1、开头段: 随着经济/社会/人类思想的进步 With the development of economy/society/human thought 随着生活质量/文明/文化/环境/健康水平的提高 With the improvement of life quality/civilization/culture/environment/health level 愈来愈多的人/国家/家长/媒体/注意/ 关注、关心、关注到….这件颇具争议的/有重要意义的/问题上来 An increasing number of people (countries/parents/media/
2、are considering the controversial issue that__________ An increasing number of people (countries/parents/media/ are taking the controversial issue that___________ into account 一些人/学校/组织/机构认为 ,而另一些人觉得_________________,双方都有各自认为合理的观点/理由/依据 Some people/schools/organizations/in
3、stitutes believe that_________________________, while others hold the opinion that__________________, both sides convince that their own proves/evidence/ reasonable 但是他们的观点都有一些局限性,我更趋向于_____的观点,陈述如下: But both of their opinions have some limitations, I agree with the view that_______ Reasons are
4、as follows: 在过去的_____年里,人们生活的/环境的/动物的/状况的变化速度远远超过了我们的想想。这是变化时__________推动的。这些变化每天都在改变我们看待_______的方式。 In the past_____ years, the immense changes of people’s live/environment/animals/conditions which are impelled by______ surpass our imagination a lot. Our perspectives of looking things therefore
5、 vary promptly. 这是一个不寻常的问题 This is an unusual issue 这个观点显然是正确的 This opinion is obviously correct. 立论段 基于人们对______的需求 Based on the human’s demand for _______ 基于科学家/有关机构对_____的分析 According to scientist’s analysis /institution’s analysis on________ 首先,不可否认的是______/毫无疑问的是_______ F
6、irstly, there is no denying that____ there is no doubt that_____ 根据________机构分析___________大多数人/动物/事物/需要________ According to the analysis from the ______ organization, most of the people/animals/things need_____ 许多______领域的专家都对___________做出过研究/调查/统计 Many experts have made some researches/invest
7、igations/ surveys on the________ 与之相反______ In contrast,_____ 我们都知道______ 在______中有着重要的作用。 Most of us know that _______plays an important role in_______ 许多_______的目的是为了______而牟利。 Many_______ target at__________ to make profits. 或许看上去很容易,但问题在于________ It seems easy that______ whereas, the pr
8、oblems lie in______ 毋容置疑的是______对于社会/人类/教育/的贡献是很明显的。 It is no exaggeration to say that its contribution to the society/human beings/education is obvious. 但是现在,事情发生了改变 But it has changed a lot now. 导致这种情况出现的原因是多种多样的,但首先是_________ There are various reasons for this, but the first is________ 现如今
9、我们生活在世界上,有些基础的东西是必须的,比如说______ In the modern society, we are living in a world that some basic necessities are essential, for instance,_______ 这个说法在一定程度上是成立的 This argument is to a certain extent reasonable 驳论段 大多数的人/家长/国家/机构/只看到了表面的一些现象,而忽略了更深层次的东西,比如说______ Most of the people/parents/coun
10、tries/organizations have only focused on some surface phenomena and ignored the deep substances that_______ 大多数的人/家长/国家/机构/不知道他们真正想要的结果。他们只是在盲目地跟随潮流/趋势/或者是盲目的制定计划,却偏离了正确的路线。 Most of the people/parents/countries/organizations don’t know what they really want and they are only following the trend bl
11、indly/making the plan blindly, deviating from the right path. 他们觉得______却忽略了_____ They are thinking that but ignore that______ 大多数持反对意见的人认为_________ Most of the opponents believe that______ 当然,不可否认的是的确有一些客观的因素存在_____比如_______ Of course, it is undeniable that there are some objective factors
12、such as _____ 不可忽视的是_____ What cannot be overlooked is that______ 与之形成鲜明对比的是________ In sharp contrast,________ 另外一方面,也有许多理由可以反驳这种观点 On the other hand, there are also many reasons to refute this view. 支持这一观点的显而易见的论据是______ The obvious argument for this point is that_____ 在某种程度上,这个问题取决于____
13、 The problem to a large extent rely on ________ 结尾段 综上所述,经过分析 Overall/in sum/in conclusion/to conclude/in summary/ above all/ in a word ______对于当前社会/学生们/孩子们/家长们/老年人/更有优势 _______has more positive effects on the current society/students/children/elders 我们/政府/人们/机构/应该加大对_____的支持/关注/限制/减少/而不是
14、这样才能更好的提高社会效益/教育质量/老年人的生活质量/动物是生存环境/工作效率 We/government/people/organization should strengthen their supports/concerns/(restrict/reduce ____) rather than______, this can improve the social effects/education quality/elder’s life quality/animals ‘habitats /work efficiency ________的方法是达到这一目的的最好方
15、式。 The method of_______ is the best way to achieve this goal. ________为将来的_______打下这好的基础。 ________has laid a good foundation for the______ in the future. 总之,我认为_____和_____都不是最主要的影响,但_____更重要的_______ In conclusion, we believe that____ and_____ are the main factors and ________is more important.