雅思写作词汇市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2017/10/17,#,Academic writing,学术类写作文体特殊要求,1/78,学术类,1.,文体,Some,teachers,dont,know how to use computers to help the students effectively.,2.,非正式词汇,Historic buildings attract,lots of,visitors and can improve the local economy.,3.,拼写错误,The impact of tourism on these,neighbourhoods,should be,analyzed,.,4.,实词,Children,in wealthy families are,more and more,dependent on their parents.,5.,实词,Serious,crimes,harm,peoples,lives.,2/78,1.dont,不要缩写,Do not cannot(,没有空格）,2.Lots of=numerous=a host of,（可数名词）,a great deal of(,不可数）,3.Neighb,our,hoods,（英式）,Neighb,or,hood,（美式）,analy,ze,（美式）,analy,se,（英式）,注意雅思索试，能够用英式美式，不过英式美式不能混用。,3/78,More and more(,口语,化,)=increasingly,Serious=severe,Crime=criminal acts,harm=Damage,/,destroy/undermine,Impair peoples health(,专门指破坏健康）,People=individual,注：,human beings,范围比较大，作文里面慎用,4/78,6,.,实词,The advantages of stopping animal experiments,are more than,continuing them,.,7.,句式,Today,advertisements are everywhere,.,There are many ways to do advertisements.,8.,句式,The,environment is becoming worse,.,We must work together to deal with it,.,9.,色彩,So,we,must,take steps to deal with the environmental problems,!,10.,文化背景,We,must be friendly to others because,the Bible said,”Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”,5/78,6are more than=outweigh,7,句子太短（加个,and,）,加连词）,8,句子太短，加,Therefore,9Must should,10,不要用宗教语言,主要还是逻辑,6/78,熟练掌握思索素材三种方法,文明类,Tourism,Education,Government,Women,and Families,Language,and Culture,Technology,and theMedia,Development and Globalisation,7/78,横蛮类,Crime,Animals,Environmental Problems,8/78,a,分类法,（话题比较宽泛，能够用分类法）,Some,people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings.To what extent do you agree?,开头,:,城市老房子越来越多,正文：有些房子是要拆掉。,1.,老房子比较危险。,2.,老房子破坏市容，,3.,老房子住人比较少。,有些是不需要拆。,1.,特殊文化价值，政治价值。,2.,旅游资源（名人房子）,注意（作文最好是四段式，能够参考剑,6,考官范文，都给是四段式，正文部分，两段不要一样长，突出自己侧重）,9/78,练习,Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university.To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?,分类：,优势劣势,或者按照学生专业分类，比如说有些人会去学文科，理科，各自优势是什么，劣势是什么。,10/78,2.,替换法,Some people think motorized flight was the,greatest,invention in the twentieth century.Do you agree or disagree?,出现了 最高级，或者,only,，完全禁止，就用替换法。,用反例子。,正文：,1.(,我认可,1.,能够促进国际间人们交流。,2.,给我们带来便利好处。,不过，,(,举,反例子,1.,电脑，,2,互联网，,3,汽车，,4,手机等等都是超出飞机影响）,11/78,练习,Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the,only,effective way to improve safety on the roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree?,12/78,3.,裸奔法,Technology&Efficiency,（都有逻辑关系）,Mind&Soul,Society&Crime,Time&Space,Rights&Responsibilities,Environment,&,Health,Mind&,Soul,Employment&Competition,Culture,&Population,Money&Fun,13/78,练习：,电子商务影响,正文：对于社会：科技提升了效率，精神方面缺乏交流，商店比较省空间，产生就业机会。,对于个人：效率提升，会有网络犯罪，提搞个人乐趣。,14/78,语法难点,A,正确了解,7,种句子成份,1,Smoking,is just a personal choice rather than a moral issue.,（主语，能够是动名词，从句，名词做主语）,2,Nowadays,more and more people,agree,that gambling is an unhealthy hobby.,（谓语，只能是动词）,3,Junk food impairs,peoples,health.(,宾语，动名词，名词，从句）,4,In recent years,the Internet has been gaining in popularity at an,amazing,rate,.,（定语，修饰名词）,5,Outdoor activities can,greatly,improve our health,.,（状语，能够是动词，形容词，整个句子）,6 Shopping,an necessary activity in everyday life,is far more convenient in the city than in the country.,（同位语，普通名词后面有逗号，解释说明作用）,7,I found the employment situation,disappointing.,（补语，动词,+,名词,+,形容词或者分词就是补语,）,15/78,正确使用四种特殊句式,a,状语,提前（作用形成句子节奏感，加强程度）,Obviously,if elderly people live at home,their children can take care of them and they feel less lonely.,Overall,the function of a building is more important to a building than its appearance,.,I am fond of the Western culture.,Specifically,I think the French culture is really,second