小升初英语作文范文.doc

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作文专题
审题过程
1. 时态：主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。要根据题意判断正确的时态。
注意：一篇作文可以不止一种时态。

2. 人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。
1） 如使用第三人称， 需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，动词后需加s或es。如：She likes playing ping-pong.
2） 写作过程中注意代词的格式。
如： He (主格) feels tired. I like him. (宾格)
This is his (形代) bike. That’s not your book, It’s mine. (名代)
复数形式：Their English teacher is very funny. They often play football together.

3. 结构：使文章有条理的方法
1） 使用时间词语衔接：如写过去时的作文：Last Sunday; Last Weekend; My Holiday等
作文题目示例
时态
时间结构衔接词
Last Sunday
过去时
in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening,
Last Weekend
过去时
on Saturday morning (afternoon),
on Sunday morning (afternoon),
My Holiday
过去时
on Monday, on Tuesday, on Wednesday…
on the 1st day, on the 2nd, on the 3rd… last day
Sunday Plan
将来时
in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening

2) 总起句和结尾句前后呼应。

4. 容易出错的句型：
1） be动词和行为动词： 同一个句子只能出现一种（现在进行时除外）
错误： I was went to the park last Sunday. (把was去掉)
2） like + 动词ing形式。
I like going shopping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)
3） 三单句子： She goes to school on foot every day. 动词后加s(或es)!
4） There be句型
There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are)

范文：
1. 过去时：(动词用过去式)
Last Weekend
I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I went to the park with my grandparents. We went fishing there. In the afternoon, I played ping-pong with my friends. It was funny! On Sunday morning, I read books and did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. In the evening, I played chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend.
2. 将来时: （be going to +动词原形 或 will + 动词原形）be going to=will
Sunday Plan
I am going to have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I am going to the park with my grandparents. We will go fishing there. In the afternoon, I am going to play ping-pong with my friends. Then we will go to the cinema. In the evening, I am going to read books and do my homework at home. Then I will play chess with my father. It will be a funny day!

3. 一般现在时： （第一人称：动词用原形）
My Sunday
I have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I often go the park with my grandparents. Sometimes we go fishing there. In the afternoon, I often play ping-pong with my friends. Then we go to the cinema. In the evening, I often read books and do my homework at home. Then I often play chess with my father. Sunday is fun!

4. 一般现在时： （三单：注意人称、动词+S）
My family
There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and do sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.

