浙江新高考英语作文命题分析.pptx

2020/1/27,#,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,写作（共两节，满分,40,分）,浙江新高考 英语作文解读,第一节应用文写作（满分,15,分）,你给英国朋友,Chris,写一封信，内容包括：,1.,你们原计划,7,月份一同去云南旅游；,2.,由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；,3.,表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到,8,月份。注意：,1.,词数不少于,50.,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Chris,_,_,Yours,Joe,应用文命题分析,1,、题目要求,满分,15,分，占整张试卷比重的十分之一。,2,、题型特点,应用文的写作文体是浙江省出现的新的写作题型，要求写出,80,字左右的文章，可适当添加细节。,3,、对学生能力的要求,应用文相对于之前高考中的议论文、记叙文，更要求应用性、规范性、简明性。这要求学生对各个文体尤其是邮件和信件格式的熟悉掌握，且需注意应用文所要求的语言表达与议论文、记叙文的区别。因此我们会着重培养学生的格式熟悉度以及相关重要句式的表达。,第二节,读后续写（满分,25,分）或概要写作（满分,25,分）（两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用）,读后续写型作文样题,National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem.”Arthur said.“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I can t start my car.”,“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young manlooked at the two suitcasesin the back seatand then said,“Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”,读后续写型作文样题,The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery（,抢劫）！,Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he stared to run.,读后续写型作文样题,注意：,1,，所需写短文的词数应为,150,左右,2,，应使用,5,个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。,3,，续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。,Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_,读后续写型作文命题分析,一、题型改革和要求,1,，原文材料,350,词以内，所续写文章,150,词左右。,【,词数少于,130,的，从总分中减,2,分,】,2,，续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。注意与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。,3,，原文给出,10,处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用,5,个以上。注意内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。,4,，注意上下文的连贯性。,5,，应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。,6,，总分,25,分。,读后续写型作文命题分析,二、对学生能力的要求,与应用文不同，故事续写型文章除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。,三、教师教学准备,一阶段：增加故事型完形和阅读的赏析和段落背诵（情节设置衔接、动词的用法、动作的描述）适当增加新概念故事类文章的讲解和背诵二阶段：设定主题类继续段落的演练（加强词汇句型的准确熟练运用；加强情节衔接的顺畅）三阶段：故事续写类主题文章的大范围练习,概要写作样题,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇,60,词左右的内容概要。,Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry IV,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath,the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.,概要写作样题,Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hard washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea:clothes need to be whiter than white,cloth ever softer,surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt,however,gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ruebush,an American immunologist,encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.,概要写作命题分析,一、题型改革和要求,1,、提供一篇,350,词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇,60,词左右的内容概要，字数在,40-80,词左右为宜。,【,词数少于,40,的和多于,80,的，从总分减去,2,分,】,2,、所给文章以说明文或议论文为主。,3,、评分侧重四个方面：（,1,）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（,2,）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（,3,）上下文的连贯性；（,4,）对各要点表达的独立性情况。,4,、拼写，标点符号，书写情况都是评分的考虑范围。,5,、总分,25,分。,概要写作命题分析,二、对学生能力的要求,对文章主旨大意的概括能力和准确抓取关键词的能力；用简洁有力的语言概括文章重要信息的能力；对文章整体框架的把握能力。,三、教师教学准备,1,、精选浙江高考往年优秀的说明文阅读文章，并进行结构分析和主旨概括训练。,2,、积累常见同义转换短语和句型，学会词汇、短语、句型的升级。,3,、训练篇章结构的布局，增强文章的上下文连贯性。,