements,The subject of this paper will be my parents.,I want to talk about the crime wave in our country.,The baby boom generation is the concern of this essay.,My parents each struggled with personal demons.,The recent crime wave in our city has several apparent causes.,The baby boom generation has changed American society is key ways.,13/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),2.Avoid statements that are too broad(防止论点过宽),Insects are fascinating creatures.,Men and women are very different.,Strength,organization,and communication makes ants one the natures most successful insects.,Men and women are often treated very differently in the workplace.,14/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),3.Avoid statements that are too narrow(防止论点过窄),The speed limit near my home is sixty-five miles per hour.,A hurricane hit southern Florida last summer.,A person must be at least thirty-five years old in order to be elected president of the United States.,The speed limit near my home should be lowered to fifty-five mile perhour for several reasons.,Federal officials mades a number of mistakes in their response to the recent Florida hurricane.,The requirement that a U.S president must be at least thirty-five years old is unfair and unreasonable.,15/46,Writing Skills-Begin with a Good Thesis,(选个好论点),4.Make sure statements develop only one idea,One of the most serious problems affecting young people today is bullying,and it is time more kids learned the value of others.,Studying with others has several benefits,but it also has drawbacks and can be difficult to schedule.,Teachers have played an important role in my life,but they were not as important as my parents.,One of the most serious problems affecting young people today is bullying.,Studying with others have several benefits.,Teachers have played an important role in my life.,16/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support in an Essay,A smile is the shortest distance between two people,.,Earth provide enough to satisfy everymans need,not very mans greed.,Good habits result from refusing temptation.,?,17/46,Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways.,Firstly,a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work.So positive feedback from superiors is important in this respect.A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole.Secondly,when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities,for example,then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker.The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to the job satisfaction because,cooperation can be a source of uique satifaction that an individual never get all by him/herself.Consider the happniess of football players when,along with team-work,they defeated their common rivals and win the honor of championship.,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,18/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remoting learing can is an exciting technological advance.,The flexible learning schedule is extremely convenient for full-time workers.They could plan their personal learing progress according to the working arrangments.And learing serivices are always available no matter they are on a trip or vacation.Remoting learning also makes education affordable.Unlike the classroom learing where a lecturer could serve literally limited number of students,the digitial resources,like videos,voice records,word transpcripts,can be used by infinte number of learners.That may be why every single student is charged a little fee to cover the cost of such services.Moreover,all the students have equal access to the courses of the best qulaity.Courses given by professors of the top-class universities are available to all instead of being monoplied by the lucky few.,19/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remote learing makes learing extremely convenient for students.,With the flexible learning schedule,full-time workers could plan their personal learning progress according to the working arrangements.And learning services are always available no matter they are on a business trip or vacation.It is also a blessing for students who prefer to take cross-disciplinary courses offered by different learning institutions.I had always been interested psychology,but unfortunately,it is not included in the curricula of my college.Three months ago,I enrolled in an online psychology course offered by a famous college in Britain,and I am enjoying this wonderful learning experience.Disabled people could also benefit from this online learning.Many of them are deprived,openly or in disguise(for example,the condescending help and empathetic care from others),of the chance of learning.This remote learning enable them to take courses independently.,20/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support in an Essay,The layout of an essay,introduction,opening remarks to catch readers interest,Theis statment,Plan of devdepment(optional),body,topic sentence(support point 1),specific evidence,topic sentence 2(supporting point 2),specific evidence,topic sentence 3(supporting point 3),specific evidence,conclusioni,summary(optional),general closing remarks,(or both),21/46,Writing Skills-Support the Thesis with Specific Evidence,(用详细论据),Identifying the parts of an essay,Evaluating thesis statements,Completing thesis statements,Writing a thesis statement,Limiting a topic and writing a thesis,Providing specific evidence,Identifying adequate supportive evidence,Adding details to complete an essay,22/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy-writing a first draft,When you write a first draft,be prepared to put in additional thoughts and details that did not emerge during prewriting.,23/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remoting learing can is an exciting technological advance.The flexible learning schedule is extremely convenient for full-time workers.They could plan their personal learing progress according to the working arrangments.And learing serivices are always available no matter they are on a trip or vacation.Remoting learning also makes education affordable.Unlike the classroom learing where a lecturer could serve literally limited number of students,the digitial resources,like videos,voice records,word transpcripts,can be used by infinte number of learners.That may be why every single student is charged a little fee to cover the cost of such services.Moreover,all the students have equal access to the courses of the best qulaity.Courses given by professors of the top-class universities are available to all instead of being monoplied by the lucky few.,24/46,Writing Skills-,Point and Support,Remote learing makes learing extremely convenient for students.With the flexible learning schedule,full-time workers could plan their personal learing progress according to the working arrangments.And learing serivices are always available no matter they are on a trip or vacation.It is also a blessing for students who prefer to take cross-disciplinary courses offered by different learning institutions.I had always been interested psychology,but unfortunately,it is not included in the curricula of my college.Three months ago,I enrolled in an online psycholoy course offered by a famous college in Britain,and I am enjoying this wonderful learing experience.Disabled people could also benefit from this online learning.Many of them are deprived,openly or in disguise(for example,the condescending help and empathetic care from others),of the chance of learing.This remote learing enable them to take courses independently.,25/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy-prewriting techniques,Technique 1:Making a list,How to make a worker satisfied with the job?,This is a list of my first repsonses:,valuable,feedback superior,contribute to a nation,training program,improve working skills,cope with challenges,not fearful for being fired,a sense of security,cooperation,teamwork,football team,collective goal,confidence,money.,26/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy-prewriting techniques,Technique 1:Making a list,A smile is the shortest distance between two people.,27/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy-prewriting techniques,Technique 2:Questioning(设问),remote learning is a positive change.,Questions:Answers:,What is the merits of remote learing?-,Who benefit from this new learning approach?-,When can people need such learning most?-,Where is is new learning most influential?-,How can people make good use of it?-,28/46,Writing Skills-writing strategy-prewriting techniques,Te