英语评论“利弊”型作文的常用表达句式(经典句型)及高考答卷注意事项.doc

评论“利弊”型作文的常表达句式
为了使初学者熟悉掌握评论“利弊”型作文的写作方法，我们将这类作文的常用表达式归纳如下：
开头1.We are all aware that everything has its two sides._____ is no exception .In its development, ______ has brought both advantages and disadvantages.
开头2.Just a few year ago ,the idea of ______ seemed far-fetched(不能实现的)for most Chinese .Now ,however ,with the advent (出现) and popularity of ____, its advantages and disadvantages have been a subject of discussion.
开头3._____now plays such an important part in so many people is lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing(福)or a curse（祸）.Obviously, __ has both advantages and disadvantages.
开头4.In recent years with fast economic growth , ______ has appeared in big cities of
China
everywhere in the world

.People’s attitude towards _______ varies widely.

开头5….This phenomenon has caused a heated discussion among the social critics who are particularly concerned about its social effects instead of worrying only about ______.Tthe discussion mainly falls into two opposite ideas.
开头6.With the increase in the general standard of living ,some ordinary Chinese families can now afford ________ . Yet opinions of the development of _____ vary from person to person..
开头7. ________,a controversial question in the world ,has aroused strong arguments in China.
开头8.There is a much general debate discussion nowadays today on about the issue the problem of _________.
正文： 带来了许多好处/有许多优点：
us
people
a number of a lot of

（立论）1._______ has brought benefits to benefits to . benefits

us in many respects.
2.The benefits of _______ can be perceived in many aspects.
3. we get a lot of benefits from _________.
4. _________ is a beneficial activity ,in which we can obtain many advantages.
advantages positive points

5. _________ has many .

6._________ has brought about many changes in people is life.
(论证) First of all ,_______ .
Also,_______ .
bad effects
ill effects
side effects
Most importantly, ___________.
也有弊端/副作用/带来的问题：
（立论）1.Just as a coin has two sides,______ also has some (副作用).
disadvantages negative points
problems
2. ______ ,on the other hand ,has its .

dangerous harmful.

_________ may be .

brought about
given rise to
led to
resulted in
caused created

3. However ,_______has also a lot of problems.

(论证)For one thing,______.
For another________ .
Finally, ________..

有些人/支持者认为。。。。。。。。而另一些人/反对者则认为。。。。。。。。。

Say
Believe
Think
Hope
Suggest
Hold the opinion
pointout
Some people
Those who are in favor of Supporters

1． That .

Others
Those who are against it Opponents

chaim
argue
are worried
on the other hand

on the contrary,claim

2. , however , ,

criticize complain

That ______ .They that_________..

But,there are still a lot of others who think that ________.
3.Other people,however,think quite differently that___________.
object to
criticize oppose
hold claim declare

4. Those who ________ that______. They believe that _______.

结尾1
In spite of these disadvantage ,I think ______ dose more good than harm to people .And the disadvantages ,since they have been pointed out clearly ,will be dealt with effectively.
结尾2
Weighing the two side ,there is no denying the fact that _________has produced great effects on society.
benefits advantages
结尾3
Whether ________should be developed in China is a difficult question to answer ,yet the
eliminated
denied

can bring won’t be .

the advantages outweigh the dissdvantages
its gain outweigh its loss
结尾4
To conclude, I would say that It means ____.

结尾5
While taking advantage of_______,we must try to find ways to reduce its disadvantage to a minimum(最小程度)so as to let it serve our purposes better and make our life more exciting and attractive.
结尾6
In sum, ______does more good than harm for ______We must take a correct attitude towards_______ .We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
结尾7
Despite its disadvantages,_________ is still appealing to people because ________is an essential part of their life.
结尾8
Weighing the two sides ,both arguments seem to be reasonable .After all,___________.
结尾9
Although there are many arguments for and against _______,we must realize that ______in itself is neither good nor bad .Actually ,its value to people and society depends on how it is use.
结尾10
In any case ,whether the ultimate effect of _______is good or not ,one thing is certain that _____in itself is neither good nor bad .It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society.
结尾11
In my opinion ,nothing is wrong with _______itself .The problem is what to do with it._____,if it
pleasure happiness.

is in proper use ,may bring us .

结尾12
The key point is how make good use of its positive aspects and avoid its negative points .In my mind,__________.

高考英语写作注意事项
1.字迹工整、书写规范（这一点很重要，会为你赢得印象分，六月份改卷时期老师改卷任务重，天气炎热，字迹清晰工整会让阅卷老师心情好）最好。衡水体火了之后，很多学校都开始重视英文规范书写，可参考电子科大出版的《学习型字帖英语规范书写教程》高考11种书信体集锦里的写法指导和高考优秀范文格式。

2.字数写够。（老师看到字迹工整，字数够的作文，心里会马上把分数定位在18分，也就是及格分数，然后再读一遍作文，即使读的过程中发现有错误，最后的分数也不会比18分低很多）

3.作文题目中若给出了作文主要内容并用1.2.3.点或者用表格写了出来。写出的作文中一定要包括这题目中提到的所有的要点，因为在制定评分规则的时候会把总分平均分给这几个要点，如果文中没有提到某个要点，那么相应的这个要点的分就不能得，最后的得分自然也就低一些。

4.关于作文的具体内容。尽量使用有把握的单词和句子，稳中求胜。如遇到不会说的单词会句子，想办法换个说法把意思表达出来，切忌自己造新词或者乱搭配，这样会闹笑话，弄巧成拙。

5.学会分段，平时写作文大多数同学一段到底，作文最好分三段，这样会显得作文有条理，错落有致，并且看上去作文的字数要多一些。

6.要有时态和语态的意识。不能通篇全都是一个时态，或者根本没有时态，时态是英语最基本的语法，也是高考作文的一个重要评分标准。英语是一个惯用被动语态的语言，不妨在文中加入几个被动语态的句子，为作文增加光彩。

7.避免低级错误：每句话的首字母大写，人名、地名首字母大写；每段开头空出4个字符的位置；主谓一致（切忌出现I is, he are, they was等类似错误）；动词跟时态一致（如He like teaching us等）；名词单复数（名词数量大于1时，一定要用复数形式）；不定冠词（可数名词单数前一定要用a或者an）。

8.多背范文，多记一些名言警句，并想办法合适得用到作文中去。记一些万能的开头结尾的公式。