高考英语短文改错名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,三、短文改错,第1页,浙江三年考情分析,第2页,1,(,浙江高考,),下面短文中有,10,处语言错误。请在有错误地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。,增加,:,在缺词处加一个漏字符号,(),并在其下面写上该加词。,删除,:,把多出词用斜线,(),划掉。,修改,:,在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后词。,注意,:1.,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,;,2.,只允许修改,10,处,多者,(,从第,11,处起,),不计分。,第3页,Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.,第4页,Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.,Yours,Rosemary,第5页,答案：,Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from,our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?,Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to,find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to,my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the,moved,another,classmates,and,第6页,world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with,my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.,I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.,Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only,souvenir from my past life and my only friend.,Yours,Rosemary,worse,the/my,tired,asleep,are,第7页,1.,【,解析,】,第一句中去掉,far,。距我们农舍,350,英里外，前面有详细数字，不用,far,。,2.,【,解析,】,第二句中,movemoved,。由,last week,判定此处用普通过去时。,3.,【,解析,】,第三句中,otheranother,。此处句意为“他幸运地又找到了一份工作”，故用,another,。,4.,【,解析,】,第四句中,classmateclassmates,。同班同学是可数名词，所以用复数。,5.,【,解析,】,第四句中,orand,。此处不是选择关系而是并列关系，所以用,and,第8页,6.,【,解析,】,第五句中,badworse,。固定搭配，意思是“更糟是,”,。,7.,【,解析,】,第六句中,is,后加,the/my,。此处,first day,前缺乏限定词。,8.,【,解析,】,第七句中,tiringtired,。我感到疲乏极了，不是令人疲乏。,9.,【,解析,】,第七句中,sleepasleep,。固定短语，此处用形容词,asleep,。,10.,【,解析,】,第八句中,isare,。此处主语是,you,故用,are,。,第9页,2,（,新课标全国卷,）,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写以下作文。文中共有,10,处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅包括一个单词增加、删除或修改。,增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加词。,删除：把多出词用斜线（,）划掉。,第10页,修改：在错词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。,注意：,1.,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；,2.,只允许修改,10,处，多者（从第,11,处起）不计分。,第11页,I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.,I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.,第12页,答案：,I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding,me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she,passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.,hold,passed,第13页I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black,toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set,himself apart from others in our small town,he was,strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates,well/clearly,shoulders,to/into,him,and,第14页,away during they came over to play or do homework with me.,However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.,when,ever,第15页,1.,【,解析,】,第二句,holding hold,。此处是,used to,表示“过去经常”，后面接动词原形。,2.,【,解析,】,第三句,passes passed,。依据句中,I was only four,可知，此处讲是过去事情，用普通过去时。,3.,【,解析,】,第五句,much well/clearly依据下文描述可知，作者对自己祖父记忆犹新。所以把,much,改为,well/clearly,。,4.,【,解析,】,第六句,shoulder shoulders,。,shoulder,是可数名词，人有双肩，所以用复数形式。,第16页,5.,【,解析,】,第六句,toward to/into,。,turn from A to/into B,表示“由一个情况转为另一个情况”。,6.,【,解析,】,第七句,himself him,。此处指深沉声音使他和其它人不一样。,7.,【,解析,】,第七句第二个,he,前面加,and,。,he was strong and powerful,和,He had a deep voice,是并列关系。,8.,【,解析,】,去掉第八句,a,。,In fact,是固定短语，表示“实际上”。,第17页,9.,【,解析,】,第八句,during when,。,during,是介词，不能引导状语从句，,when,是连词，能够引导状语从句，从句中动词既可是短暂性动词也可是延续性动词。此处需要表示时间连词，所以用,when,。,10.,【,解析,】,第九句,never ever,。此处表示他是我认识最温和人。由此可知用,ever,。,第18页,3,（,新课标全国卷,）,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写以下作文。