1、(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famousmountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot ofthe mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,
2、we fed monkeys, visiting templesand told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picturesince the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the topof the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fel
3、l asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.(1)第一行:two-days 改为two-day 第二行:mountain 前加a 第三行:noon后加when 第四行:them改为us 第五行:visiting 改为visited 第六行:pictures;passed 第七行:去down 第八行:and改为but 第九行:去at(二)Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many child
4、ren spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder a
5、bout the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to wantthings that they dont real need. (2)第一行:with改为on 第二行:many改为some 第三行:because of第四行:删去 be;read改为reading 第五行:programs第六行:noisy第七
6、行:On改为In 第八行:去掉want前的to;real改为really(三) Im the captain of our school team so with myfellow players weve won several games. Therewill an important game next month. But one of thebest player in our team told me just then that hewouldnt play basketball once more. His parentsasked him to spend in more t
7、ime preparing for thecollege entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more importantthan playing sports and college was the only placefor a smart boy like his son. So my friend had nochoice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (3) 第一行:so改为and第二行:will后加be第三
8、行:player 改为players;then改为now 第四行:once改为any;删去in第五行:to改为for 第六行:go改为going; 第七行:was改为is第八行:their改为his (四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into manydifficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to k
9、eep my diary. I followed heradvice and should put down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I waslearning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story
10、 was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. (4) 第一行:write后加in 第二行:去掉第一个in 第三行:anything改为everything 第四行:my改为a;去掉should 第五行:talk改为talking 第六行:me改为myself第七行:showed 后加it 第八行:reads改为read;word改为words (五)Dear Ralph,Im a newcomer here of a small town. I woulddescribe myself as shy and quie
11、tly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things aswell them. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day.Besides, I have few friends. I dont know that theydont like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but
12、after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesnt seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei(5) 第一行:of改为from 第二行:quietly改为quiet 第三行:well 后加as;to改为at 第四行:happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行:that改为why;talked改为talk 第六行:stranger改为strangers 第七行:sin
13、ce改为but 第八行:去掉about(六) On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a tripto London, and visit the British Museum and someparks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannoteven go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can b
14、e very excited. You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, aconcert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money. All right. Thats how I m going to do.(6) 第一行:划
15、掉myself;a 改为the 第二行:visit 改为visiting 第三行:my前加of第四行:excited 改为exciting 第五行:So改为But第六行:cost改为costs;giving改为given 第七行:are改为is第八行:how改为what(七)Dear Susan,Im very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes
16、 in the afternoon. You wont find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and well talk with ou
17、r plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Yours,Zhang Ming(7)第一行:去掉about;去掉the 第二行:although改为because / as第三行:find 后加it 第四行:minute 改为minutes;rightly 改为right 第五行:or 改为and ;去掉together; 第六行:with 改为about第七行:Having 改为Have(八) You can find all kinds information in justa
18、few minute on the Internet. Its like going to ahuge library without have to walk around to findyour books. Recently even though, many peoplehave been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in America about peopletrying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding in
19、formation on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, youcan find such information like how to kill people.The problem will become more serious in the future.(8)第一行:kinds 改为kinds of;minute改为minutes 第二行:have改为having第三行:去掉even 第四行:They改为There;person改为personal 第五行:in
20、formations改为information;easily改为easy 第六行:are改为is 第七行:what改为how(九)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun.And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime . Startingy
21、our collection of stamps are easy because they are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all overthe world. So once youve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the Stamp CollectorsClubwhich exist t
22、o add more stamps to your collection. 9)第一行:age改为ages 第二行:interested改为interesting第三行:your改为their;what改为which/that第四行:lifetime前加a;are改为 is 第五行:nowhere改为everywhere第六行:for改为with;So改为But 第七行:去掉in 第八行:exist改为exists(十)Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there are still many peopl
23、e live in poor conditions. They make their lives by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A pre
24、sident of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce child without limit.” Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.(10)第一行:去掉a 第二行:live改为living 第三行:thing改为things第四行:去掉第二个to 第五行:在you前加do 第六行:on改为in 第七行:us改为we 第八行:child改为children 第九行:tthis-these 第十行:clear改为clearly
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