to,none,（最好,=best,）,.,Most,importantly,the government should make sure that citizens can improve their lives,.,In terms of,attitude,Teddy Bear is a very good teacher.,To,reduce traffic jams,the government should encourage people to take the subway.,（,in order to,换成,to,）,Living,in poverty,these people do not even have money to buy enough food.Without an IELTS score,one cannot get a visa from the embassy.,16/78,b,倒装,句（动词放到主语前面）,Not only should,the parents,spend more time with their children,they should also,try to communicate with their children more often.,（,not only,，,but also,半倒装）,Only,in this way,can this issue,be effectively solved.,17/78,c,强调句,It,is,the slits,that,make a chi-pao really special.,It is,the traditions in Beijing,that,attract many foreign tourists.,18/78,d,虚拟,语气（语气弱化，用不多，考高分能够用）,If,this,were,not true,then we,would find,it impossible to predict how the stock market would develop.,The,schools,would seem,very impersonal,if,all the,human teachers,were,replaced by the computers.,19/78,有效防止,7,种语法错误,1.,Employee,can benefit more from telecommuting than employer.,（可数名词不可单独使用，一定要有修饰，即,The,，,a,或者加,S,）,2.1,Work,at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.,2.2,Children who are,raise,（抚养）,in,impoverished,（,poor,）,families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.,2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination,（污染，,pollution,）,is,very hard to resolve.,2.4,Many students,are,very,like,studying home economics.,2.5,In present-day society,cultures,were,becoming very similar.,20/78,3 Intelligent students should not be treated,different,by their teachers.,4.1,Countries should pay attention,on,the disadvantages,（,that,）,globalization,may create.,4.2,The Internet has,instead,of(repalced),teachers in many classrooms.,5,Some parents do not obey traffic rules,himself,.,6,Some people think the Internet,only,has positive impact,（,while,）,other,people think it,alsohas negative influence on our lives.,7,There are a great many children,think,（,thinking,）,the,main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.,注意：,Important for sb.to do,Important to me,The reason for,The solutions to,21/78,高分范文讲解,In Britain,when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.The government has to pay for his care.Who should be responsible for our old people?Give reasons for your answer.,22/78,Example 2 Band 8,One of the most challenging problems of todays society is the question,about who should be responsible for our old people.It is,not only,a problem with money,but also,a question of the system we want our society to have.In my essay,I would like to present four possible models.,23/78,Firstly,the,company could be responsible for its retired employees,.,To do this,a special fund could be established.The advantage of this model is that,if,one believes in the capitalist system,it,should be the cheapest solution.One possible problem is that the companies may have(,a),competition,disadvantage,due to,higher staff costs.,24/78,A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old peoples care.It can finance this with its tax incomes.,Actually,this is the most democratic model,since,everybody gets as much money as he or she needs.,Unfortunately,as the present situation in our country shows,this solution seems not to work very well.The government,can no longer afford to,support all the old,peoples,.