2016高考英语全国卷1满分作文解析.docx

写作讲解
一，熟悉评分标准
二，学会用亮点“句式”和“词汇”
三，写作的连贯性

<亮点句式和词汇的运用>
一，学会使用状语
句式一：in order to/to do +目的，I ....
句式二：I....., 动词ing+sth
范文：Dear Ms Jenkins,
    I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
    (1)In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. (2)But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. (3)So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.(表请求可直接套用这个句子)
    Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

1，这是一个汉字，意思是Moon。
2，为了提高英语口语，我在可可网站注册了一个账号。
3，汤姆昨天打电话来了，说不能去车站接你。

二，因果关系的表达
1，注意：因果的陈述尽量简洁。
this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to.
Because this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to.
2，用As/since表原因
As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in.

我准备参加下周的英语演讲比赛，但是不知道选择什么题目，所以还没有开始写。因此，我写信希望你可以帮我出出主意。

李华说他有重要的事，不能来参加派对。

三，定语从句的使用

1，由where,which...等引导的定语从句
2，过去分词、介词或者短语作后置定语
There is a note attached to the envelope/ attached note 附带的便条
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.
Those are the students ready to take exams.

1， 请填好随附的表格，并寄回。
2，暑假来了，我打算回乡下住一段时间。
3，所有在场的学生必须写一份报告。
4，为了找到一个解决方案，他们读了很多书。

四，主语。时态的选择
主语的变化
1，主语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.
2，动名词、不定式作主语
3， It is ...作形式主语

1，无论你写什么都可以。
2，坐地铁是个不错的选择。
3，玩电脑游戏对眼睛不好。
4，走中国路线很重要。

时态：
© 学会使用 动词+ing 进行时表示将来
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.
In order to get some practical experience, I will plan to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show.
Our school photography club will hold an International High School student Photography Show.

1，我计划学习一门第二外语。(second language)
2， 这个公园将要举办画展。（画展： are exhibition）
3，为了更好的利用学习资料，学生会准备策划一次活动。（arrange an activity）

<写作的连贯性>
在写作的过程中，我们可以通过代词和连词来实现全文连贯性。

（1）松鼠是一种美丽的小动物,很讨人喜欢。它四肢灵活,行动敏捷.玲珑的小面孔上,嵌着一对闪闪发光的小眼睛。身上灰褐色的毛,光滑得好象搽过油。松鼠喜欢在树枝上跳来跳去,十分机灵。只要有人触动一下树干,它们就躲在数枝底下,或连蹦带跳地逃到别的树上去。晴朗的夏夜,松鼠在树上高兴的跳着叫着,互相追逐嬉戏。它们好像怕强烈的日光,白天常常躲在窝里歇凉。

（2）As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of materials that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

（3）However, I’m afraid there is one mistake I’d like to point out. It is “无所不为”. This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”. Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that you’ve got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use “无所事事”. We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “无所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do.

（4） At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.
高考完形填空高频词组

　 1.With the help of 在～～帮助下 under the leadership / care of 在～～领导/关心下
　　2.be strict with sb. 对～人要求严格 be strict in sth. 对～事要求严格
　　3. at present=at the present time 目前 for the present 暂时
4. in the sun/sunshine 在阳光下 under the sun 在世界上
5. lie in 位于～～之内 lie on 同～～接壤 lie to 位于～～之外
　　6. at least 至少 in the least 丝毫，一点
　　7. by name 名叫 in the name of 以～～名义
　　8. in the air 空中，在流传 on the air 播出
　　9. in the way 挡路，障碍，用～～方法 in a way 在某点上，在某种程度上get one’s own way to do 随心所欲 give way 让步，屈服 lose one’s way 迷路 by the way 顺便说一下 on one’s way to 在去～～的路上 Come this way 这边走
　　10. at the corner 在拐角处(外角)in the corner 在角落里(内角)
　　on the corner 在角落上(外角上)
　　11. judge by / from 根据～～来判断 judge for oneself 由某人自己来判断 12. at the end (of) 在～～结束时 at the beginning of 在～～开始时 at the back of 在～～背后，支持 at the age of ～～岁时 at the foot of 在～～脚下 at the bottom of 在～～底部 at the top of 在～～顶上 at/on the edge of 在～～边上
　　13. in the course of 在～～过程中 in the eyes of 从～～观点看来，在～～眼里 in the face of 面对～，尽管，纵使 in the middle of 在～中间 in the end =at last=finally 最后
　　14. on the eve of 在～～前夕 on the side of 在～～一边
　　15. after a time = after some time 过一段时间后 for a time = for some time 一时，有一段时间
　　16. behind time 迟到，过期 behind the times 落在时代后面
　　17. at no time 决不 in no time 立即，马上
　　18. at one time = once time 曾经 at a time = each time 每次 at times = sometimes 有时 at all times 经常，一直，始终 at the same time 同时 at the time 在～～的时候 by the time 到～～的时候
　　19. for a moment 一会儿 for the moment 暂时 at the moment 当时
　　the moment /minute /instance 正当～～一刹那
　　20. once or twice 一两次 more than once 不止一次 once more 重新，又 once upon a time 从前 once in a while 偶尔