高考英语作文书信高分策略名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,我们一起研究高考,英语高考第II卷,第二节 书面表示（,25,分）,To strive for your success in writing,第1页,200,7-,十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析,类 型,次 数 本省考卷时间,邀请信,4 ,介绍信,3 (介绍地点),求援信,3 （卖中国结）,咨询信,2,求职类、申请信,2,祝贺、感激信.道歉,2,提议信,2 ，,投诉信,1,招聘广告、通知类,1 ，,便签、留言条,1,议论文,1,想象类1,第2页,高考英语评分标准：,1.本题总分为25分，按,5个档次,给分。,2.评分时，先依据文章,内容和语言,初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最终给分。,3.词数,少于80,和,多于120,，从总分中,减去2,分。,4.评分时应注意主要内容为：,内容关键点,，,应用词汇,和,语法结构丰富性,和,准确性,及上下文,连贯性,。,第3页,高考英语评分标准：,5.,拼写与标点符号,是语言准确性一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响程度给予考虑。英，美拼写及词汇使用方法均可接收。,6.如,书写较差,以至影响交际，将其,分数降低一个档次,。,7.语言首先要求准确通顺。,8.勉励写出新奇词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。,第4页,英语各档次给分范围和要求,第五档,(,很好,);(21-25,分,),1.,完全完成了试题要求任务。,2.,覆盖全部内容关键点。,3.,应用了较多语法结构和词汇。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,;,具备较强语言利用能力。,5.,有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,完全到达了预期写作目标。,第四档,(,好,),：,(16-20,分,),1.,完全完成了试题要求任务。,2.,虽遗漏,1,、,2,个次重点，但覆盖全部主要内容。,3.,应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。,5.,应用简单语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,到达了预期写作目标。,第三档,(,适当,),：,(11-15,分,),1.,基本完成了试题要求任务。,2.,虽遗漏一些内容，但覆盖全部主要内容。,3.,应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。,4.,有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误，但不影响了解。,5.,应用简单语句间连接成份，使全文内容连贯。,6.,整体而言，基本到达了预期写作目标。,第5页,第二档,(,较差,),：,(6-10,分,),1.,未恰当完成试题要求任务。,2.,遗漏或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。,3.,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。,4.,有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误，影响了对写作内容了解。,5.,较少使用语句间连接成份，内容缺乏连贯性。,6.,信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,第一档,(,差,),：,(1-5,分,),1.,未完成试题要求任务。,2.,显著遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未了解试题要求。,3.,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。,4.,较多语法结构或词汇方面错误，影响对写作内容了解。,5.,缺乏语句间连接成份，内容不连贯。,6.,信息未能传达给读者。,第6页,What is a good writing？,A good composition,1.neat writing,书写,2.content,内容,3.structure,结构,4.language,语言,Good first impression,Everything required included,Well organized and smoothly developed,No Chinglish,NoGrammatical mistakes,无遗漏信息点，即关键点全方面,篇章条理清楚：分段和过渡词,句式复杂多样,地道高级词汇和恰当词组,第7页,structure,1.,称呼,:Dear Sir or Madam,2.,开头语,the beginning,（空四个字母距离）,(,自我介绍或问候，写信目标,),sentence),3.,正文,body,详细问题,+,详细分析,4.,结束语 客套话（,complimentary close,）,5.,署名（,signature,）,(,右下角,),口诀：开门见山说意图,咨询提议,123,感激客气不可少,期待回信成老套,第8页,I.【,审题谋篇,】,How to design a composition,1.,文体（,书信或邮件,）。,2.,人称：,第一人称,first person,3.,时态：,普通现在时,present tense,4.,写作关键点（,列提要,）,1.,认真审题,2.,词汇准备,定关键词，短语，关联词,3.,定句式,，各种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种名词性从句、,定语从句,、状语从句和固定句型，,非谓语动词,4.,三段式,1.,写信目标,2.,关键点（,1,，,2,，,3,）,3.,总述,/,客套用语（期望,/,请求,/,感激）,第9页,Ways of,embellishing,the,sentences,1.,他昨天下午来。,2.,令她吃惊是，小女孩知道这么多事情。,巧用各种结构增强句子表现力,1.,He came here yesterday afternoon.,2.,He,didnt,come here,until,yesterday afternoon.,3.,Not until,yesterday afternoon,did,he come here.,4.,It was,yesterday afternoon,that,he came here.,1,.,He is surprised that,the little girl knows so many things.,2.,To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,3.,What astonished him is that,the little girl knows so many things.,第10页,1.Susan was ill in hospital.She couldnt go to the concert.,2.The professor entered the hall.His students followed him.,3.He wants to improve his spoken English.He often talks with the native speakers.,(,一,),、非谓语动词使用,Being ill in hospital,Susan couldnt go to the concert.,The professor entered the hall,followed by his stduents.,In order to improve his,spoken,English,he often talks with the native speakers.Aimed at improving,第11页,4.They havent completed the program.They have to stay there for another two weeks.,5.We are faced with so much trouble,so we failed to complete the task on time.,Not having completed the program,they have to stay there for two weeks,Faced with so much trouble,we failed to complete the task on time.,巧用各种结构增强句子表现力,第12页,He,didnt realize his danger until he was left,alone.,2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.,3.She is clever but she never works hard.,4.,The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.,Not until,he was left alone did he realize his danger.,Only,by changing the plants we eat,can,we save,Clever,as,she is,she never works hard.,二、倒装句使用,On the other side of the street,stands the clock tower.,将陈说句改为倒装句。,5.I could,hardly,understand the importance of English at that time.,Hardly could,I,understand the importance of English at that time.,第13页,He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.,The teachers words encouraged her greatly.,三、强调句使用,It was not until,he was left alone,that,he realised his danger,.,It was,the teachers words,that,encouraged her greatly.,It,is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.,3,The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence,三、将简单句改为强调句,第14页,Smoking,did great harm to his health.,It was,smoking,that,did great harm to his health.,2.Our money is earned,through hard work,by our parents.,It is,through hard work,that,our money is earned by our parents.,3.He went there yesterday.,He,did go,there yesterday.,第15页,1.To our surprise,he refused to take the position.,2.I wont believe what he says.,What surprised us,was that,he refused to take,No matter what he say,I wont believe.,四、从句使用,3.When he climbed up higher,he felt more breathless.,The higher,he climbed up,the more breathless,he felt.,4.We all know that China will host the Olympic Games.,As is known to all,China will host the Olympic Games.,第16页,1.The manager had many problems to solve.He looked worried.