河北省高考英语一轮复习指导 书面表达写作技巧课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达写作技巧,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的,要点,2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,4.语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,a composition,topic sentence,（,主题句,）,supporting sentences,（,扩展句,）,ending,（,结尾句,）,过渡词：,first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whats more,Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.,一 改变句子的开头方式，,不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于,句首,.,The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.,Hungry,the boy hurried home,.,The boy,hungry,hurried home.,二.,Transformation of sentences in writing,(写作中的句型转换),A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,He had finished supper.,He went out to have a walk then.,Having finished,supper,he went,out to have a walk.,二.,Transformation of sentences in writing,(写作中的句型转换),2.把其中一句改为介词短语,He was brought in.,His hands were tied behind his back.,He was brought in,with his hands tied,behind his back.,B.合并为复合句,The Chinese artists were to perform,here that night.,The news cheered everyone of us.,The news,that the Chinese artists,were to perform here that night,cheered,everyone of us.,2 In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.,All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,which,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing,very fast,makes peoples,lives convenient,pleasant,C.把复合句改为简单句,1.,把从句改为分,词短语,She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.,Having finished,her studies,she was anxious to find a job.,2.,把从句改为介词短语,I insisted that he should go.,I insisted on him going.,三在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活,运用以下结构：,倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With,复合结构,Though he is wealthy,he works hard.,Wealthy as he is,he works hard.,In spite of/Despite his wealth,he works hard.,He didnt get up until 7 oclock.,It was not until 7 oclock that he,got up.,Not until 7 oclock did he get up.,I had a good idea.,A good idea,occurred to/struck/came to,me,.,I,came up with,a good idea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,四.use“complicated/advanced words”,A.,Second,twenty years ago,teenagers listened to music with tape recorders.Differently,today we use mp3,mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.,B.,Another change is in communication.Instead of writing letters,teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.,C.,First,teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei,Feng,and Zhang,Haidi,while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models.,D.,What great changes they are!,EGreat changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years.,Correct Order:,_,E C A B D,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.,合,并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.,合,并为复合句,C.,把,复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词,短语,把从句改为介词短语,三，避免只使用一两个句式，,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、,强调句、主从复合句、分词,状语,、,with,复合结构,等,.,四，注意使用高级词汇,代替一些单词，以增加文采。,五,.,有效使用连接词,，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结,构,紧凑。,1 汉式英语,2,句式单一 平铺直叙,3 基础词汇掌握不牢,4 书写不规范,Common mistakes,9分,6分,24分,make,sentences,3,determine,what,to write,1,copy,6,check,5,Writing steps:,4,edit,2,think out the,key words,Attention,1.,格式,2.,人称,3.,时态,4.,要点,5.,语法,6.,字数,7.,书写,书面表达（满分,30,分）,你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，,主题为：,保护环境从我做起。,请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右，开头语已为你写好；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,What can I do for our environment?,Everyone can do something for our environment.,save electricity,turn off the lights,protect our forests,use paper wisely,not use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks,use both sides of paper,Do you,include enough information?,use proper linking words?,make any spelling or grammar errors?,Is your handwriting clear enough to read?,check,our show time,What can I do for our environment?,Everyone can do something for our environment.,To love the environment is to love ourselves.,As to me,I will try to save electricity in my daily life,by remembering,to turn off the lights,when,I am the last person,to leave,the classroom in the evening.,In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely.,It is,both sides of paper,that,should be used,whenever it is possible,.Whats more,never will I,use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.,In a word,with doing,all these small things,we will,not only,improve our environment,but also,help make our world a better place to live in.,Rome is not built in one day.,Practice makes perfect!,May you succeed!,