刘晓艳英语作文模板.doc

刘晓艳作文：
小作文顶多120字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面2，切忌！

页面2用于写大作文，220字左右，相当于B5纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应！

大作文
单号版：
What a compelling and thought-provking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……（句1）,in contrast,……（句2）。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?
注释：thought-provking 中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不同的行。
Compelling and thought-provking 两个ing 押尾韵，俗称绝句
Interesting and instructive 两个押头韵
in contrast 路标性词汇，前后形成对比。
句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比
例如：06年的一个小男孩。。。。。。另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述）
04年起点也是终点
穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。
00年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样）
温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样）
On earth:究竟 加强语气
Drawer=作者。不能写author显得俗气
Really:可去掉，但不丰满

第二段
Simple as the image is the implications（启示）mirrored（反映）are apprantly far-reaching（深远的）。Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social concern（关注）。Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth（其中of sth也可省略不写）been talked about so much as in our society today（历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情）

In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story（事情）and similar events happened and happening are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life.（27字）Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs（一揽子项目，计划，方案）should be initiated to reverse the grim stuation----（此处是破折号）lauching（发起，发动）a nationwide education campaign,setting up relvant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.（36字）

三段
To conclude,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases .And it is imperative （necessary）actions be taken to curb（扭转不好的趋势）such practices（综上所述，结论如下：早该重视这种现象了）.There is reason to believe that as long as all the society ,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved ,make concerted effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least reduced.

注释：
All the society,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved 是用来扩充用的，如果自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1，2个不写
“There is reason to believe that ”可以删除，句子意思不变

第一段双号版
What on earth can we derive from（从什么中获得）this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cases are far from being (=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels (类似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。Additionally ,to reverse (扭转) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed （定制）by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行为) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任务) of the agenda. (议事日程)

注释：在第二段中几乎没写东西（指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用），希望考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。
第三段
Judging (非谓语动词) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclusive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced.I’m strongly convinced that only when such happenings (事情) come to an end,can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society (和谐社会) as well wish.

呵呵。。。。。。好了，我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了，剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础上建立起来的（站在巨人的肩膀上）
强调两点哦：
首先把，部分考生担心射门雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要哦。因为一般人多多少少都是会修改的。
其次，物以稀为贵，东西多了就不值钱了。所以呢各位牛人高手可以在这个基础上采取各种方法对其进行修改（替换词语，换句型，被动，主动，强调句，定语从句如此种种，添加一些自己的宝贝）。

下面单刀直入，切入正题吧。
讲述可能出现的一些新情况：
3个万一：
万一大作文漫画是2幅而不是1幅
万一作文时非讽刺类的呢
万一作文时“图表类”呢（如97，99）柱状，曲线，饼状
下面我们针对单双号分别展开
单号
1. 双漫画
所有的单数改复数，当然有一些地方时不能修改的哦
2. 讽刺
“Additionally到末尾”删除，我们将其修改为举例（例下）
Let’s come to an example concerning .an acquaintance of mine ,which serves well as a good example to the point……
第三段句子中的curb修改为ensure
第三段最后一句“such upsetting 。。。。。。”全删，修改为
We can maintain a happy ,a healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.

双号
非讽刺修改
1. 第二段中primarily句中删除upsetting
2. 第二段中what’s more 一句删除，“worsening”
3. It’s hard……if we fail to guasp such cases and can’t put them into pratices
4. 把Additionally——段尾换成“举例“
To make the point even clearer,let’s come to an example regarding
An acquaintance of mine

That it is high time all parties concerned took effective and efficient measure to practice .
The authorites the mass media ,aswell as each invidual are involved And I’m strongly convinced that we’ll properly ensure such practices,thus maintaining a happy, heathy society as we all wish.

