英语作文的评分标准市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,看图作文,Look And write,第1页,第1页,英 语 作 文 评 分 标 准,四档文：,内容不完整，语言表述错误诸多，不能完整地 表示思想。可得,0-2,分,三档文：,内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充足，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得,3-5,分,二档文：,内容完整，重点描述比较充足，层次结构比较清楚，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得,6-8,分,一档文：,内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表示充足，层次结构清楚字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得,9-10,分,第2页,第2页,看图作文,难度稍大，在写作时它要依据图画呈现内容与所给中英文提醒相结合来表示其内在涵义，描述图画内容，使短文达意、正确、连贯。,看图作文可采用下列几种环节：,1、理解图意，确立情景,2、注意所给中英文提醒,3、明确时态，理顺思绪,4、连词成句，然后再连句成文,5、重复审核，修改错误,第3页,第3页,假设下面五幅图画描述是你在,5,月,3,日,(,星期五,),一段亲身经历。请你依据画面内容，写一篇80字左右日记。,第4页,第4页,英文日记格式,英文日记通常由,书端,和,正文,两个部分构成中、英文日记格式大体同样。,英语日记书端是写日记日期、星期和天气。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天天气情况，如：,Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy,等。,日记正文是日记主要部分，写在星期和日期正下方，能够顶格写，也能够内缩3至5个字母空间。,第5页,第5页,文章的内容描述完整 表达充分,第6页,第6页,今天下午我去看电影.,go to a movie,go to the cinema,see a film,Its a fine day today.,this afternoon,I went to a movie happily this afternoon.,第7页,第7页,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,On the way,I found/saw a case,fall,down from/off a mans bike.,on the way,fall down from/fall off,see/find+复合宾语,第8页,第8页,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,I picked up the case and shouted to the man,but he didnt hear me and rode away.,pick up,shout to,ride away,第9页,第9页,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.,stop a taxi,catch up with,第10页,第10页,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我回绝了.,I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.,The man took out some money to thank me,but I refused.,give back/return,refuse,第11页,第11页,May 3rdFriday,Fine,This afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop.But he didnt hear me and rode away.,I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case.And we caught up with the man.I gave the case back to him.The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.,第12页,第12页,句子的种类,第13页,第13页,I picked up the case.,I shouted at the man loudly.,After picking up the case,I shouted to the man loudly.,把两个或多个句子合并为简朴句,1、把其中一句改为介词短语,第14页,第14页,I gave the case back to the man.,The man took out some money to thank me.,Getting the case back from me,the man took out some money to thank me.,2、把其中一句改为分词短语,第15页,第15页,I went to see a film this afternoon.,One the way to the cinema,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.,I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.,把两个或多个句子合并成复合句,第16页,第16页,But he didnt hear me and rode away.,But he rode too fast to hear me.,I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.,适当选择固定句型,I wanted to catch up with him,so I stopped a taxi quickly.,第17页,第17页,文章结构,第18页,第18页,May 3rd、，Friday,Fine,This afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw,The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.,It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.,Although I missed the movie,I was very happy to help others.,第19页,第19页,Practice,假设下面六幅图画描述是你在4月3日(星期五)一段亲身经历。请你依据画面内容，写一篇80字左右日记。,第20页,第20页,Key words and phrases.,go to school,on the way,find,wallet,pick up,owner,phone book,bus stop,give back,refuse,第21页,第21页,Bye bye!,If we work harder,our dreams will come ture!,第22页,第22页,