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual,which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the,live,after their retirement.This seems to be not a very fair model because there will certainly be people who,cant,afford to save part of their salary;,therefore,the government would have to care for them.,25/78,A last solution is to go back to the old model of the“big family who cares for all their members.I do not think this is possible in,our days(todays),society because the family structures have changed.,To sum up,I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution,for,to,this problem.All models have both advantages and disadvantages.Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.,26/78,雅思,100,个加分词汇,注意：,vt,表示及物动词，后面需要跟宾语,背诵时候尽可能联络话题来记（比如教育，犯罪，环境），在写作时候也能够依据话题来随时查阅这个词汇表，这么重复熟悉，将很快掌握这个精彩作文词汇,27/78,education,1.parenting n.,家长给小孩教育,a good parenting/a bad parenting,2.schooling n.,学校对学生教育,3 cultivate v.,培养,（,+,宾语）,4.awareness=sense=recognition n.,意识,+of,e.g Cultivate the awareness/sense/recognition of,5 contribute to v,推进,to society(注意,society,是一个抽象名词，不加,the),6.motivation n.,动力,(give sb.to do),7.adapt to v,适应,8.afford something v,提供,sb.sth.,28/78,media,9.prevalent adj.,形容词无处不在，能够代替,everywhere,10 journalists n.,记者,(reporter),11 the press n.,新闻界,(the media),12.coverage n.,报导，动词是,cover,e.g The coverage of an event,13 misleading adj.,有误导性,13.dependable adj.,可靠,E.g misleading/dependable commercials/advertisements,虚假,/,可靠广告,14 up-to-the-minute adj.,非常及时,coverage of,29/78,Technology,15.transform vt,改变，代替,change,Transformation/transformer,16 advance v&n,发展,(advancement,development),17.a staggering rate n,惊人速度,18.Information overload n.,信息爆炸,19 enhance vt,提升，增强,(=improve),efficiency/the cityscape(,改进市容）,20 innovations n,创新，创造（,=invention,）,21.technological adj,科技,advancement/innovations,22 telecommunications n,远程通讯,30/78,Government,bat=tackle=resolve=address vt,处理,(+,宾语）,How should I address you?,（口语）,24 alleviate=ease vt.,减轻，缓解,the traffic jam.,25 invest in=allocate money to v,对,投资,26 authorities n,当局,(government),The,27 ban=forbid=prohibit vt,禁止,Strictly,28 scrutinise vt,监督,(monitor),29 administer=regulate vt,管理,(manage),30 tax revenue n,税收,31 obligation n,责任,(responsibility),31/78,Tourism,32 broaden ones horizons v开阔人眼界,在作文里面泛指 一个人 最好用,one/ones,33 conflicts n,冲突,clashes,34 promote vt,促进,Limit restrict,限制,35 local/local residents=local inhabitants n,当地居民,36 mutual understanding n,相互了解,37 enrich ones experience v,丰富人经历,32/78,languages,38.the proliferation of n,大量扩散,大量出现（比如英语，互联网，环境污染等）,39 plays a dominant role in v,在,占统治地位,40 go extinct v,灭绝,die out,41 lesser-known languages n,小语种,42 the widespread use of n,广泛使用,33/78,Culture,43 ancestors n,祖先,44 d,e,sc,e,nd,a,nts(,注意拼写,)n,后代,Offspring(,比较近后代，不加,S,）,45 time-honoured n,历史悠久（,it has a long history,）,traditions,46 cultural heritage n,文化遗产,47 cultural diversity n,文化多样性,48 cultural identity n,文化特征,49 ethnic minorities n,少数民族,34/78,发展类,50 the pace of life=the tempo of life n,生活节奏,51 the,gap,between the,urban area,and the rural area n,城镇,差距,52 inferior adj,质量差 （,bad,）,53 facilities n,设施（普通用复数）,Equipment,（指比较小）（普通是,a piece of,）,54 alienated adj,(,人与人之间,),疏远,55 materialistic adj,(,人,),物质化，现实,56 the present situation=the current situation=the status quo n,现实状况,35/78,57 affluent adj,富裕，有钱,(rich),58 impoverished adj,贫穷,59 sweeping trends n,席卷一切时尚,60 synthesize the Asian and Western cultures vt,有机结合东西方文化,61 erode vt,侵蚀（本土文化）,62 universal adj,普遍,63 a double-edged sword n,双刃剑（现有好处也有坏处）,36/78,woman,64 domestic violence n,家庭暴力,65 gender equality n,性别平等,66 discrimination n,歧视,67 an enlightened society n,一个开明社会,68 household chores n,家务事,69 be tied down by v,被,所拖累,37/78,家庭类,70 offspring n,后代（单复数相同，不加,S,）,71 personality clashes n,性格冲突,72 household n,家庭（,=family,）,73 generation gap n,代沟,74 family bonds n,亲情,75 harmony n,友好,harmonious society,38/78,犯罪类,76 crimes=offense=criminal acts n,犯罪,77 commit a crime v,犯罪（动词短语）,78 stringent adj,严厉,79 punishment n,处罚,80 the crime rate=the