考点跟踪突破书面表达.docx

考点跟踪突破　书面表达

A(2016，百色)
2016年的教师节即将来临。为纪念教师节，学校团委为校刊征文，请你以“I love my teacher”为题，用英语写一篇小短文投稿，介绍你最喜爱的一位科任教师，表达你对该教师的敬意。
提示：1.根据题目的需要，写出你所喜欢的老师的原因，并对该老师作简单的介绍；
2．为避免出现真实姓名，设定文中的教师为“Mr/ Miss Qin”，科目由考生自行选择；
3．词数60～80个。语言通顺，意思连贯。
One possible version：
I love my teacher
It's my honor to have many good teachers in my school life.I love my English teacher，Mr Qin，best among them.I'll never forget him.
He's a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting.He's kind but strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know.He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I love my English teacher very much.
B(2016，南宁)
众所周知，良好学习习惯的养成对中学生极为重要。请以“How to develop our good learning habits”为题写一篇英语小短文，向同学们提出以下建议：
写作要点：1.课前为新课做准备；
2．课堂上认真听课，做笔记；
3．课后按时完成作业并多做阅读。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．写作要点齐全，并做适当发挥：
3．文中不得出现人名、校名或地名，否则不得分；
4．词数：80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
One possible version：
How to develop our good learning habits
Good learning habits can help us study better.There are some suggestions on how to develop good learning habits.
Firstly，we should make some preparations before class.We can read the textbooks or find some useful information about the texts.
Secondly，listening to the teachers carefully and taking notes when having a class are also helpful.
Last but not least，we have to finish our homework on time，and do some reading after school.
If we follow the advice，we are sure to make progress.
C(2016，柳州)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Amy下周将要来柳州旅游，你打算带她参观柳州的一些景点。请根据下列表格信息给她写封邮件，介绍你的计划。
时间
地点
活动
星期一
马鞍山

(Ma'an Hill)
爬山，

欣赏大自然美景

星期二
龙潭公园

(Longtan Park)
去划船，照相……

星期三
五星街

(Wuxing Street)
逛街，品尝美食，

购物……

注意：1.词数70左右，可适当发挥；
2．邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：爬山(climb the hill)；欣赏大自然美景(enjoy the beauty of nature)；去划船(go boating)；照相(take photos)；逛街(walk along the street)；品尝美食(taste delicious food)；购物(do some shopping)
One possible version：
Dear Amy，
I'd like to see you in Liuzhou soon.I've made a plan for our trip next week.
On_Monday，I'll_take_you_to_climb_Ma'an_Hill_and_enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.On_Tuesday_we'll_travel_to_Longtan_Park.There_we_can_go_boating_and_take_photos.On_Wednesday_we_are_going_to_visit_WuxingStreet.It's_one_of_the_nicest_business_centres_in_Liuzhou_with_top_restaurants，hotels，stores_and_cinemas.We_can_walk_along_the_street，taste_delicious_food_and_do_some_shopping_there.
What do you think of my plan？I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
D(2016，玉林)
在学校，一些同学不注意保护学校环境，使学校环境受到了损害。请你根据所给内容要点，以“Keep Our School Clean”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容要点：1.学校环境越来越差。
2．随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。
3．毁坏花草树木。
4．多植树，循环使用教材。
5．保护学校环境。
参考词汇：worse；spit吐痰；destroy毁坏；do something to protect...
要求：1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。
2．语句通顺、语法正确。
3．文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
One possible version：
Keep Our School Clean
Environment in our school has become worse and worse.Some schoolmates spit here and there and throw litter everywhere.Some even destroy the flowers，grass and trees.So we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful.We should also reuse our textbooks.
As students，we are responsible for the environment of our school.We should do something to protect our environment.Everyone in our school should play a part in cleaning it up！We hope that our school will become cleaner and tidier.
E(2016，北海)
众所周知，眼睛对我们非常重要。因为视力问题，越来越多的学生戴眼镜。请你根据以下表格信息，以“Let's Protect Our Eyes”为题，就视力问题产生的原因及保护视力的措施，写一篇英文短文。
视力问题的主要原因
1.长时间学习
2.过多地看电视或玩电脑游戏

保护视力的主要措施
1.不在阳光下看书
2.不要在床上玩手机

3.做眼保健操

4.多看绿色植物

你的建议
……
注意：1.短文要求包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不能提及你的真实姓名和所在学校；
3．词数70左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4．参考词汇：在阳光下in the sun；眼保健操eye exercises
One possible version：
Let's Protect Our Eyes
More and more students wear glasses now.Why？Because most of them study for a long time without taking a break.And some of them spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
As we all know，eyes are very important for us.Here are some ways to protect our eyes.First，we had better not read in the sun.Second，don't play with mobile phones in bed.Third，doing eye exercises is also helpful.What's more，we should go out to look at something green between classes.
In my opinion，it's also important for us to eat some carrots.Carrots are good for our eyes.
F(2016，贵港)
假如你是刘东，经过繁忙紧张的复习和考试，你打算在暑假里做一些有意义的事。请你根据下面的提示，给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，谈谈你的打算。
要点提示：1.关心父母，多与父母交流，帮助做家务；
2．参加社会实践(如：帮助老人，教小孩唱歌画画……)；
3．你将会有什么感想。
写作要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2．行文流畅、表达准确、书写规范；
3．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4．词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：social activity社会实践；independent独立的；experience经验
One possible version：
Dear Tom，
How is it going？I have finished my important exams.The summer holiday is coming.I plan to do some things during the holiday.I will care about my parents and help them cook dinner，do the dishes，clean the room and so on.I will talk with them when I have problems.Then I plan to take part in some social activities，such as helping the old or the disabled or going to teach the children to sing and draw in the countryside.
I think if I keep on doing these things，I'll become more and more independent.I can learn to get along well with others and have more experience.I believe I will have a good time.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Liu Dong
G(2016，河池)
在你的成长过程中，一定希望爸爸能多陪伴你，让你能够更健康、快乐地成长。假如你是Lily，请根据以下内容要点用英文给爸爸写一封信，让爸爸多陪陪你。
内容要点：1.爸爸很忙；
2．老师说孩子在爸爸妈妈的陪伴下，会更健康、快乐地成长；
3．在男孩的心目中，爸爸是偶像；在女孩的心目中，爸爸是英雄；
4．希望爸爸能多陪陪我。……，就像妈妈一样。(写出你希望爸爸能陪着你做的2～3件事情)
参考词汇：在……陪伴下in the company of...；健康地healthily；快乐地happily；偶像idol；在男孩子的心目中in a boy's eyes；
陪伴accompany(v.)
写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2．包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3．字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
4．词数100词左右。(书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)
One possible version：
Dear Dad，
You haven't stayed with us and told us funny stories for a long time.You are always busy with work.
There's no doubt that in the company of the parents，we can grow up more healthily and happily.In a boy's eyes，Dad is his idol.While in a girl's eyes，Dad is her hero.
I really hope you can accompany me more often，just like my mum.For example，we can spend some time flying kites together in spring.At night you may read a bedtime story to me.What's more，when I meet with difficulties in study，you are able to help solve them.
I love you，Dad.
Yours，
Lily