文中共有,10,处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅包括一个单词增加、删除或修改。,增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加词。,删除：把多出词用斜线（,）划掉。,第19页,修改：在错词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。,注意：,1.,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；,2.,只允许修改,10,处，多者（从第,11,处起）不计分。,第20页,The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(,瓷器,)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.,第21页,答案：,The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in,Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.Have tea,in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and,dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This,custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,Having,which,became,Interestingly,the,第22页,it had a connection by the British porcelain(,瓷器,)industry.,Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without,handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying,need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This,made for the grow in the porcelain industry.,with/to,drunk,cups,growth,第23页,1.,【,解析,】,第一句中“,Im reading”,作定语修饰,The book,，,read,为及物动词，所以去掉介词,of,。,2.,【,解析,】,第三句中,Have,改为,Having,。,provides,前为主语，应用动名词形式。,3.解析,】,第三句中,that,改为,which,。逗号后为非限制性定语从句，,that,不能引导非限制性定语从句。,4.,【,解析,】,第四句中,becomes,改为,became,。依据下文可知应用普通过去时。,第24页,5.,【,解析,】,第四句中,day,前加定冠词,the,。,6.,【,解析,】,第五句中,Interesting,改为,Interestingly,。位于句子开头，修饰整个句子，应用副词。,7.,【,解析,】,第五句中,by,改为,with/to,。,have a connection with/to,表示“与,有联络”。,8.,【,解析,】,第六句,drank,改为,drunk,。应用被动语态，,drink,过去分词形式为,drunk,。,第25页,9.,【,解析,】,第七句,cup,改为,cups,。依据文章可知,cup,应用复数形式。,10.,【,解析,】,第八句,grow,改为,growth,。定冠词,the,后应加名词形式，,grow,为动词，其名词形式为,growth,。,第26页,热点考向,1,名词,1.,考查方式,:,(1),本该用复数名词却用了单数形式,或本该用单数名词却使用了复数形式。,(2),不可数名词前加了冠词,a/an,或用了复数形式。,第27页,2.,突破技巧,:,在解答这类试题时要尤其注意可数名词单复数形式与意义准确了解,集体名词与个体名词使用方法辨析,惯用抽象名词及物质名词详细化情况及英语中纯不可数名词,(,如,weather,fun,luggage,news,furniture,等,),。,第28页,【,典例,】,1.(,新课标全国卷,)From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.,【,点拨,】,第29页,2.(,新课标全国卷,)It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.,【,点拨,】,第30页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,陕西高考,)The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.,【,解析,】,dishdishes,。依据前面不定代词,several,表示几个,可知这里名词用复数形式。,2.(,浙江高考,)I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.,【,解析,】,weekweeks,。依据前面数词,two,可知后面名词用复数形式。,第31页,热点考向,2,冠词,1.,考查方式,:,(1),单数可数名词前要加冠词。,(2),不定冠词与定冠词区分。,(3),固定短语中冠词使用错误。,2.,突破技巧,:,解答冠词类试题,首先要经过句意搞清楚空后名词是特指还是泛指。若是不可数名词,是否是抽象名词详细化,;,另外还要掌握一些常见由不定式或定冠词或者零冠词组成固定短语。,第32页,【,典例,】,1.(,陕西高考,)It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing.,【,点拨,】,第33页,2.(,辽宁高考,)When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.,第34页,【,点拨,】,第35页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,浙江高考,)As a result,nobody knew truth.,【,解析,】,truth,前加,the,。依据句意可知前文叙述真相,这里已经提到了属于特指,故加,the,。,2.(,新课标全国卷,)I was going to visit a friend there and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.,【,解析,】,long,前加,a,。,holiday,是一个可数名词,在,long,前面加,a,表示一个长假。,第36页,热点考向,3,代词,1.,考查方式,:,(1),人称代词,物主代词,反身代词指代时是否一致。,(2)it,作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有没有缺漏。,2.,突破技巧,:,(1),顺藤摸瓜,理清短文中代词指代关系,注意联络上下文。,(2),系统掌握,it,各种使用方法。,(3),准确把握不定代词在文中正确使用。,第37页,【,典例,】,1新课标全国卷,)I was happy when the toys worked,but when things went wrong,I got angry and broke it.,【,点拨,】,第38页,2.(,陕西高考,)It is such a great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.,【,点拨,】,第39页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,陕西高考,)As she did this,lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt.,【,解析,】,hisher,。