26.现象分析英语作文名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,26.现象分析,第1页,文体概述,现象分析文章属于说明文，普通先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生原因，最终提出提议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通惯用普通现在时态。,第2页,惯用语块,引发某人注意 _,_,2.采取办法(做)_,3.日益严重问题,_,4.普遍现象 _,5.改进这种情况 _,improve the situation,draw/arouse ones attention/be brought to ones attention,take measures(to do),an increasingly serious problem,a common phenomenon,第3页,6.全社会 _,7.安全意识 _,8.有效方法/路径 _,9.越来越多 _,10.共同关注 _,a common concern,the whole society,safety awareness,an effective approach,an increasing number of,第4页,11.热点话题 _,12.人们普遍认为,_,13.社会发展必定结果,_,14.伴随经济快速发展,_,15.面临新机遇和挑战,_,be faced with new opportunities and challenges,a hot topic,It is commonly believed/recognized that,the inevitable result of social development,with the rapid development of economy,第5页,套用句式,伴随工业发展，城市空气质量变得越来越差。,2.近期校车安全问题成为了一个日益严重问题。,1.With the rapid development of industry,the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse.,2.Recently the safety of school buses has become an increasingly serious problem.,第6页,3.如今高中生在网上开通博客成为了一个普遍现象。,4.结果，这种现象引发了社会关注。,5.有三方面主要原因应该引发我们关注。,3.It is a common phenomenon that high school students open their blogs on the Internet.,5.There are three main factors that should call our concern.,4.As a result,the phenomenon has aroused social attention.,第7页,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文),Recently the safety of school buses has become a seriously problem,that has attracted more and,more public attention.So in our class we have held an heated discussion on the causes and solutionAfter the discuss,we find that the problem caused,by three kinds of reasons which include overloading,speeding as well as weak safety awareness.,serious,which,a,solutions,discussion,is,第8页,As by the solutions,first of all,we all,think that it necessary to examine the safety,of the school buses.Beside,we should stop,risky buses from being operated.Only if all people attach importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decreased.,for,Besides,decrease,第9页,1.seriously serious修饰名词要用形容词形式。,2.that which非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。,3.an a冠词后面heated并非以元音音素开头。,4.solution solutions solution是可数名词，要和causes保持一致。,5.discuss discussion定冠词the后面接名词。,第10页,6.在problem后加is分析句子成份可知，此处caused作谓语，故要考虑时态和语态。时态准确，但语态应该用被动才符合逻辑。,7.by for固定搭配as for意为“至于/关于”。,8.去掉think后that此处并非引导宾语从句，而是it作形式宾语，后面不定式短语才是真正宾语。,9.Beside Besides beside意为“在旁边”，不符合文意。besides意为“另外”，符合文意。,10.decreased decrease情态动词后接动词原形。,第11页,课堂练习,伴随经济发展，人们生活水平日益提升，一些中学生消费问题成了一个热门话题。他们花钱大手大脚，令学校难以管理。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。关键点以下：,1.存在现象。,2.引发此现象原因。,3.你呼吁。,注意,：1.词数100左右。,2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,第12页,Today,its a common phenomenon that,some middle school students,are extremely lavish in,spending money,which has,aroused wide concern.,Generally,therere several factors contributing,to the phenomenon.First,with the improvement of peoples living standard,middle school students,the treasure of their parents,can get lots of pocket money from their parents.Second,some students,spend less on,their,regular meals and necessities,to save their pocket money,with which,they buy snacks,cellphones,fashionable clothes,etc.,第13页,Third,young as they are,they learn to blindly worship,those with much pocket money,which causes them to,compare with each other,on something,unrealistic.,To help the students,I,call on,schools and parents to,take measures to cultivate the students correct value of consuming.,第14页,课外作业,每年高考后，高考状元被“热炒”。他们被各种采访和社会活动所包围，甚至能够得到大笔奖金。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。关键点以下：,1.存在现象。,2.引发此现象原因。,3.你提议。,注意：,1.词数100左右。,2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,第15页,Every year after the College Entrance Exam,the top scorers will,attract wide attention,from across the country.They accept various interviews,participate in,different social activities and even gain lots of prize money.,Generally,therere several reasons why top scorers are,worshiped,and popular.First,many people,are affected by,the Chinese traditional thoughts,thinking that,top scorers will often have a bright future.,第16页,Second,average students,think that top scorers are good learners,from whom they can absolutely learn a lot,.Third,parents want their children to,imitate,the top scorers.,In my opinion,its all right to give proper attention to those top scorers.But we shouldnt,pay too much attention to,them.,After all,exams and marks are not everything.,第17页,