课堂新坐标浙江专版2017高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训1读后续写训练.doc

专题限时集训(一)　读后续写
训练1
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(2016·绍兴市期中考试)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Last summer when my family was road tripping to Montana we arrived in Great Falls late one night.The kids had fallen asleep in the car，so my husband went and checked in while I stayed with the kids.When he returned with the room keys，we woke up our children and took them out of the car，through the hotel，up the elevators and into our guest room.We kept the room dark，leaving only the entry light on，and quickly put the kids into bed hoping they'd drift back to sleep.
My husband went to put our waters in the mini­fridge only to notice some beers.“That's strange”，he said and I agreed，but having discovered left­behind drinks in hotel fridges in the past I didn't think much about it.I figured the housekeepers had forgotten to check it.In the meantime，my husband ran to the store and I went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.As I washed my face I looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.I felt my heart begin to pound.We were in someone else's room!
Now panicked，I checked the closet.Nothing.I then went to the dresser drawers.Nothing.My eyes scanned the door room's floor and there it was：A black bag that looked like one of ours.But it wasn't!
I immediately called the front desk and the waitress in charge responded with an “Oh，my God！This is not good！”
By now the kids were wide­awake，jumping on the beds as I was trying to put all of our things back into our oversized suitcase．Just while we were packing our things，I heard someone was unlocking the door，which made my heart beating wildly.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
The door opened and in came a young man.

Paragraph 2：
I didn't know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress

【写作指导】
读后续写的前提是将所给材料读透，弄清故事前半部分叙述的内容。根据所给材料可知，作者一家人旅途中去宾馆住宿，但却发现服务员把他们带进了别人的房间。根据续写部分第一段所给出的开头语可以判断，“a young man”是登记入住这个房间的人；根据续写部分第二段中的“but luckily the waitress”可知，服务员恰当地处理了这件事。因此续写部分要抓住两个关键点：年轻人回到自己的房间却发现里面有陌生人，他们会面的场景会是怎样的？服务员又是怎样处理这件事的？因此学生在构思时应将重点放在怎样让故事衔接得更自然、更流畅。其次，应注意续写时要使用5个以上原文中的画线词语。
【参考范文】
The door opened and in came a young man.After seeing us packing our things into our suitcase，he was shocked and angry.I tried to explain what had happened.However，he wouldn't listen to me.He talked with me in a loud voice，making my kids frightened.The kids began to cry.Just at that time my husband returned，with some things bought from the store in his hands.Thinking the young man was unfriendly，he started to quarrel with him.
I didn't know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress arrived out of breath.Watching the waitress，all of us stopped talking.She explained that her mother became badly ill last night，which contributed to her fault.After explaining the reason to us，the waitress burst into tears.The young man，my husband and I，even my kids，tried to comfort the waitress．We said sorry to each other.The special experience in someone else's room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
【导学号：85602023】
B
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children，all of them college graduates.It seemed I'd done everything I'd ever wanted to do in my life，but I had one regret．I was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldn't spare me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.
Everywhere I went，I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even can't read the alphabet．People cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.
By 1928，I'd been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell in love，married and moved to Dallas，where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first went to school，I took my wife aside.“Elzenia，”I said.“I don't want the kids to know I can't read or write.”
In 1938，one day my boss called me in.“George，” he said.“No one knows those machines like you do.I'd like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said，“Fill out this application and we'll get you a raise.” I couldn't admit the truth．I thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was，until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didn't stop working.For the next 25 years，I lived a happy life，but it still seemed to me like something was missing.
A young fellow handed me a piece of paper.It's information about adult education classes．People can learn to read and write.Now I'm 98.I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldn't read.After all these years，my secret would be out.But all my life I've wanted to read.It was high time for action.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The young man drove me to

Paragraph 2：
I'm still going to school.

【写作指导】
文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句“It was high time for action.”给出了提示，说明接下来要续写的是作者自己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。
【参考范文】
The young man drove me to an old building.I knew it well—it was where all my children had gone to school．I looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies to me.There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.I'd been inside the building so many times before with my children.That old building looked the same，and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because this time it was going to be my school.First came learning the alphabet，then words.In three months，I was reading.It was not very exciting，but I loved it.
I'm still going to school.I didn't stop there.After all，now I know why I'm here.I'm here to learn．I'm here to tell the students it's never too late.
C
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was shortly after one o'clock in the morning and Mr.Fairfax was really tired．He had been driving for over five hours，heading for a small town far away from home.The weather was clear but it was dark and Mr.Fairfax could not find a motel to spend the night.Completely exhausted，he decided to stop by the roadside for a few hours' sleep at the wheel of his car.He fell asleep almost the moment he closed his eyes.But soon he was awakened by a man tapping on the car window.“I say，you don't happen to know the time，do you？” the stranger asked.
Mr.Fairfax wound down the window and thrust his head out.“It's around one o'clock，”he answered.Then he wound up his window and soon fell back into a deep slumber.
Half an hour later，another guy came up and knocked on his window who also inquired about the time.Once again，Mr.Fairfax gathered his thoughts and told him that it was just after one thirty.
When the same thing happened yet again，Mr.Fairfax became increasingly irritated.Sleep­deprived，he began to raise his voice at the passer­by：“It's two o'clock，God damn it！And why can't you get yourself a watch like the rest of us？”
This time when he was winding up the window，Mr.Fairfax figured out how to make sure no one else disturbed him.He found some paper and a pencil and wrote a note that he placed on the windscreen of his car.It said：“I don't know what time it is！” Amused by his good idea，he happily drifted off back to sleep again.
Not long afterwards，the note was spotted by a policeman on his night patrol.Intent on fulfilling his duty to assist motorists，he tapped on Mr.Fairfax's car window.
“Well，sir，” the policeman said.“Now it is five past three！”
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
“For the sake of God！”With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel，the car window was wound down.

Paragraph 2：
“I'm sorry Mister，but I think sleeping in the car by the roadside is not a good choice，”said the police.

【写作指导】
本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文。主要叙述了Mr.Fairfax夜间将车停在路边休息时多次被人打扰的故事。文章着重刻画了主人公睡觉时屡遭打扰后的情绪变化，随着情绪从刚开始的平静到不耐烦，再到想到好主意之后的高兴，最后变得愤怒，文章在用词上也有所变化，尤其是人物说话时的用词和语气。因此在续写时，学生应关注人物的情绪变化，并根据其变化采用不同的表达方式。同时，在描述人物的话语时，注意要口语化，从而更贴近实际生活。
【参考范文】
“For the sake of God！”With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel，the car window was wound down.Mr.Fairfax thrust his head out again，staring at the man breaking his sweet dream，his eyes red from lack of sleep.“How dare you！” Mr.Fairfax shouted，“I may kill you if you do this again！”“Uh...Excuse me，” the policeman replied tentatively.“I was just doing my duty．You know...” “Oh，please! Go ahead，sir.Just don't disturb me！” Winding up the window，Mr.Fairfax were eager to go back to sleep.
“I'm sorry Mister，but I think sleeping in the car by the roadside is not a good choice，” said the police.“You think？” Mr.Fairfax was still angry.“Yeah，so I was thinking you may spend the rest of the night in my office.It's not far from here by the way.”“Well，” Mr.Fairfax started to feel uneasy.“I have to say thanks a lot，really.And I'm also sorry for the rudeness just now.”“Oh，that's OK.But I'm afraid you have to pay a fine of $10 for parking by the roadside，” The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile.
【导学号：85602024】

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