当她做这件事时,许多茶水溅在了她,T,恤上。这里表示是一位女士,所以应该把,his,改为,her,。,2.(,四川高考,)And after many attempts,she passed her driving test and told her husband that,to celebrate,he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday.,【,解析,】,heshe,。句子意思是妻子开车带着丈夫去法国度假,所以应该用女士,she,。,第40页,热点考向,4,形容词和副词,1.,考查方式,:,(1)形容词和副词误用。,(2),本该用形容词却用名词作表语。,(3),单音节形容词比较级前用多出,more,。比如,:more longer,。,(4),形容词和副词最高级误用。,第41页,2.,突破技巧,:,(1),修饰名词要用形容词。,(2),修饰动词、副词、形容词或整个句子用副词。,(3),结合语境注意比较级和最高级使用。,第42页,【,典例,】,(,陕西高考,)We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.,【,点拨,】,第43页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,新课标全国卷,)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.,【,解析,】,littleless,。依据句意,我不得不多一些耐心,少一些好斗,可知这里用,less,与,more,对比。,2.(,浙江高考,)Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car.,【,解析,】,UnfortunateUnfortunately,。这里应该用副词修饰整个句子,作整个句子状语,所以改为副词。,第44页,热点考向,5,动词,1.,考查方式,:,(1),作宾语或状语用动词不定式缺,to,。,(2),不及物动词间接宾语缺乏介词。,(3),及物动词与直接宾语间有多出介词。,(4),一些及物动词,因词义混同,用了多出介词或副词。,(5),一些及物动词固定词组中,直接宾语前用了多出不定冠词。,(6),动词时态和语态错用。,(7),非谓语动词混用。,(8),主谓不一致。,第45页,2.,突破技巧,:,(1),纵观全文或全句,明确句中动词所作句子成份。,(2),把握好文章主体时态,注意上下文中所用动词时态提醒及句子中所用时间状语。,(3),注意一些用主动形式表示被动含义动词或短语,如,consist of;belong to;date back to;be worth doing,等。,(4),系统掌握非谓语动词句法功效。5),前后联络,整体把握。,第46页,【,典例,】,1.(,陕西高考,)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.,【,点拨,】,第47页,2.(,新课标全国卷,)Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I could make my toys to last.,【,点拨,】,第48页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,新课标全国卷,)I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.,【,解析,】,feelfelt,。依据下文中,could,前后分句时态应该一致,所以用过去式。,2.(,全国卷,)My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was.,【,解析,】,havehad,。依据后面宾语从句中时态,was,表示过去,而前面分句中谓语动词,tell,应该是发生在,was,之前动作,应该属于过去过去,所以改为过去完成时。,第49页,热点考向,6,介词和介词短语,1.,考查方式,:,(1),介词含义很多,可表示时间、地点、方向、方位、状态、方式、方法、伎俩等。短文改错时应依据句子意义或上下文检验介词是否用得准确。,(2),介词在句中不能单独作谓语。,(3),不该用介词时用了介词,如,next year,常写成,in next year,。,(4),介词与动词组成词组要多加注意。,第50页,2.,突破技巧,:,(1),注意积累语言知识,尤其是一些固定搭配记忆。,(2),强化语法训练,分清连词、副词和介词之间区分和句法功效。,(3),将语法知识记忆和语感培养结合起来。,第51页,【,典例,】,(,新课标全国卷,)Thats it.No more toys to you.,【,点拨,】,第52页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,陕西高考,)I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building.,【,解析,】,在,out,后面加,of,。,walk out of,从,中出来,是一个固定词组。,2.(,新课标全国卷,)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.,【,解析,】,onin,。我把全部钱都放在了口袋里。,in,表示在,里面,而,on,在表面上。,第53页,热点考向,7,连词,1.,考查方式,:,(1),并列句缺并列连词。,(2),名词性从句作主语缺连词,或者误用其它连词。,(3),关系代词、关系副词及隶属连词在复合句中使用是否正确。,(4)and,or,but,so,however,therefore,等词利用是否正确。,第54页,2.,突破技巧,:,短文改错对连词考查仅限于上下文之间语意连贯方面。所以在做这类题目时,主要是要读懂上下文,搞清楚上下句之间关系。掌握句式结构,把握准语意关系是做好这类试题关键,如并列逻辑关系常见词有,and,both.and.,not only.but also.,as well as,等,;,转折逻辑关系常见词有,however,but;,递进逻辑关系常见词有,whats more,moreover,besides,等。,第55页,【,典例,】,(,浙江高考,)I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.,【,点拨,】,第56页,【,跟踪演练,】,1.(,浙江高考,)After we left,I said,“That was very nice of you,Mother.So I didnt think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did I,”said Mother cheerfully.,【,解析,】,SoBut,。依据前后句意,可知这里表示一个转折关系,所以应该将,So,改为,But,。,2.(,陕西高考,)I didnt have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get it.,【,解析,】,butand/so,。那个时候我没有带着摄影机,所以我跑回家去拿了。这里是一个递进关系或者因果关系,所以,but,改为,and/so,。,第57页,1,I bring Rose home five years ago.My neighbor Mrs.Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her.She was such lovely dog,after all.Rose also seemed to like Mrs.Black.Two years ago,however,Mrs.Black got cancer.Having been treating in hospital,she decided to receive treatment at home.,第58页,Since my husband and I were busy in our work,we seldom went to see her.Three months ago,Mrs.Black died.To our surprised,her husband came to thank to us for keeping Rose one day.He said in the past several months,Rose went to accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went to work.With she around,his wife felt so warm and wasnt in so much pain.I never knew that.That Rose did was really heart-warming.,第59页,答案：,I bring Rose home five years ago.My neighbor Mrs.,Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her.She was,such lovely dog,after all.Rose also seemed to like Mrs.,Black.Two years ago,however,Mrs.Black got cancer.Having,been treating in hospital,she decided to receive treatment at,brought,immediately,a,treated,第60页,home.Since my husband and I were busy in our work,we,seldom went to see her.Three months ago,Mrs.Black died.To,our surprised,her husband came to thank to us for keeping,Rose one day.He said in the past several months,Rose went to,accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went,to work.With she around,his wife felt so warm and wasnt in,with,surprise,after,her,第61页,so much pain.I never knew that.That Rose did was really,heart-warming.,What,第62页,1.,【,解析,】,将第一句中,bring,改为,brought,。,ago,表示过去时。,2.,【,解析,】,将第二句中,immediate,改为,immediately,。,immediately,表示“一,就,”,。,3.,【,解析,】,在第三句中,such,后面加上,a,。后面,dog,是可数名词。,4.,【,解析,】,将第六句中,treating,改为,treated,。,she,与,treat,之间是被动关系。,5.,【,解析,】,将第七句中,in,改为,with,。,be busy with,固定词组，“忙于,”,意思。,第63页,6.,【,解析,】,将第九句中,surprised,改为,surprise,。,to ones+,抽象名词，表示“使某人感到,是”。,7.,【,解析,】,将第九句中,thank,后面,to,去掉。,thank,是及物动词。,8.,【,解析,】,将第十句中,before,改为,after,。意思是“在,之后”。,9.,【,解析,】,把第十一句中,she,改为,her,。,with,复合结构。,10.,【,解析,】,把第十三句中,That,改为,What,。,what,引导主语从句，并在从句中作,did,宾语。,第64页,2,(,宁波模拟,),I was a honest child indeed.I didnt dare to tell lies because of my eyes often let the secret out.I remembered telling a lie to my parents,and I could hard fix eyes on my fathers face,let alone my mothers eyes.I glanced here and there,up and down nervous.However,after I came to Beijing,I no longer have to worry about my nervous eyes because everything I wanted to speak was sent by letter.I found myself often tell small lies.I wrote“Im well in Beijing.I enjoy the food selling at the university.And at weekends,I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.”,第65页,答案：,I was a honest child indeed.I didnt dare to tell lies,because of my eyes often let the secret out.I remembered,telling a lie to my parents,and I could hard fix eyes on my,father s face,let alone my mother s eyes.I glanced here and,there,up and down nervous.However,after I came to Beijing,I no longer have to worry about my nervous eyes because,an,hardly,my,nervously,had,第66页,everything I wanted to speak was sent by letter.I found myself,often tell small lies.I wrote“I m well in Beijing.I enjoy the,food selling at the university.And at weekends,I often buy,fried chickens or pork to eat.”,say,telling,sold,chicken,第67页,1.,【,解析,】,将第一句中,a,改为,an,。,honest,是以元音音素开头，需要用,an,。,2.,【,解析,】,将第二句中,of,去掉。这里是一个原因状语从句。,3.,【,解析,】,将第三句中,hard,改为,hardly,。,hardly,表示几乎不。,4.,【,解析,】,在第三句,fix,之后加,my,。,fix ones eyes on,凝视于,。,5.,【,解析,】,将第四句中,nervous,改为,nervously,。修饰动词,glance,，用副词。,第68页,6.,【,解析,】,将第五句中,have,改为,had,。全文基本时态是过去时。,7.,【,解析,】,将第五句中,speak,改为,say,。,speak,普通跟语言，,say,后接说话内容。,8.,【,解析,】,将第六句中,tell,改为,telling,。作,found,宾语补足语，表示正在做,。,9.,【,解析,】,将第八句中,selling,改为,sold,。,the food,与,sell,之间为被动关系，所以用过去分词短语作后置定语。,10.,【,解析,】,将第九句中,chickens,改为,chicken,。,chicken,作“鸡肉”讲，为不可数