高三书面表达复习——慰问信、安慰信.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,慰问信,1.,慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。,2.,慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。,3.,内容常包括：,对不幸事件表示同情,进行安慰和帮助,鼓励其努力,再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。,表示“惊悉”,1.Im very sorry to,hear of,sth.,2.Im very sorry to hear,that,3.I regret to hear,that,4.Im shocked to hear,that,5.I cannot tell you how sad I felt when I was told,表示“如果用我之处，请别犹豫”,1.If you want me to do anything,do not hesitate to let me know.,2.If I can be of any assistance to you,I hope you will let me know at once.=help,3.I would be delighted to serve you to best of my ability.,4.I shall be delighted if I can do anything for you.,表示愿望,1.I hope that by the time this letter reaches you,youll be feeling much better.,2.Wish you speedy recovery.,愿你早日康复。,3.We hope you will have a speedy quick recovery.,4.I know you will be strong and brave,for the sake of,the children,为了,5.go through the difficulty,渡过难关,Dear Phil,Im sorry to learn about from the Internet that your hometown was striken by the tornado the day before yesterday.According to the video of the,report,the tornado was so strong that it brought about a lot of losses.Many houses were destroyed and worse still,many people were injured or even killed.,Seeing the disaster,I have been worried about you and your family.Im anxious to know your present situations.Please tell me what you experienced these days.I know that help was already arrived,I hope that everything is all right for you.,I am looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,课堂练习,假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风袭击，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为班长给正在抗洪的他写一封慰问信，要点如下：,1.,对该同学表示关心。,2.,向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和补习。,3.,表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Wang Gang,Were so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins,.Were filled with deep sorrow.Please convey my sympathy to your family.Thinking about your present situation,we cannot wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I,as a monitor,on behalf of our class,express our most sincere pity and care for you.,Besides,we make a donation of some money,expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.We believe that with the help of so many kind people,a better house can be rebuilt.Finally,were all hoping youll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you.,Best wishes!,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,课外作业,假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音,(The Voice of China),比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下：,1.,表示难过和理解。,2.,失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。,3.,勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Li Ming,I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year.I quite understand how you feel now.You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault,I am sure.However,as we know,failure is the mother of success.I do hope you wont lose heart and will get ready to try again.,Still you have,many more chances to try for you are so young.Fate,only can be changed by working hard,so if you,go on practising,singing,I am sure you will succeed next year.,Best wishes!,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,Dear Smith,Hearing that you failed in Chinese Proficiency Test,I am deeply concerned about it.,It is generally believed that failure is the mother of success.I do hope you wont lose heart and not be too depressed in order to get ready to try again.I am sure that you will succeed sooner or later as long as you keep on studying.,If you want me to do anything,do not hesitate to let me know.You can call me or send me e-mails.A little package of books about the test has been sent to you,which will be helpful for you.,Looking forward to hearing good news from you.,Yours,Li Hua,常见错误：,1.you dont sad.,you must very sad.,2.you failure the reason why is that,3.Dont worry about.,4.Failure is a mother of success.,5.believe yourself.,6.you have not enter finals me fell reason not only you no excellent but also you enemy lucky best7.you cant get into the finals in the Vioce of China competion.,改正：,1.you dont sad.Dont be sad.,you must very sad.you must be very sad.,2.you failure the reason why is that,the reason why you failed is that,3.Dont worry about.,Dont worry about it./Dont worry.,4.Failure is,a,mother of success.the,5believe yourself.Believe in yourself.,改正：,6.you have not enter finals me fell reason not only you no excellent but also you enemy lucky best.,I think the reason why you cant enter the finals is not that you are good enough but the competition is very fierce.,7.you cant get into thefinals in the Vioce of China competion.,you cant get into the fianls of the Vioce of China.,you cant get into the final competion.,8.I am have,/I am understand.,9.you will win in the next year.,10.you failure in a final,11.failure dont you make it.,12.you sing is well.,13.I am very understand your mood.,14.I looking forward to hear from you.,15.Dear Li ming,8.I am have,/I am understand.,I have/I understand,9.you will win in the next year.,you will win next year.,10.you failure in a final,you fail to enter the finals.,/you fail in the fianls.,11.failure dont you make it.,It is not your fault.,12.you sing is well.,your song is nice.,I feel well.,我觉得身体好多了。,13.I am very understand your mood.,I can understand your feeling./,I know how you feel.,14.I looking forward to hear from you.,I am looking forward to hearing from you.,/Looking forward to hearing from you.,15.Dear Li ming,Dear Li Ming,姓和名首字母大写,Xi Jinping,