英语届高考书面表达漫画类作文写作指导市公开课一等奖百校联赛特等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,書式設定,書式設定,第 2,第 3,第 4,第 5,*,高考英语书面表示写作指导,之,漫 画 作 文,(议论类),第1页,Tasks:,1.To deal with,difficulty,in writing about cartoons,2.To learn the basic,structure,of cartoon writing,3.To learn some useful,expressions,of cartoon writing,第2页,示例,示例,第3页,文字材料类,第4页,议论类,?,第5页,之,英语漫画作文,(议论类),攻略,第6页,Group work（1）:,1.,share,your essay with your group members,2.raise the,difficulties,you had when writing it,第7页,Difficulties?,1.读图,2.解意,3.谋篇,第8页,读图,1.漫画,题目,眼睛,2.漫画,画面,细节,3.漫画,文字,观点,4.漫画,夸大寓意,第9页,读图,题目,画面,文字,夸大,第10页,读图,The underwear(shorts for men and panties for ladies)is a funny way to look at how,desperate,parents get-trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not-and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!,夸大,第11页,Lets practise!,题目,画面,文字,夸大,第12页,解意,1.辨明褒贬，找准角度,称赞褒扬,or,批评讽喻？,第13页,解意,.联络生活，明晰主旨,Imagination!,第14页,解意,注意:,文字说明部分往往含有主要信息(,clues,)，切记要认真阅读！,第15页,Lets practise!,第16页,Lets practise!,The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China.,In the poor countryside,there are no buildings for classrooms,let alone good teachers.They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees.,However,the situation is totally different in the cities.Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education.But they have their own problems.What they face is the endless homework,which puts so much pressure on them that some students dont want to continue their studies.,第17页,谋篇,3 parts:,1)describe the picture,2)interpret its meaning,3)give your opinions about the phenomenon,第18页,Part 1,Describe,the picture,The picture is talking about/shows,The picture shows a common phenomenon.,The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.,In the picture,there are/is(are)doing,The picture above is about,Lets look at the picture above/first.,第19页,Lets practise!,第20页,Describe,the picture,The picture is talking about a story about,neighborhood.Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say“hello”when they happen to meet each other in the corridor.One of them says,“I moved here 5 years ago,but I never met you before.Could I ask your name please?”The other says,”I have been here for 6 years.How should I call you?”,第21页,Lets practise!,第22页,Describe,the picture,We can see in the picture that,a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure.When he was a kid,he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school,and later a key high school.And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.,第23页,Part 2,Interpret,the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever,this kind of story is performed everywhere.,The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of,The picture indicate that weNowadays,it is a common phenomenon that,This is a satirical,(讽刺),cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,第24页,Part 3 Give your,opinions,I think/believe that,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,should,It is better/advisable to,I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,2/3,must,have to,Do/Dont,第25页,Group work（2）:,Join your group and,rewrite,the essay together,using,the,expressions,youve learned.,第26页,Polish up your article!,1.To use,linking words,if necessary,2.To use,complicated structures,if possible,第27页,1.To use linking words,表示平行、对等或选择关系,and,as well as,together with,not onlybut also.,表示转折关系,but,however,in spite of,although,otherwise,while,表示对比关系,on the contrary,instead of,on one handon the other hand.,表示因果关系,so,therefore,as a result(of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to.,第28页,表示时间、次序关系,first,second,then,next,finally,for one thing.for another,in the end,表示递进、强调关系,besides,whats more,in addition,worse still,above all,表示解释、说明关系,such as,for example,for instance(比如),in other words,and so on,表示结论,in short,in brief,in a word,in general,on the whole,in conclusion,1.To use linking words,(五三),第29页,2.To use complicated structures,People suggest that the conference be put off.,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,She,walked out of the room and many students followed her.,Followed by many students,she walked out of the room,To his surprise,the little girl knew so many things.,What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.,被动语态,非谓语动词,从句,第30页,The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,倒装,So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.,强调句,It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.,Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.,虚拟语气,But for the efforts of firefighters,many lives would not have been saved.,第31页,My version:,For most of the parents,its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor.,Lets look at the picture above.,Two people are standing in front of a computer,whose monitor is wearing underwear.The woman is staring at the computer,thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children-hardware,software and underwear.,第32页,It may be ridiculous to,cover the PC monitor with someones underwear,but it describes vividly,parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem.Concerned about their childrens security,some of them,just cut off the access to the Internet at home-“the hardware solution”;,some,choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line“the software solution”;,others,may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet-“the underwear solution”!,第33页,From my point of view,this phenomenon calls for the attention of,the whole society.,On one hand,the government,should,make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites,making it a safer place for all teenagers.,On the other hand,it is better for,parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention.Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously.,Only in this way can,the Internet be made safer for the children.,第34页,再嘱咐几句：,1.确保三要素体裁,、,时态,、,人称,正确,体裁,：议论文,时态,：普通现在时,人称,：第三人称,第35页,你不是父母！,第36页,人称混乱！,第37页,再嘱咐几句：,1.确保三要素体裁、时态、人称正确,体裁,：议论文,时态,：普通现在时,人称,：第三人称,.防止漫画类作文一些常见失误,第38页,1)误解图意,大忌！,第39页,2)企图幽默,可笑！,第40页,3)不明寓意,白写！,第41页,4)中心不明,混乱！,第42页,再嘱咐几句：,1.确保三要素体裁、人称、时态正确,体裁,：议论文,人称,：第三人称,时态,：普通现在时,.防止漫画类作文一些常见错误,.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）,.搞一精辟结尾！,第43页,Too,short,!,第44页,Too,long,!,第45页,不要动不动就,study hard,!,第46页,Enjoy this excellent ending!,In my view,this phenomenon is no good to us,nor,to our society.,Its time that,we took some measures to improve it.People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together.We,should call on,people to be friendly to each other.As a popular song says,“If everybody gives a little love to each other,the world will become the sea of love.”,第47页,Enjoy this excellent ending!,From my point of view,reducing the childrens heavy burden,requires efforts from,the schools,the society as well as the parents.Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind,is bound to,fail.Thus,parents together with teachers,should become active supporters of,all-around character education and work closely with each other,in guiding,the students towards a balanced development.,第48页,一篇,好,英语漫画作文,仔细,审题,准确,立义,规范,行文,整齐,书写,第49页,Not good!,第50页,Worse!,第51页,Neat!,第52页,一篇,好,英语漫画作文,仔细,审题,准确,立义,规范,行文,整齐,书写,第53页,Lets try it!,下列图描绘是当前很多孩子们苦恼。请你依据对下面这幅漫画了解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象原因并发表你看法。,第54页,Thank you!,第55页,In my opinion,spare-time training courses are,a waste of time,for many students.They might do better when they,show interest in,what they are learning.Please dont force these students to do what they,are not willing to,and when learning is fun,surely they will,do better than we expect,!,Enjoy this excellent ending!,第56页,Lets try it!,下列图描绘是中国当前教育中存在问题。请你依据对下面这幅漫画了解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象原因并发表你看法。,第57页,