地点描述类-英语写作公开课PPT文档.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to describe a place,地点描写,z x xk,1,Id like to tell you something about our city.Youve made the wise choice to travel here.Hangzhou,the capital of Zhejiang Province,lies in the southeast of China covering an area of 16596,square kilometers.With a population of about 8.8 million,the city has a history of more than 2,200 years,and enjoys a reputation of,a paradise on earth.It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest,among which the West Lake is the most famous one.It also has many modern factories and high buildings.Besides,the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.Im sure you will have a good time here.,Thank you.,赏析文章并找出好的句型,:,2,location,population,area,history,culture,living,conditions,educationeconomy,a place,Possible subjects,：,3,1.,介绍地理位置（,Location,）,be located in(on/to),be situated in(on/to),lie in(on/to),坐落于,脚下,/,顶部,stands at the foot of/on the top of,常用词组,4,丽水中学位于丽水市北部，白云山脚下。,Lishui High School,is located in,the North of Lishui city and stands at the foot of Baiyun Mountain.,Lihue High School,is situated in,the North of Lishui city and stands at the foot of Baiyun Mountain.,Lihue High School,lies in,the North of Lishui city and stands at the foot of Baiyun Mountain.,Located in,the North of Lishui city,Lishui High School stands,5,学校的南边有一条公路。,To the south of,the school,lies/runsa highway.,山顶有一座庙。,On the top of the mountain,lies,a temple.,6,毗邻,border/bordering;,neighbor/neighboring,周围是,be surrounded by,1.,我的家乡位于中国浙江，毗邻福建。,My hometown,neighboring Fujian,is located in Zhejiang Province of China.,2.,丽水四面环水，是个居住的好地方。,Surrounded by the water,Lishui is a nice place to live in.,72.,介绍人口（,Population,）,has/with a(large/small)population of,The population of is,is a city with a(large/small)population of,百分之,70,的人口是,:Eighty percent of the population here are.,中国是一个发展中国家，人口,13,亿。,1.,China is a developing country,with a population of 130 million.,2.,As a developing country,China has a population of 130 million.,3.,The population of China,which is a developing country,is 130 million.,8,北京是中国的首都，是一个有,1200,多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,Beijing,the capital of China,is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.,9,3.,介绍面积（,Area,）,has/occupies/takes up/covers,an area of square kilometers/meters,covering/with an area of square kilometers,10,3.,介绍面积（,Area,）,写作指导：,面积表达可用,同位语、介词短语、非谓语,等做插入结构以复杂句型。如：,天安门是世界上最大的广场，它的面积是,1.Tiananmen Square,the largest square in the world,covers/has an area of,2.Tiananmen Square,with/covering an area of,is the largest square in the world.,3.Tiananmen Square,which takes up square kilometers,is the largest square in the world.,11,4.,介绍历史（,History,）,:,has a long history(of years),with a long history(of years),历史悠久,丽水是一个现代化城市,历史悠久。,1.Lishui,a modern city,has a long history,.,2.Lishui,which has a long history,is a modern city.,3.Lishui is a modern city,with a long history,.,12,4.,介绍历史（,History,）,:,见证历史轮回：,has witnessed too much coming and going in history,追溯到,：,dates/goes back to,1.,建于,16,世纪的城堡见证了太多的历史轮回。,Built in the 16th century,the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.,2.,牛津大学追溯到,13,世纪。,Oxford University,dates back to the thirteenth century.,13,旅游,景点,a place of interest,名胜,a famous tourist resort,a tourist attraction,a tourist destination,旅游景点，旅游目的地,a scenic spot,风景区,a tourist city,旅游城市,14,Practice:,1.,中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China,one of the largest countries in the world,is,located in,the east of Asia.,2.,多伦多是加拿大东部的一个繁华的港口城市，总面积,1,850,平方千米，总人口,261,万人。,(cover a total area of),Toronto,a busy port city on the east coast of Canada,covers a total area of,1,850 square kilometers,with a population of,2.61million.,15,Practice:,3.,中国是一个古老的,(ancient),国度，有将近五千年的历史。,(with a history of),China,is,an ancient country,with a long history of,almost 5000 years.,4.,西藏有其独特,(unique),的文化，和众多的,名胜,如布达拉宫,(Potala Palace),，深深地吸引各地游。,(be well-known for),Tibet,is well-known for,its unique culture and a number of,places of interest,such as,Potala Palace,attracting,tourists from all over the world.,16,Lets have a try.,根据以下内容,用,5,句话写一篇短文：,北京是中国首都，位于中国北部，人口达,2114,万，面积是,16410,平方千米。拥有,3000,多年悠久历史，在不同的朝代有不同的称谓。作为文化名城，它拥有众多名胜，如长城，故宫等，吸引八方来客。,2008,年成功举办了奥运会，给世界人民很好的机会了解北京。,参考词汇：朝代,dynasty,故宫,the Forbidden City,写作思路,：,1,、审题,-,文体：,地点介绍,人称：,第三人称,时态：,一般现在时、过去式,2,、谋篇：要点重组位置、面积、人口、风景特色,3,、行文：运用不同的句型进行翻译,4,润色：,(1),在文章中使用一些非谓语动词。,（,2,）巧用同位语（,3,）活用从句（,4,）巧用连接词,17,Beijing,the capital city of China,is located in,the north of China./It,covers an area of,16,410 square kilometers,with a population of,21.14 million./It was,an ancient city with a long history of,more than 3000 years,and,has different name,s,in different dynastie,s,./As a famous cultural city,Beijing,is famous for many places of interest,such as,the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and so on,attracting,tourists,from,home and abroad,every year.,It is in 2008 that,Beijing,succeeded in holding,the Olympic Games,which,offers a very good chance for people around the world to know more about it.,18,Homework,：,(,根据以下内容,用,5,句话写一篇短文,),澳大利亚位于太平洋的南面,是大洋洲最大的国家，面积达,760,万平方公里。但它的人口稀少，只有,1000,多万人。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个洲组成，其中墨尔本（,Melbourne),和悉尼是最大的两个城市,.,首都堪培拉,(Canberra),风景秀丽。澳大利亚以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和独特的野生动植物而闻名于世。世界各地的游客经常到澳大利亚体验它独特的美景。,19,Located in the south of the Pacific Ocean,Australia,the largest country in Oceania,covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers,with a small population of over 10 million.It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have plenty of rainfall.It is made up of 6 states,in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cites.Besides these,Canberra,the capital of Australia,is a beautiful city.Because it is famous for its bright sunshine,countless sheep and cattle and unique wildlife,the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.,20,