3. 万一表格，则仅仅修改第一段
As is vividly presented in the ******above,……in contrast,……what on earth does the,……
What’s apprantly illustuated in the——is that ……in contrast 2后面接上一两个描述性句子用下

2、3段落都不用修改除非要求分析原因等等（重点是漫画，讽刺）

一般作文的三个部分是
1， describe 2，imply 3，comment suggest
小作文
Dear sir or madam,
Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter and I’mwriting to present my complaint/inquiry/application/apology/推荐 concerning sth that……（引述事实或理由 例 concerning computer that I’ve bought in your shop last weekend）
There’re an array of factors contributing to (同result in 同一个意思)this.第一第二第三（同大作文一样）。For one thing…,For another…。There are ahost of aspects I’ll offer here……
I’d be most grateful if you can reply me at your earlist convenience and any favorable considerations will be greatly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely
Li Ming
注释：
1. 不考辞职信，考研英语小作文重在完成一般交际能力，不能排除申请信，对complaint/inquiry/application/apology要看一些作文范例。小作文一般考不出什么花样，也不能怎么特别发挥。
2. 不写一般英文信笺右上角的地址，时间的了
3. sir or madam 不用Mr
4. 文章开头可以顶格写，也可以空格写，不扣分。一般按习惯可以空三个字符
5. Yours Li Ming 一般不这样写，而要加上Sincerely，同时Li Ming 两个首字母记得大写
6. 作文要多练习
7. 希望2：00——5：00做英语

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开头段：
1. Whoever in front of this image will be very much/highly/greatly amused/interested/shocked/striked。How interesting and enlightening it is!What is conspicuously/clearly illustrated/presented/portrayed in the drawing above is that__ + 描述图). Odd and funny as it seems/looks to be, such/this happening/ practice/ phenomenon/ story./ case/ event are so pervasive/ widespread that we can’t afford to ignore them .
2.what an amusing and interesting painting it is! It is indicative of common, yet serious social phenomenon:描述+补充描述.However ridiculous and farfetched, as the above image looks/seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.
3.How interesting and instructive the above painting it is.It is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing: 描述+补充描述，simple as the image seems to be, the intended/implied meaning goes far deeper. What on earth does the picture reallys aim to mirror?
第二段：1.There is no denying the fact that/Obviously, we can earily define what the drawer intends/aims/attempts to reflect to us, and the strong and dear message suggested/communicated/presented have is that+主旨：
2.It goes without saying that +主旨
3.This drawing goes far more than/beyond a simple/mere drawing. Indeed, it carries a thought-provoking social implication:+主旨
4.What the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a simple drawing. Instead, it carries important implications: 主旨
论据: 1.It is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all walks of life, and one of my former clloeages may serve as a good example+例子
2.Nowhere in history has the issue(of+主旨) been concerned so much as in our society.
3.It should be observed that upsetting parallels can be readily found anywhere in all walks of life.
A case in point is an acquaintance of mine, who +举例,According to a survey(conduct by CCTV/china daily last October, 78.6% of the people (主旨)one following the tide）
“__” says Dr wang，中国科学院院士，“----“
1/2/3+Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation will inevitably decrease our chances of success. And failure to come up with countermeasures will do more harm to our country.Provided /If such stories go unchallenged it is hard imagine what our society will be like years later. Indeed, it is imperative that the whole society be made aware that any prompt action is of great benefit to all.
第三段：1.Much can be done what tops the agenda, I deem, is to help people develop a position and wholesome outlook on life as well as the world and to cultivate noble and worthy value and gualities among them. Moreover, we should appeal to the government to take nationwide prompt actions. All the society should make sustained and concertal efforts to curb such practices. Only in these ways can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.Although it is easier said than done, there are good reasons to expect that such case will be terminally ended or at least significantly reduced
2.Just as an ancient chinese philosophic book concludes,…,“All that is needed for the prevalence of a mislead is that good people do nothing.” To begin with, schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to the upsetting/worsening/gimp trend, doing their utmost to develop worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people of they rowing threat of this phenomenon. What is more/Beside, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions. Fortunately,due attention has been paid and effective measures have been encouraged. This is a promising start, although there is still a long way for us to go.
3To paraphrase 19th philosopher xx “….” I’m strongly convinced that the authorities, schools and mass media should communiate their positive and instructive messages to the public actively and forcefully, lest this kind of grim situdion go unchallenged. If positive and effective measures can be well under way, it may not be long for us to get an easy breath(have a h..,h… society as we all wish) If good people do nothing,there is a real possibility that such trend will turn into a dreadful handicap, thus posing a threat to the solid growth of our society.