5课件 大纲人教版选修6 课件.ppt

佳作赏析议论文,问题解决类,(2011,泰州中学高三质检,),可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行可持续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。,上一页,目前的状况,1.,自然资源日趋减少,2.,环境问题依然严重,3.,人的环保观念淡薄,4.,贫富差距越来越大,已采取的措施,1.,制定了相关的法律法规,2.,投入了大量的资金改善环境,3.,对民众进行教育,你的看法,上一页,注意,：,1.,不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。,2,词数：,150,左右。文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。,参考词汇,：,差距,gap,相关法律,relevant laws,The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world.How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet.,_,_,_,_,1,话题特点,：,这篇书面表达为议论文中的问题解决类，试题给出了相关信息，但写作时学生还需要在读懂信息的基础上补充更为详细的内容。根据这类议论文的特点，学生要从所给信息中找到存在的问题，提出解决问题的方案并阐述这样做的理由。,2,写好这类作文要注意：,(1),写作模式。提出问题,分析问题产生的原因,解决问题。,(2),详略得当。重点写如何解决问题。,(3),用一般现在时。语言力求简洁、客观、说服力强。,(4),阐述应该采取什么样的具体措施来解决问题。,(5),总结并提出建议。,上一页,3,常用的句式表达：,(1),陈述问题：,Nowadays,we have to face a problem that.,Nowadays,more and more people are concerned about the problem.,It is important for us to.,Not a long time ago,people found that.,(2),发扬或摒弃某一现象的原因。,For instance,it may do harm to.,It may bring much trouble to.,上一页,(3),解决措施：,By doing.we can not only.but also.,We are taking two ways to solve the problem of.,(4),总结全文：,In conclusion.,In a word.,It is clear that.,It is no doubt that.,The idea of sustainable development has,been accepted by,the world.How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet.,The present situation is worrying.,First,，,natural resources are becoming,less than,before.,Second,，,as some people,are,not,aware of,the importance of the environmental protection,，,the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree.The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to,become wider and wider,.,上一页,To our great joy,，,many countries have,taken action.On the one hand,，,they have made relevant laws and regulations and put,large amounts of,money to the environmental protection.,On the other hand,，,popularized educational as well as international cooperation is being,carried out.,As for myself,，,I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development,，,or our future and the lives of our children and our grandchildren will be in danger.,文章开篇便点明了一种现象即,“,How to keep sustainable development,，”并在第二段中陈述存在这种现象的原因，作者用了,first,和,second,，使文章的显得层次分明。第三段中，作者提出了改变这种现象的措施，运用了,on the one hand,，,on the other hand,，,使文章的内容紧密地衔接在一起。最后一段，作者陈述了自己的观点，“,as for myself,”,及“,I should.,，,or.”,句型为文章增色不少，充分显示了作者扎实的写作功底。,上一页,(,1),短语类,：,less than,，,be aware of.,，,carry out,，,to our great joy,，,take action,，,large amounts of.,(2),句子类：,并列句：,I should take the responsibility.,，,or our future and the lives of.will be in danger.,状语从句,：,As some peopele are not aware of.,，,the problem with it remain.,其他句式：,.has been accepted by the world,.become wider and wider.,they have made relevant laws.put large amounts of money to.,(3),过渡语,：,first,second,，,on the one hand.on the other hand,习作过关,你所居住的小区附近有个垃圾处理场。每天焚烧工业垃圾所产生的烟尘都对大气造成污染，直接影响人体健康，并导致癌症患病率上升。请你以,“,Stop burning industrial rubbish,”,为题给某著名英语报纸写一篇文章呼吁人们不要焚烧工业垃圾。,上一页,上一页,注意,1.,内容包括提出问题，分析问题并给出解决建议。,2,词数为,120,字左右。,参考词汇,：处理场,treatment plant,_,_,【,参考范文,Stop burning industrial rubbish,A few days ago,a rubbish treatment plant was founded near our neighbourhood,which burns garbage almost every day.They think it simple and economical to get rid of rubbish that way.I dont think,however,its proper to clear away rubbish that way.Its well,known that burning rubbish,especially industrial rubbish,gives off poisonous smoke and dust which in turn pollutes air.,上一页,The number of the people suffering from cancer as a result of breathing the polluted air is increasing sharply.Many things in rubbish such as dry leaves,leftover food,ect.can make very good fertilizer.And some chemicals which give off poisonous gases when burned should be sorted,recycled and used again as producing materials.,