建议信高考英语作文.doc

建议信----A Letter of Suggestion
一、假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。
提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……（你的建议）
才能：talent
注意：1.词数130左右，信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文（一）
Dear Lin Hao,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
Yours
Li Hua
范文（二）、
Dear Li Ming,
In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below.
First, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.
With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I hope you will find these ideas useful
Yours,
Li hua

二、根据提示，写一篇150词左右的建议信。假如你是某报编辑，昨天收到一位学生来信。请根据来信的内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。（要注意写信的格式）
Dear Editor,
I am a hard-working girl and want to be the top student in my class. But in exams, I always make many careless mistakes. I really worry about it. What should I do to improve my performance in exams?
Best regards
Yours sincerely,
Li Fang
要点提示： 1.收到来信，获悉信中所提到的有关情况；
2.不要压力太大；
3.如有问题请教老师或同学；
4.考试时合理分配（distribute）时间，并尽量抽出几分钟检查；
5.其它建议………………
Dear Li Fang,
I read your letter yesterday. It's good that you have a high aim for yourself and you know what has prevented you from achieving high scores in exams. But you should remember that even the very best student can make mistakes sometimes. So don't put too much pressure on yourself.
As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can't be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What's more, during the exams you'd better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.
Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Editor

三、假如你是Jack，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他的问题，他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议，如：
1．认真计划好自己的时间；
2．列出所有的家庭作业，然后计算完成这些作业需要的时间，从而了解自己有多少空闲时间可以用来打篮球；
3．不要放弃自己的爱好，但也不要忘记学习；
4．保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
范文：
Dear Simon,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful suggestions.
You say you don't have enough time to do your homework. I think you'd better plan your day carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. Then work out how much time you need to complete it all. This will give you an idea of how much free time you can have to play basketball. Don't give up your hobby but do not forget about your study, either. You should keep a balance between study and hobbies.
I hope my answers will be of some value to you.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Jack

英语建议信写作常用句型
A letter of Advice建议信是向别人提出合理性的建议，以便使对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题，因此要求建议信要写得简明扼要，目的明确，理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。

常用句型：
1. I'd like to suggest that you can give me a prompt response.
2. May I suggest that you can…
3. I wish…
4. I really hope that…
5. What about… ?
6. How about… ?
7 My suggestions are as follows.
8. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
9. If you could take what I suggest seriously, you would…
10. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…

英文建议信开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing in reply to…
I would like to suggest that…
I am writing with my suggestion proposal about…
I am writing to express my views concerning…
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.

表达建议常用句式和套话
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
I would like to suggest that…
I would recommend that…
If I were you, I would…
You may consider doing…
It would seem to me that you could…
As you may agree that…
建议信结尾常用句式和套话
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations helpful/practical/ useful.
I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.

建议信模板1：
　　Dear _________，
　　I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_________in order to_________ .
　　From my point of view, _________. Also, to you, I highly recommend that _________. On the one hand,_________. On the other hand, _________ . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to _________. Consequently, I believe that _________ .
　　I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Ming

　建议信模板2：
　　Dear ____，
　　I am writing to express my views concerning ________. In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some advice to better _________.
　　Firstly, we have found that ________ Secondly, we want to ________. Finally, we hope that __________.
　　I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in advance for that.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Ming

建议信模板3:
　　Dear ______,
　　①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
　　②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建议的内容）.
　　③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Ming