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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Summary Writing,高考新题型之,1,Summary Writing,高考新题型之,Summary,2,I helped an old man in rags who had lost his way.,I helped an old man,details,main point,Summary?,A summary is a,short,statement that gives,only the main,points,of sth,not the details,牛津高阶英汉双解词典,读者在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想、,体裁和结构的前提下，,省去细节,，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的,主要内容和观点,。,3,How to write a good summary?,Steps,&,Tips,4,Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.,Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.,One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.,Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda.,People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.,If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,(350words),5,steps,Read for topic,structure,(,明确主题及结构,),2.Find out the key information of each,paragraph,(,划出每段主题句,或关键词,),3.Rewrite by using your own words,(,改写,),4.Polish the passage,(,改良,),6,Step1 Read for topic and structure,Topic,：,Weight loss,Structure:,Para1Para2.,Para.6,Topic weight loss,Ways of losing weight,Conclusion,Para4.,Para3.,Para2.,7,概要写作难点,1,How to get the main points quickly and correctly?,(,如何快速、准确地捕捉各段要点,),抓住主题句或关键词，忽略细节和例子,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,Topic sentence or key words,8,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,1.,Weight loss is most likely to be successful when,people change their habits.Here are several ways,to make that happen.,Tip1:The key sentence is usually the first sentence,9,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,2.,Regular physical activity burns calories and builds,muscles-both of which help you look and feel good,and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling,to school,and doing other things that increase your,daily level of activity can all make a difference.,Tip2:Ignore the examples or details,Examples,&,details,10,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,3.,One reason people get less exercise these days,Is because of an increase in“screen time”-the,amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the,computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational,screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you,really get away from“screens”,such as TV,IPad,computers,or mobile phones,you will really benefit,a lot.,Tip3:Pick out the key words in different sentence,11,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,4.,Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and,these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another,key factor in weight gain is that more people drink,sugary beverages,such as sodas,juice drinks,and,sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share,restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat milk,instead of soda.,Tip4:pay attention to the logical connectives(,逻辑连词,),So,therefore,as a result,thus,12,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,5.,People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry,that they eat more later on.They get more calories,than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs,than people who eat breakfast.,13,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,6.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And,wish you have a good figure.,14,Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.,Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.,One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.,Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda.,People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.,If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,15,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,概要写作难点,2,How to express the main points by using your own words properly?,(,如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑,),16,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,1.Weight loss is most likely to be successful,when people change their habits.,Losing weight,Tip1:Use words or phrases of similar meaning,（同义替换）,if,get,into new habits,People will succeed in losing weight if they get into,new habits,Changing some habits may be a good way to lose,weight,Tip2:Use different sentence structure,(,改变句子结构，尤其是改变主语,),17,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,2.Regular physical activity burns calories and,builds muscles-both of which help you look,and feel good and keep weight off.,Tip3:Turn complex sentences into simple ones,（压缩长句）,Leave out unnecessary parts,Taking more physical exercise will help you keep,healthy.,Keep healthy,18,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,“screen time”,benefit a lot.,limit,Tip4:Combine the key words logically into a sentence,（连词组句）,3,.,We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.,Limiting“screen time”will benefit us a lot.,19,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,Choose smaller portions(or share restaurant,portions)and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda,.,Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary,drinks contribute to weight loss,.,20,Step3 Rewrite by using your own words,5.,skip breakfast,People should avoid skipping breakfast.,get more calorie,21,Step3 rewrite by using your own words,6.If you really put the above into practice,People will have a good figure if they take the above,suggestions,have a good figure,take/follow the above suggestions,22,Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.People should avoid skipping breakfast.People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions.(,58W,),First,Meanwhile,Besides,Finally,Step4 Polish by using connectives,Tip:,Polish with connectives to make it coherent.,23,steps,Read for topic,structure,(,明确主题及结构,),2.Find out the key information of each paragraph,(,划出每段主题句,找关键信息,),3.Rewrite by using your own words,(,改写,),4.Polish the passage,(,改良,),24,Tips,The topic sentence is usually the first sentence,Ignore the examples or details,Pick out the key words in different sentences,Use words or phrases of similar meaning,（同义替换）,Use different sentence structure,(,改变句子结构，尤其是改变主语,),Turn complex sentences into simple ones,（压缩长句）,25,Exercise,Read and write with the,steps,and,tips,26,You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(,抑郁,).Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necssary to do adequate(,充足,)research about the illness.You may access anumber of resources to gain a deep understanding of this emotional condition.You can also find books or magazines in the library.If you still have,some questions,you can see a doctor.In the end,you should havea good idea of what is affecting your friend.,People with depression are often very afraid of talking to someone except their doctors.They can easily be ashamed of their condition and consequently they try to hide it.You shouldnt be surprised if a depressed friend wont open up to you.However,when he or she does,you should let the words flow.Dont be judgemental and never interrupt!,Listening is not an easy skill,as its likely that you cant help voicing your opinion.,If your friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling of worthlessness,a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying,you should contact a doctor,scheduel an appointment andaccompany him or her on the first visit.If he or she refuses,let several days go by before making another suggestion.You should be able to identify moments when he or she seems to have better moods.These moments could be the right time to ask him or her to see the doctor.Over time,your friend begins to cooperate and see the doctor.,At last,as a caregiver,you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group so you can meet other caregivers.You shouldnt sacrifice your own physical and mental condition when helping people with depression.There are cases when caregivers become depressed.If it happens,there is no shame in seeing a doctor yourself.,(320words),27,Step1 Read for topic and structure,Topic,：,Helping a friend with depression,Structure,:,Para1.,Para2.,Para3.,Para4.,28,忽略具体事例和细节,Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh,Para.1:,Para.2:,Para.3:,Para.4:,You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(,抑郁,).,Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necessary to do,adequate(,充足,)research about the illness.,be afraid of talking,(,划主题句找关键信息,),However,when he or she does(talk),Listening is a helpful skill,If your friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling,of worthlessness,a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled,crying,you should contact a doctor,scheduel an appointment and,accompany him or her on the first visit.,As a caregiver,you also need someone to talk to and perhaps,you may join a support group to keep healthy,.,29,Learn much,Step3 Rewrite by using your own words,Para.1:,You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(,抑郁,).,.it is necessary to do adequate research about the illness.,Important,helpful,You need to learn more about depression if you want to assist a friend,with depression.,Doing enough research about depression is helpful for you to help,your depressed friend,feels depresses,30,Step3 Rewrite by using your own words,Para.2:,be afraid of talking,However,when he or she does(talk to you),Listening,People with depression tend to keep silent.Once they speak to you,be a good listener.,avoid talking/keep silent,31,Step3 Rewrite by using your own words,Para.3:,If your friend shows likely signs of depression,you should encourage,him or her to seek professional help.,If your friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling,of worthlessness,a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled,crying,you should contact a doctor,scheduel an appointment and,accompany him or her on the first visit.,see the doctor,If your friend seems to have depression,you should told him to see,the doctor,32,Step3 Rewrite by using your own words,Para.4:,As a caregiver,you also need someone to talk to and perhaps,you may join a support group to keep healthy.,When you help a friend with depression,dont forget you own health.,33,You need to learn more about depression if you,want to assist a friend with depression.People,with depression tend to keep silent.Once they,speak to you,be a good listener.If your friend,shows likely signs of depression,you should,encourage him or her to seek pprofessional help.,When you help a friend with depression,dont,forget you own health.,One possible version:,34,Checking points,Cover the main points using your own words,No details,No copy,No personal opinions,About 60 words,Use connectives if possible,35,Thank you!,36,