英语作文范文
1、我的书包My Backpack
I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift from my parents. I love it very much. It is very "hard-working", because I keep all my school things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during school days. It is a good friend of mine.
2、我的铅笔盒My Pencil-box
　　I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. It’s a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. There are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.
3、我的新学校
I have moved to my new school since September. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. It's quite different from my old school. It's larger, much more modern. This is why I love my new school. If you are free, you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look.
4、今年暑假(This vacations/)
　　In this vacations I am going to go to travel in some famous places and I am going to go to visit my grandparents in the village. I am going to learn something different. like example: I know people work in the village it is so hard and so tired, they are grow the vegetable, rice and something else it is very difficult.
5、今天的经历(Today’s experience)
　　It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.
　　The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I ran to him and said ,” Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them .”
6、有趣的一天A Wonderful Day
Last November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at about ten o'clock. We had a very good time on November 24.
7、生日（Birthday）
　　My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.
　　At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.
　　They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.
We have a good time at the party.
8、我的理想。 我想成为校长(I want to be a headmaster)
　　I want to be a headmaster when I grow up. I think that’s a good job. My school is in the forest. It’s very beautiful. I go to work by Benz at eight o’clock in the morning. The teachers in my school are kind and patient. They are all hardworking so they get good salary. The children in my school have three classes in the morning. In the afternoon, they play and pick up mushrooms or strawberries in the forest. They have no homework. They are very happy! At four o’clock in the afternoon, I go home with kinds of mushrooms and fruits in my Benz. They are for my dinner.
动物
9、我的狗（My Dog）
　　I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?
10、猫(A cat) Who am I?
Hello! My name is Feifei. My mother is very beautiful. My father is very handsome. So I’m very lovely. Look! My coat is white. My eyes are blue. I have a long tail. Fish is my favorite food. I like mice too. Guess! Who am I?
11、我喜欢的动物（Animals）
　　I like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal. It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.
　　It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.
　　When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: Woof! Wood!.
I like my dog very much.
12、动物自我介绍：兔子 Do you like me?
　　Hello! Everyone. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Look! I’m very lovely. My eyes are red. My ears are long. My hair is white. My tail is short. I like carrots very much. I have a good friend. She’s my little master. Her name is Zhou Xun. We always play games together. I like her very much and she likes me, too.
人物
13、自我介绍
Hi! I am a happy and quiet girl. I am from China. I am twelve years old. I am a pupil. I am in Class Three Grade Four. I have many good friends. I like many pets: the peacock, panda, rabbit and bird. They are lovely. I am tall. I have around face, there are big eyes, small mouth, small nose on my face. I have a black long hair. I like eating apples, bananas, chicken and...I like music, singing, running, pinting...I often say: Book is my good friend. I like it! Who am I? Yes, my name is Lv Enhui.Do you like me?
14、我的好朋友（My Good Friend）
Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts , music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.
\15、我的新老师（My new teacher）
　　My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。
　　My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou .
16、我的好习惯（My good habits ）　
　　In the morning. First, I get up. Next, I brush my teeth. Then, I wash my face. After that, I have breakfast. At last, I go to school.
　　In the evening. First, I finish my homework. Next, I have dinner. Then, I pack my schoolbag. After that, hang up my clothes. At last, I go to bed.
17、最有趣的事
　 To me, the most interesting subject is English. But I find studying English is very difficult So if you ask which subject is the most difficult to me. My answer will be English. Now I am a student, everyday I have more than one English classes, I like studying it very much and I hope I can study it very well. So I can talk with foreigners and know the foreign countries things, it is very useful.
18、我最喜欢的季节
My favourite season is summer. Firstly, we will have a long holiday in summer, so we can relax ourselves. And we can also eat ice cream in summer, I love eating it very much; Secondly, it gets really warm in summer, so I feel really energetic; Thirdly, the days are longer than nights in summer, so we can play longer. In a word ,I love summer very much.
19、我最喜欢的节日(My favourite festival)
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. Why? Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents' home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and me both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.
I'm always happy at the Spring Festival. Which is your favourite festival?
书信
上个周末
Dear Mike
Let me tell you something about my last weekend. I got up at about seven. Between 8:00 to 11:00 I was doing my homework. Then I helped my parents clean the house. In the afternoon, I went to visit my friends and at about 3:00, we were playing table tennis. In the evening I surfed the internet and read books. How about you?
Yours
Li Lei
我的情况：自我介绍
Dear XXX,
How are you! My name is Peter. I’m from XXX. I’m 12 years old. I study in a primary school. I’m in Class 1, Grade 6. Let me tell you something about my family. There are 3 people in my family. They are my father, mother and I. We are a happy family. How about you? Please write to me soon.
Yours
XXX
句型
There are_几 people in my family, my _家人_and I. I am My father is ________. He is ____er than me. My mother is ___. She is ____er than me.
I am a_________. I like__动ing___. I can_动原_.
My father is a/an____. He likes____. He can _______.
My mother is a/an____. She likes______. She can_______.

写作文注意事项
1、确定人称，I / He / She
2、确定时态：一般现在时 动词原型或三单形式（-s）
现在进行时 am/ is / are 动词现在分词形式（-ing）
一般将来时 will 动词原型 或 be going to 动原
一般过去时 动词过去式（- ed）
3、句型：人称 动作相应时态 地点 方式 时间。

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