incidence of crime n,犯罪率,81 rampant adj,猖獗,crime/pollution,82 violate the law v,违法,83 curb v,遏制（犯罪、污染等）,39/78,动物类,84 preserve v,保护,(,某种资源,比如,natural resources,或者,old buildings,），假如保护某人能够用,protect,85 inhumane adj,残酷，不人道（,cruel,）,86 biodiversity n,生物多样性,87 companions n,搭档,88 replacements=alternatives n,替换物（比如化装品试验用动物作替换物而不用人做试验）,89 habitat n,栖息地,90 endangered species n,濒危动物,40/78,环境类,91 sustainable development n,可连续发展,92 exploit natural resources v,开采自然资源,93,the ecosystem(,请大家记住任何,eco-,开头单词都和生态相关,)n,生态系统 （,ecology,）,94 profound impact n,深远影响,95 conserve v,节约，代替,save,96 deteriorate(,不及物动词,)aggravate(,及物动词,)v,假如某种现象本身恶化，就能够说它,deteriorate,假如某种事物造成别现象恶化，就用,aggravate sth.,或者用被动形式,97 discharge v,排放（污染物）,98 consume=deplete v,消耗（资源）,99 eco-friendly adj,有益于环境保护,100 scarcity n,短缺,41/78,复杂句（,6,种关系）,1 cause and effect,因果关系,标志词,1,）表示原因,as,since;,due to,owing to+n.(because),2,）表示结果（,so,）,hence(,所以,),，,thus(,所以,),，,therefore,（所以）（,用在句中）,As a consequence,（作为结果）,As a result,（作为结果）,Consequently,（作为结果）,（用在句首）,3,）,thereby(,以此到达,目标,),（用在句中）,Thereby,后面普通加动名词,E.g(,高分例句）,1 The ecological problems are being,aggravated,;,hence,it is,imperative(=very important),that we take measures(actions)to,curb,the pollution of the environment.,2 The government,should raise the public awareness of,environmental preservation,thereby,promoting,sustainable development and creating a more livable environment.,42/78,2 exemplification,举例关系,标志词,Take,（,n.,）,for example.(,以,为例,),for instance,（比如,）,To illustrate,(,比如,.),As an apt illustration,（作为例证,）,Consider,for example(,以,为例,),E.g,1 The Asian countries are,getting westernized at a staggering rate,.,Take China for example,when youngsters go to the movies,it is common for them to choose Hollywood,blockbusters,（大片）,over domestic films.,2 Animals are humans companions.,To illustrate,dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships.,注意：雅思作文举例不宜过长，利用解释和其带来后果加以证实。,不要写自己个人例子，写含有代表性一群人，社会人等。,43/78,3 comparison and contrast,对比关系,标志词,while/whilst/whereas,（主句和从句对比，句内对比，中间用逗号）,By contrast,（句子间对比，两句话）,1,While/Whilst,modern man,（人类）,leads a stressful life,our ancestors could often,perform,their business in a leisurely fashion.,Perform,：从事某事,2 The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced.,In contrast,their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior,（劣质）,quality.,44/78,4 Concession,让步关系,标志词,Despite/In spite of/Notwithstanding(,尽管,),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,，,(,尽管如此,),（普通放在句首）,Even though(,尽管,)=Although,1,In spite of,the disadvantages that animal experimentation can bring about,many scientists insist on continuing this practice.,2 The government plays a,crucial(very important),role in scientific research;,nonetheless,private companies,hold,certain advantages in,conducting(do/perform,从事）,scientific research.,45/78,5 Supposition,假设论证,标志词,provided that,（假如）（普通跟希望，好结果）,If,（好坏都能够）,E.g,1,Provided that,we can,minimize(reduce)the,pain of test animals,animal experimentation should be continued.,2,If,large companies are moved to the countryside,the,traffic congestion,in cities will be,alleviated(reduce)substantially(obviously),.,46/78,6 Modification,修饰关系,(,定语从句）,标准词,that,who,which,（在雅思作文中，最好,which,前面都有逗号）,E.g,1,In this day and age,we have a,proliferation,（扩散，大量）,of buildings,that,look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.,2 Today,teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies,which,has disturbed and alarmed,（警觉）,many adults.,47/78,基础句型,前进类,1,benefit from,People who look for information can benefit from the,amazing,（,staggering,）,development of the Internet.,（经典,6,分句子）,2,invest in,The medical facilities in the rural area are still not very developed;therefor