(with),2.When he arrived home,he found his house freshly painted.(on),With many problems to solve,the manager looked worried.,五、介词短语使用,On his arrival home,he found his house freshly painted.,第17页,1.,People grow rice in the south of China.,Rice is grown in the south of China.,2.They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.,One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.,六,、主动句与被动句交换。,第18页,使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采,1.The tourists had to ask the villagers for help.,The tourists,had no choice but to ask,the villagers for help.,2The car was expensive.I cant afford it,The car was,so expensive that,it was beyond my reach.,3.I had a good idea.,A good idea,struck,me./I,came up with,a good idea./A good idea,occurred to,me./A good idea,came to,me.,第19页,4.An interview is important to both the employer and the applicant,5.Im sure our school is worth visiting,6.The building is being built.,7.This is a difficult job.,Great,importance has been attached to,an interview by both the employer and the applicant.,Im sure our school will offer,a feast for your eyes.,The building is,under construction,.,This is a,challenging,job.,第20页,1.Some of the students think,it is no use going,to college because it is,_,difficult to get _ jobs,形容词和副词使用,extremely,satisfactory,2,.It is _ recommended,that we should,cultivate,the good habit of taking _ exercise,3 we should not drink too much wine,which will do _ harm to us,regular,strongly,great,第21页,4 We must,pay attention to,our appearance and good manners are,important.,5,With,preparation and a _,confident and honest performance,our success will be,ensured,6,In addition to the above,taking part-time jobs is also a,way for college student to get money to pay part of his tuition,7 She came _ to me,with,a _ beautiful flower in her hand.,equally,careful,fairly,common,over,pretty,第22页,一、表示深入说明过渡词,巧妙利用过渡词,二、表示解释或说明,（）,and,also(,也，一样，另外）,too,as well,（）,besides,（,in addition),，,additionally,still,whats more,furthermore,moreover,(3)whats worse/worse still,(4)In that case,（）,for instance,for example,such as,(,2)In other words,that is(to say),(3)By the way,(4)Strangely enough(,说也奇怪，最奇怪是）,第23页,三、表示时间次序,(1)later,later on,after that,afterwards,sooner or later,(2)now,nowadays,at present/presently,recently,(3)while,menwhile,at the same time,just at that moment,here and now,（眼下，立刻）,at once,(4)before,after,until/till,before long,shortly,by and by,in the future,in the near future,in future.after a while,(5,)To begin with,firstly/first,secondly/second,at first,first of all,then,next,finally,eventually,at last,in the end,(6)gradually,suddenly,all of a sudden,(,7)from then on,from now on,(ever)since then,第24页,四、表示转折和对比关系,however,nevertheless,yet,while,whereas otherwise,on the contrary,instead,on the other hand,except for,unluckily,unfortunately,（不幸，令人遗憾是）,五、表示条件关系,as(so)long as,on condition that,if,unless,六、表,示因果关系,now that,since,thanks to,.,due to,.,therefore,thus,as a result(of),then(,那么，因而，于是）,第25页,七、表示让步关系,as,even if,even though,whether.or.,despite,in,spite,of,八、表示强调,九、表示概括归纳,indeed,in fact,as a matter of fact,in actual fact,actually,surely,certainly,no wonder,no doubt,without any doubt,truly,obviously,above all,(1),in a word,in short,in brief,(2)in general/generally speaking,on the whole,(,3)as far as I know,as we know,as is known to all,as has been stated(,总而言之），,as has been said above,（如上所述）,(4)as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,(,5)in conclusion(,最终，总之）,第26页,practice,Liu,Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the Olympic Games.,_,_,won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the Olympic Games.,2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech.,_ is true,_,the president will give our school a speech.,Liu,Xiang,an excellent athlete,It,that,第27页,3)The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The Olympic Games,_,_,4)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.,In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,_,5)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.,Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_,_,One Dream,will be held in Beijing,.,are the two places which are well worth visiting,.,where,we bought a,Whose slogan is One World,lot of clothes,.,第28页,6)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.,most was his wonderful performance on the stage.,7)It satisfied me.The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,_,the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,8)I learned from the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,_,as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,What satisfied me is that,What,I have learnt from the story is that,What impressed me,第29页,9.Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.,Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things,about,different people have different opinions.,10.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.,Many boys learn to smoke,_,_,which,which does harm to,their health.,第30页,11.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.,Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.,12.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find,.,I find it easy to get on with Pam.,13.If you work harderyou will do better in the exam next time.,_,you will do better in the exam next time.,14.,Because my friend was frightened of losing his job,he said nothing to the police.,_,my friend said nothing to the police.,Frightened,of losing his job,Working hard,第31页,15),这个地域占地,平方千米，人口,10,万。,This area covers an area of square kilometers,_,16),我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量学生来参观。,_,it attracts a large number of people.,17),我们学校是一全部,100,多年历史名校。,Our school is a famous one,_,_,with a population of 100,000.,With many flowers surrounding our school,with a history of over 100 years.,第32页,18,）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。,_,the,boy dared not go to school.,19),这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。,The two men went to bed early,_,_.,20),他睡觉时候嘴巴张得大大。,He sleep,_.,with candles burning a night long,With homework not finished,with his mouth wide open,第33页,实战演练巩固,1,请依据以下情景说明,使用,5,个规范英语句子描述全部所给信息内容。,标题为 “,My English Learning”,注：所给情景有时是汉字关键点，有时是表格。,我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了,一定进步，但总是以为英语难学，尤其是,英语中一些习惯使用方法。自己今后一定要努,力学习这门有用外语，争取早日掌握这门,语言。,第34页,我学英语已经六年了,I have been learning English for over 6 years.,在英语学习上有了一定进步,I have made some progress in my English,.,但总是以为英语难学，尤其是英语中一些习惯使用方法。,But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.,自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用外语,I will work hard at this useful foreign language.,争取早日掌握这门语言。,I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.,第35页,I have been learning English for over 6 years.,It is six years since,I began to learn English.,I have made some progress in my English.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have,made progress,in my English.,Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.,But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult,.,But I still,find it hard to learn,English,such as,some difficult idioms,.,I will try hard to master this foreign language.,Difficult as it is,I have,made up my mind,to master this useful language by my hard work.,第36页,My English Learning,It is six years since,I began to learn English.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have,made progress,in my English.,Now Im,doing well,both,in,writing and reading in English.,But I still find,it,hard,to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.,Difficult as it is,I have,made up my mind,to master this useful language by my hard work.,第37页,This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.,This village is very small,，,which,has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978.People here,are leading a richer and happier life,than before.Now it is taking on a new look.,第38页,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Our school was founded in 1975.It has a long history.There are many trees in our school.It looks like a beautiful garden.We have two 5-storied teaching buildings.Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there.,There is an E-reading room.We can go on the internet for information easily.The teachers are kind and patient,so we respect them.This is our school.We like it very much.,Thank you.,第39页,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Founded,in 1995,our school has a short history.,With many trees surrounding our school,it looks like a beautiful garden.The two five-storied teaching buildings are,where nearly two hundred teachers work and over two thousand students study,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Our school was founded in 1975.It has a long history.There are many trees in our school.It looks like a beautiful garden.We have two 5-storied teaching buildings.Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there.,第40页,There is an E-reading room.We can go on the Internet for information easily.The teachers are kind and patient,so we respect them.This is our school.We like it very much.,Thank you.,It is,in the E-reading room,that,we,have an easy access to,the Internet for information,Whats more,the teachers are,so,kind and patient,that,they,deserve,our special respect.Such is our school,which we like very much.,Thank you.,关键点齐全，表示正确，但语言平淡，表示方式单一，逻辑性差,极难在考试评分中得到较高档次。但使用,恰当连接词,，,较高级词汇,、,较复杂语法结构,，会变得更,精彩,。,第41页,Practice Makes Perfect,第42页,书面表示（满分,25,分）,假定你是李华，正在教你英国朋友,Leslie,学习汉语。请你写封邮件通知下次上课计划。内容包含：,1.,时间和地点；,2.,内容：学习唐诗；,3.,课前准备：简明了解唐朝历史。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,第43页,Dear Leslie,How is everything going?Gla